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Shameless 5 star review! I really like how you write the characters and their BGs, and It's Hololive what could possibly go wrong! The only problem I could think of is the update schedule, but then again writing isn't easy, and how dark i could say the story is. I was reading for Holo live but stayed for the overall plot!
A very interesting and different fanfic abou Hololive. Its one of the most serious I read and I love it, the caracters have a unique backstory each one of the, and the MC is vert interesting to say the least. There is only one thing that confuse me: The characters have their "powers"/cualities of their avatar? Until now ita serms that they are the ones behind the avatar, but somethings made me belive otherwise. For example the MC is from other world, there is a unknown god and the spirit thing. So it wouldnt be strange for example Fubuki a fox-girl. But again, Mio is a human (apparently) so it means that Fubuki would be human. And to add to the confusion Coco is sometimes reffered as " dragon". This question is more to know what to expect from the fanfic that to make theories, because is confusing me a lot.
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author, may i know your twitter so that i can follow you, BIG THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER❤️........................... ... ........................
A story in which the characters are not stones without their emotions, which has an interesting plot, one of the stories that allows me to brighten up my boring life (I apologize in advance for the possible illiteracy of this review, since I am not a native English speaker).
ok, first time doing this. but this story is too good not to leave a review. the characters are from hololive. but the author is not afraid to branch away and build an amazing story. writing quality is superb IMO, but as someone like me with English as my second language. I'm not confident in giving a good review on the writing quality. the story development is great. it keeps the reader guessing and theorizing what's happening. never have I ever in the time I'm reading this felt bored at the characters or the story. but if I want to nitpick, the start might get you a little confused about what is happening. but I kinda liked it, it makes you wonder and guess what happened to the characters. it sucks you in and makes you interested and invested in events that are happening throughout the journey. anyways, the review is getting long rn. I recommend you to at least read the first few chapters and decide for yourself whether to invest in the story.
Writing Quality [★★★★★] Story Development [★★★★★] Character Design [★★★★★] Updating Stability [★★★★★] World Background [★★★★★] > just one word...Amazing
Rushia is not pettan right? ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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(chapter 20) came for the #fluff #comedy and #romance to relax before going to bed, but got character with suicidal tendencies, depression and character with terminal illness. perhaps the story is rly good but with these tags in my opinion its a depressing 1 Star ....
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Well the story is really good, and the plot development is so unexpected, I wonder what the anemachi's past was like... Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Hey author-san! everything on this novel is written well so far so I'm will reading the rest also I hope you doesn't dropped this and keep a good work,have a good day!
While the stability of updates is less than desired it is still more than most other authors and besides the occasional grammar mistake I find this book a very enjoyable read and absolutly recommend any person in the rabbit hole to read this.
Disgusting, 2 5 stars from author and gender bender hololive is stupid W Should do it not genderbender and in holostar or whatever they call it
Alright, I haven't read it yet but... Look at my name. I think you know why I give this a 5 stars. Anyway, I am very sorry if other readers find this review very biased. However, this has to be done.
The story starts normally but it gradually paced out to be a surprise to me. Its bold, new and refreshing to read. There may be some grammar mistakes here and there but it is worth the read.
well i really found this fanfic cool i'm even a little anxious to see the interactions between hololive members the only problem i find is the updating of the chapters that take a little longer is not that problematic, i'm also very curious about the mc's past as it seems to be something pretty serious but leaving that aside I hope you don't drop this fanfic I myself had never been interested in a hololive fanfic before like this one
This is posted on the day when Coco has announce her graduation from Hololive. Let us all give our blessing to Coco for her future path and dreams, and wish he all the best. Do remember to be respectful and not to spread any speculation regarding the reasons behind it, let us all wish her off with a smile. Will release a few more chapter this few days as tribute to Coco, and wish you all the best too!
please more updates :D...........................................................................................................................................
I really don't expect something like this as a fellow simp i will give five star just because of YAHOO best girl............................
i havent read it but seeing it us a hololive fanfic its a blessing to me uwaahhhh❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Truly love this story I just got caught up on the Holo live story KFP( Kiaras Fried Phoenix ) which is also pretty good would recomend and I hope you update soon
Hololive = 5 star to all \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥
I tried to write a review about how this story is deeper/darker than expected and I really like it, but that didn't really work out so I just want to say that I really like this and can't wait for more. Also can feel a lot of wholesome moments coming in the future.
ヘ( ^o^)ノ\(^_^ ) I like the fanfic so far .................................................................................................................Yagoo....................................................................great..........................................fanfic........................................................so..............................................................................far....................
I find it hilarious that the MC was reincarnated as Anemachi. There’s so much potential for this fic going foward and I’m excited to see where things go in the future! Good luck, Author-sama!
A FF about Hololive boy this is 5 Star hundred percent The Writing Quality:Pretty good The Character Design:Good The World Background:Good Story Development:Good (tho chapter still few so it might chage) Update stability: Decent
A thread for everyone to discuss plot about this book! (And also I'm one review away from showing it so why not) Feel free to state your opinion about this book and make you guess on how the plot will progress~
Spoiler de révélation Shameless 5 star review! I really like how you write the characters and their BGs, and It's Hololive what could possibly go wrong! The only problem I could think of is the update schedule, but then again writing isn't easy, and how dark i could say the story is. I was reading for Holo live but stayed for the overall plot!
