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MC became what an average Asian household parent imagine their children should be able to do .
I loved this book. You ended at a awkward time though he never made the spaceship and never got those aliens home. So I would love it if you ether made a second book or continued this one. ☺️
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It was a fun short story to binge read. I wonder if it’ll be picked up for more chapter translations?
Unfinished and inconsistent plot with no actual interesting character development
I'm at chapter 124 and I like it so far at the start you might not like it but after the military pick mc up and go to the military thing it starts to get good. I fell like it could have had more chapters because space travel in all that good stuff. I say try it untill you get to the point is at the military academy and he becomes a professor in all you know what I mean when you get to that point in time. Mc in my opinion is good hearted and calm,
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4 stars to anything translated. . . . [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Well, It's the end. The author just left us hanging. I think the author dropped this story. So, if anyone planning to read this then don't. It just a waste of your time.
All I can say is this was an amazing read just that the ending was kinda bad I mean the ending was rushed just say you dropped it if you cant continue dont say completed because that doesn't look like a completed book to me
If you overlook a few grammar errors or inconsistencies, so far a few and ignore the fact that the title is worded weirdly its a decent novel.
A fresh piece of pie for all technological system lovers. The only downside is that the author has no knowledge of American culture and seeks to advocate for Chinese supremacy propaganda very subtly. Americans don't use terms like "God Mc is working hard" "upstairs " "I want to bear your children" and so on. They definitely don't eat fried dough sticks for breakfast. That's the only bad point till now. (ps i have read it till ch 68 only)
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This novel is not complet. I ll review it again when its truly Complet. But.... Looking at the release time maybe it wont continue anymore. Thanks for the Novel. The story is quite good and educative.
So this novel is supposed to take place in the United States but it seems like the author doesnt really know anything about the United States or how our government or economy works. Also either the Author rushed the ending of the novel or the translator did because they didnt want to continue it, either way the novels ending was lackluster at best.
One of the worst books I have ever read. The entire story is unrealistic. Its like a 13 year old from china is trying to write about the US government. (Which is essentially what it is). So many things happen that would NEVER happen and make no sense. There is so much more I could right, but I would just get madder, especially considering I LIVE in the US, so Im just going to shut up.
1/3/1/1/1 = 1.4 Ch 1: He should have been Escorted out of the testing Room for the disturbance and then end of story. What in the funk is the translator doing?
The story is incomplete and rushed. There are several plot points that was not used and ignored. Overall, if your looking for a good story that has a good ending the this is not it. if you plan to just read for a bit, this might be for you.
why ddi this end at 150 when it has 500+ chapters in mtl ...............................................................................................
Each chapter is just the MC stroking their own ego, its fine for like 40 or so chapters but there is no development beyond that.
What is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird. What is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird. vWhat is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird. What is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird.
I read this novel in Vipnovel for free ,(~_~)but I think that the ending was rushed, it's like when will he builds Mecha for Atlantic people?And also, he promised that he would successfully created a space warship in one year in live boardcast ʕ•ε•ʔ(I forgot what it called), but after that, he's straying from his objective and help his country build a nuclear submarine in two months＼(￣▽￣;)／ You know what ?I'm confused with this novel
There might be an interesting story in there but it is soo badly written that I can't immerse myself at all. It needs a complete rewrite and the author needs, I repeat, NEEDS to do a better job researching the country they are setting the story in. Using incorrect references breaks immersion and ruins the story. The author needs to be more consistent with the world view. There are many more flaws but I'm unwilling to write an essay just to point them all out. I don't know if this is a westernization of a Chinese book as some suggest but if it is I strongly recommend having a westerner do the rewrite or at the very least have a westerner proof read the work.
Good story, wont say anything about it as I cant be bothered to click the spoiler warning. But good story. There were some parts that I felt that could have been done better, as sometimes things felt forced but whatever, ive seen much worse. Would definately reccomend reading if you have an inter est in thia kind of genre.
This novel was undoubtedly one of the most boring novel ive read. Dont know how many time this novel knocked me out, but it was atleast 6 times. Thats how boring this novel was.
