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good novel...................don't drop...................................................................................................................
I very much like this story l, but author-san i have a question. if this is a translation what is the the original version of this story ? can you send a link? S.V.P
Its ok story. With Warcraft lore in the story. But you destroy world power balance totally. And try and comedy tag to story;). For me god story for kill time
PLEASE KEEP THIS IN FANFIC THE NOVEL IS SO GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND DON'T LET THE HATERS GET TO YOU ksksksjsksjsnzjzjzjzjzjsjsjzjzjzjzjzjz
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Since this is a translation work, can you or anyone please tell me where i can find the raws? translator-senpai?‐------------------------------
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So far it's good but i want him to show his power that his Kingdom isn't weak, that way humans won't be so full of themselves as shown in that chapter where one of them seemed interested in Elf slavery
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I like the story and I hope author San won't drop it now time for exp I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
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This book is in the wrong section this the fanfic section not the novel section but great book other wise.
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i love the novel please continue it and try to release two chapters per day or big chapters it is very good and going on a good pace cant wait for new chapter . Ps. dont loose your motivation and abandon the novel
nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now....
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sayang sekali bahwa novel ini didropped, padahal Novel ini sangat menarik, dan jujur saya menikmati bab bab dicerita ini, seakan saya sendiri yang mengalami petualangan si MC
good novel...................don't drop...................................................................................................................
I very much like this story l, but author-san i have a question. if this is a translation what is the the original version of this story ? can you send a link? S.V.P
Its ok story. With Warcraft lore in the story. But you destroy world power balance totally. And try and comedy tag to story;). For me god story for kill time
PLEASE KEEP THIS IN FANFIC THE NOVEL IS SO GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND DON'T LET THE HATERS GET TO YOU ksksksjsksjsnzjzjzjzjzjsjsjzjzjzjzjzjz
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Since this is a translation work, can you or anyone please tell me where i can find the raws? translator-senpai?‐------------------------------
.................------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So far it's good but i want him to show his power that his Kingdom isn't weak, that way humans won't be so full of themselves as shown in that chapter where one of them seemed interested in Elf slavery
I love your story, they MC is excellent and i'm an agahta fan. I like the background of the world you write about. I'm interested in seeing how in develops in more chapters. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😂
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I like the story and I hope author San won't drop it now time for exp I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
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This book is in the wrong section this the fanfic section not the novel section but great book other wise.
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i love the novel please continue it and try to release two chapters per day or big chapters it is very good and going on a good pace cant wait for new chapter . Ps. dont loose your motivation and abandon the novel
nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now.... nice novel till now....
Its funny. For me at least. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
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