A very interesting and different fanfic abou Hololive. Its one of the most serious I read and I love it, the caracters have a unique backstory each one of the, and the MC is vert interesting to say the least. There is only one thing that confuse me: The characters have their "powers"/cualities of their avatar? Until now ita serms that they are the ones behind the avatar, but somethings made me belive otherwise. For example the MC is from other world, there is a unknown god and the spirit thing. So it wouldnt be strange for example Fubuki a fox-girl. But again, Mio is a human (apparently) so it means that Fubuki would be human. And to add to the confusion Coco is sometimes reffered as " dragon". This question is more to know what to expect from the fanfic that to make theories, because is confusing me a lot.
Spoiler de révélation author, may i know your twitter so that i can follow you, BIG THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER❤️........................... ... ........................
A story in which the characters are not stones without their emotions, which has an interesting plot, one of the stories that allows me to brighten up my boring life (I apologize in advance for the possible illiteracy of this review, since I am not a native English speaker).
ok, first time doing this. but this story is too good not to leave a review. the characters are from hololive. but the author is not afraid to branch away and build an amazing story. writing quality is superb IMO, but as someone like me with English as my second language. I'm not confident in giving a good review on the writing quality. the story development is great. it keeps the reader guessing and theorizing what's happening. never have I ever in the time I'm reading this felt bored at the characters or the story. but if I want to nitpick, the start might get you a little confused about what is happening. but I kinda liked it, it makes you wonder and guess what happened to the characters. it sucks you in and makes you interested and invested in events that are happening throughout the journey. anyways, the review is getting long rn. I recommend you to at least read the first few chapters and decide for yourself whether to invest in the story.
Writing Quality [★★★★★] Story Development [★★★★★] Character Design [★★★★★] Updating Stability [★★★★★] World Background [★★★★★] > just one word...Amazing
Rushia is not pettan right? ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Spoiler de révélation (chapter 20) came for the #fluff #comedy and #romance to relax before going to bed, but got character with suicidal tendencies, depression and character with terminal illness. perhaps the story is rly good but with these tags in my opinion its a depressing 1 Star ....
Spoiler de révélation 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well the story is really good, and the plot development is so unexpected, I wonder what the anemachi's past was like... Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Hey author-san! everything on this novel is written well so far so I'm will reading the rest also I hope you doesn't dropped this and keep a good work,have a good day!
While the stability of updates is less than desired it is still more than most other authors and besides the occasional grammar mistake I find this book a very enjoyable read and absolutly recommend any person in the rabbit hole to read this.
Disgusting, 2 5 stars from author and gender bender hololive is stupid W Should do it not genderbender and in holostar or whatever they call it
Alright, I haven't read it yet but... Look at my name. I think you know why I give this a 5 stars. Anyway, I am very sorry if other readers find this review very biased. However, this has to be done.
The story starts normally but it gradually paced out to be a surprise to me. Its bold, new and refreshing to read. There may be some grammar mistakes here and there but it is worth the read.
well i really found this fanfic cool i'm even a little anxious to see the interactions between hololive members the only problem i find is the updating of the chapters that take a little longer is not that problematic, i'm also very curious about the mc's past as it seems to be something pretty serious but leaving that aside I hope you don't drop this fanfic I myself had never been interested in a hololive fanfic before like this one
This is posted on the day when Coco has announce her graduation from Hololive. Let us all give our blessing to Coco for her future path and dreams, and wish he all the best. Do remember to be respectful and not to spread any speculation regarding the reasons behind it, let us all wish her off with a smile. Will release a few more chapter this few days as tribute to Coco, and wish you all the best too!
please more updates :D...........................................................................................................................................
I really don't expect something like this as a fellow simp i will give five star just because of YAHOO best girl............................
i havent read it but seeing it us a hololive fanfic its a blessing to me uwaahhhh❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Truly love this story I just got caught up on the Holo live story KFP( Kiaras Fried Phoenix ) which is also pretty good would recomend and I hope you update soon
Hololive = 5 star to all \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥
I tried to write a review about how this story is deeper/darker than expected and I really like it, but that didn't really work out so I just want to say that I really like this and can't wait for more. Also can feel a lot of wholesome moments coming in the future.
ヘ( ^o^)ノ\(^_^ ) I like the fanfic so far .................................................................................................................Yagoo....................................................................great..........................................fanfic........................................................so..............................................................................far....................
I find it hilarious that the MC was reincarnated as Anemachi. There’s so much potential for this fic going foward and I’m excited to see where things go in the future! Good luck, Author-sama!
A FF about Hololive boy this is 5 Star hundred percent The Writing Quality:Pretty good The Character Design:Good The World Background:Good Story Development:Good (tho chapter still few so it might chage) Update stability: Decent
A thread for everyone to discuss plot about this book! (And also I'm one review away from showing it so why not) Feel free to state your opinion about this book and make you guess on how the plot will progress~
Spoiler de révélation