This novel is stupid. Everything seems more Asian than American even though it's based in America. Lots of inconsistencies. The ending was too abrupt. it just ended with "He got a First class merit but no one knew because it was confidential." ??? what kind of ending was that? they just rounded up an entire arc in TWO paragraphs and said "ya we done with this story".???? Problems with this story are listed here. 1) Asian culture in an American setting. eg. Calling people aunts and uncles and also calling others brother or sister (Americans just call people-besides parents and grandparents- by their names regardless of age) Also, terms like Qi etc were used often. 2) Repetition 3) There's no flow. No connection between different arcs. 4) the balance of gaining points or rewards is tilted. MC did nothing besides reading and all reading materials was provided on a silver platter (including confidential info) 5) Everyone just trusted him without hesitation for no actual reason. He just said "Believe me." and they'd just do. 5) The anti gravity arc was simply just cut out. the majority of the book was of him "reaching for the stars". Instead of working on it after making a whole research laboratory, he just did some side quests and the book ended. 6) What about Atlantis??? there was a whole civilization dying there and you just left for the side quests. Was making a submarine so important? Just to showoff to the Russians? 7) MC has no remorse. He just bombed a whole area in Mexico. 8) Lots of white supremacy and unfounded nationalism. After all that happened IRL to America, (BLM, police aggression, etc) this whole book just triggered me. 9) Terrible writing and grammar. Why so many exclamation marks? 10) I don't even know what the MC looks like. I read the entire book and no mention of his eye or hair colour. 11) Time periods was unrealistic. it takes time to draft up something whether digitally or by hand (at least a week or more) yet he just finished building a whole new working submarine in 2 weeks and also got it tested and all. (bro. who is the one designing and labelling the stuff? -_-) 12) He just forgets people he made promises to. What happened to that guy who found his talent? His friends? Mavis or whatever her name was? what about the researchers in the labs? Those professors he poached? I'm done writing .
Written by someone who knows nothing about the military. This is not very realistic. Make some kid a general is just nonsense. Then he received the Medal of Honor for non combat activities which is impossible. That's when I gave up on this series.
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this is one of the most trashiest novels i have ever read so far. the only good thing about this novel is the mc's cheat, a system that can give him points for reading and listening to any kind of knowledge, and he is able to purchase technology, power ups in xianxia style, and increase his comprehantion to some degree. this rest of the novel is utterly trash. 1. the story happens in US, but all departments and people's values and actions are just like in china. 2. every person around mc is reacting as if some god is in front of them instead of a normal mc with a cheat, aplauding and supporting the mc's every action like he was a boxer in a heavy wight ring (wresling) 3. every other character then mc is only there to rise his ego or something there are more things to be annoyied about, but im just too lazy to add them here without giving spoilers. as of ch 130, there is no love interest at least.
Finished reading this and it seems like it was dropped before it could be finished. which is Unfortunate because i liked the story. i wish there was more to it.
what the heck man? where are the chapters after 161? what about Interstellar spaceship ?? please continue this novel, i seriously and wholeheartedly like it✨💯.
MC became what an average Asian household parent imagine their children should be able to do .
I loved this book. You ended at a awkward time though he never made the spaceship and never got those aliens home. So I would love it if you ether made a second book or continued this one. ☺️
Spoiler de révélation It was a fun short story to binge read. I wonder if it’ll be picked up for more chapter translations?
Unfinished and inconsistent plot with no actual interesting character development
I'm at chapter 124 and I like it so far at the start you might not like it but after the military pick mc up and go to the military thing it starts to get good. I fell like it could have had more chapters because space travel in all that good stuff. I say try it untill you get to the point is at the military academy and he becomes a professor in all you know what I mean when you get to that point in time. Mc in my opinion is good hearted and calm,
Spoiler de révélation 4 stars to anything translated. . . . [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Well, It's the end. The author just left us hanging. I think the author dropped this story. So, if anyone planning to read this then don't. It just a waste of your time.
All I can say is this was an amazing read just that the ending was kinda bad I mean the ending was rushed just say you dropped it if you cant continue dont say completed because that doesn't look like a completed book to me
If you overlook a few grammar errors or inconsistencies, so far a few and ignore the fact that the title is worded weirdly its a decent novel.
A fresh piece of pie for all technological system lovers. The only downside is that the author has no knowledge of American culture and seeks to advocate for Chinese supremacy propaganda very subtly. Americans don't use terms like "God Mc is working hard" "upstairs " "I want to bear your children" and so on. They definitely don't eat fried dough sticks for breakfast. That's the only bad point till now. (ps i have read it till ch 68 only)
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This novel is not complet. I ll review it again when its truly Complet. But.... Looking at the release time maybe it wont continue anymore. Thanks for the Novel. The story is quite good and educative.
So this novel is supposed to take place in the United States but it seems like the author doesnt really know anything about the United States or how our government or economy works. Also either the Author rushed the ending of the novel or the translator did because they didnt want to continue it, either way the novels ending was lackluster at best.
One of the worst books I have ever read. The entire story is unrealistic. Its like a 13 year old from china is trying to write about the US government. (Which is essentially what it is). So many things happen that would NEVER happen and make no sense. There is so much more I could right, but I would just get madder, especially considering I LIVE in the US, so Im just going to shut up.
1/3/1/1/1 = 1.4 Ch 1: He should have been Escorted out of the testing Room for the disturbance and then end of story. What in the funk is the translator doing?
The story is incomplete and rushed. There are several plot points that was not used and ignored. Overall, if your looking for a good story that has a good ending the this is not it. if you plan to just read for a bit, this might be for you.
why ddi this end at 150 when it has 500+ chapters in mtl ...............................................................................................
Each chapter is just the MC stroking their own ego, its fine for like 40 or so chapters but there is no development beyond that.
What is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird. What is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird. vWhat is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird. What is two inches tall, can hover in mid-air, and flies in every direction including backwards? It’s not an insect. The answer is the bee hummingbird.
I read this novel in Vipnovel for free ,(~_~)but I think that the ending was rushed, it's like when will he builds Mecha for Atlantic people?And also, he promised that he would successfully created a space warship in one year in live boardcast ʕ•ε•ʔ(I forgot what it called), but after that, he's straying from his objective and help his country build a nuclear submarine in two months＼(￣▽￣;)／ You know what ?I'm confused with this novel
There might be an interesting story in there but it is soo badly written that I can't immerse myself at all. It needs a complete rewrite and the author needs, I repeat, NEEDS to do a better job researching the country they are setting the story in. Using incorrect references breaks immersion and ruins the story. The author needs to be more consistent with the world view. There are many more flaws but I'm unwilling to write an essay just to point them all out. I don't know if this is a westernization of a Chinese book as some suggest but if it is I strongly recommend having a westerner do the rewrite or at the very least have a westerner proof read the work.
Good story, wont say anything about it as I cant be bothered to click the spoiler warning. But good story. There were some parts that I felt that could have been done better, as sometimes things felt forced but whatever, ive seen much worse. Would definately reccomend reading if you have an inter est in thia kind of genre.
This novel was undoubtedly one of the most boring novel ive read. Dont know how many time this novel knocked me out, but it was atleast 6 times. Thats how boring this novel was.
This novel is stupid. Everything seems more Asian than American even though it's based in America. Lots of inconsistencies. The ending was too abrupt. it just ended with "He got a First class merit but no one knew because it was confidential." ??? what kind of ending was that? they just rounded up an entire arc in TWO paragraphs and said "ya we done with this story".???? Problems with this story are listed here. 1) Asian culture in an American setting. eg. Calling people aunts and uncles and also calling others brother or sister (Americans just call people-besides parents and grandparents- by their names regardless of age) Also, terms like Qi etc were used often. 2) Repetition 3) There's no flow. No connection between different arcs. 4) the balance of gaining points or rewards is tilted. MC did nothing besides reading and all reading materials was provided on a silver platter (including confidential info) 5) Everyone just trusted him without hesitation for no actual reason. He just said "Believe me." and they'd just do. 5) The anti gravity arc was simply just cut out. the majority of the book was of him "reaching for the stars". Instead of working on it after making a whole research laboratory, he just did some side quests and the book ended. 6) What about Atlantis??? there was a whole civilization dying there and you just left for the side quests. Was making a submarine so important? Just to showoff to the Russians? 7) MC has no remorse. He just bombed a whole area in Mexico. 8) Lots of white supremacy and unfounded nationalism. After all that happened IRL to America, (BLM, police aggression, etc) this whole book just triggered me. 9) Terrible writing and grammar. Why so many exclamation marks? 10) I don't even know what the MC looks like. I read the entire book and no mention of his eye or hair colour. 11) Time periods was unrealistic. it takes time to draft up something whether digitally or by hand (at least a week or more) yet he just finished building a whole new working submarine in 2 weeks and also got it tested and all. (bro. who is the one designing and labelling the stuff? -_-) 12) He just forgets people he made promises to. What happened to that guy who found his talent? His friends? Mavis or whatever her name was? what about the researchers in the labs? Those professors he poached? I'm done writing .
Written by someone who knows nothing about the military. This is not very realistic. Make some kid a general is just nonsense. Then he received the Medal of Honor for non combat activities which is impossible. That's when I gave up on this series.
Spoiler de révélation this is one of the most trashiest novels i have ever read so far. the only good thing about this novel is the mc's cheat, a system that can give him points for reading and listening to any kind of knowledge, and he is able to purchase technology, power ups in xianxia style, and increase his comprehantion to some degree. this rest of the novel is utterly trash. 1. the story happens in US, but all departments and people's values and actions are just like in china. 2. every person around mc is reacting as if some god is in front of them instead of a normal mc with a cheat, aplauding and supporting the mc's every action like he was a boxer in a heavy wight ring (wresling) 3. every other character then mc is only there to rise his ego or something there are more things to be annoyied about, but im just too lazy to add them here without giving spoilers. as of ch 130, there is no love interest at least.
Finished reading this and it seems like it was dropped before it could be finished. which is Unfortunate because i liked the story. i wish there was more to it.
what the heck man? where are the chapters after 161? what about Interstellar spaceship ?? please continue this novel, i seriously and wholeheartedly like it✨💯.