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I am seriously in love with this book.... I love how so much of characters and emotions you are portraying author.... I love your work so much.... Keep it up.:)
The story gives me BIG fairy tale vibes (The genre not the anime :))))) The plot really make you feel for the characters and the attention the detail is done amazingly. Highly recommend!
Woah. This is wonderful. An amazing work. There is a steady progression of the story. The female protagonist is a strong character.Keep up the good work
The storyline is so exceptional, the character development is awesome And the general settings is superb i love this book, think I have found a new awesome book
I appreciate the translation of the main characters on the first chapter. The Genesis piece of the creation of the world aswell as the Five elements was well written and a great introduction for a prologue. The novel itself has great potential the ideas are fresh from the mind and they seem to grow well through the chapters. A great read
Everything about this books makes it interesting to read. I got hooked the minute I finished reading the synopsis. The story development and the character description, everything is on point. incredible storyline that doesn't let you put down the book.
Not many people start off a story by introducing many of the characters. It was new to me but I kinda liked it. and then when you started your next chapter with the creation of the world, I just knew things were about to get real
wow. the plot is interesting; a fantasy world filled with magic. like reading harry potter story, there's even a flying broom mentioned in the story🤣🤣🤣 highly recommandable. good job, author.
An adventurous female lead, and incredible style of writing, an exciting story with action and adventure. A perfect story that won't dissapoint you no matter how much you read it! Great work!!!!
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You are such an imaganative story teller. You gave created an exciting world with lots of interesting characters. This book is a useful escapism for anyone bored and in need of an adventure.
OMG!! It's so good..!!! I'm loving it so far. Nice plot and excellent writing 👏👏 It's one of my favorite genre. I'm gald that the protagonist is a female. Seriously, I have no words. Keep writing...😊💛
A very nice write up. It has lots of mystery which makes it interesting to read. I recommend this book to anyone who is in love with Fantasy books. Great work btw.
I liked your writing, it makes me keep reading without stopping. The author knew how to develop the story well, and the character design. I'm not one to read fantasy stories but this one I highly recommend.
The story isn't what one would say new since there had been many novels similar to this but oh boy is the writing great! The story is well written, characters, background and plot are all top tier. The romance and suspense is also amazing and I hope for more chapters to come
At first it reminded me of Harry Potter. there is a modern world setting and a magical world. The first chapters made me feel like I stepped into a fairy tale world. I like it because the Protagonist is a girl and she goes on an adventure. I don't know if there will be romance? it's just that I feel the flow might be a little fast. Overall I like it! Ganbatte Author san!
Great writing, fellow author. The plot is on point and the suspense just keeps me moving for more. This is actually one of the best novels I have read so far...Keep up the good work.
The progression of this novel was so unexpected. I loved the way that the author portrayed the beautiful life and devastating tragedies of these special people.
I have always loved the stories with female Protagonists and them being adventurous. This story is exactly what i need. i loved it. The plot, background and the character design is soo unique and good. This one is a good read.
I liked the story and was how the beginning of the story started. The only problem is a few grammar issues besides that it is a really well-writen story.
The first chapter did it for me. I love folklore and fairy tales and this is the closest I have gotten to one in a long time. I'm looking forward to reading Shawna's growth!
I was drawn in by the synopsis for this story and read a few chapters so far. This book is superb! The story was super interesting and intriguing. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story! Good job author!
It was an amazing story, a great experience as a reader! The way the story unfolds in every chapter makes its readers want to read more. I really enjoyed the story! Keep it up, Author✨
Definitely a magnetizing story to say the least, glowing review from me, I will continue reading , great job author 7/10. ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Huh ... Well, what do we have here? Simply great! The plot of the novel caught me with the first chapters and was very entertaining. With pleasure, I will continue reading :D Good job
I had tears in my eyes just reading the prologue......well all I'm saying is that, I'm already hooked to the novel, everything is well written and described making it easy for the readers to read and understand. i wish the author a good luck.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
I just like to say that this novel is super good. Every chapter is becoming more interesting. I will encourage everyone to check this out! I'm loving your writing style~
It was a good book. No words to speak . I am waiting for a update . I was nice love story . I story abt historical love at beginning was nice.
The storyline is interesting and intriguing. The story developed in each chapter. The female protagonist's persona is well defined and structured. The writing style, setting, and dialogues are perfectly flawless. Highly recommended!! Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work, author!!
I am seriously in love with this book.... I love how so much of characters and emotions you are portraying author.... I love your work so much.... Keep it up.:)
The story gives me BIG fairy tale vibes (The genre not the anime :))))) The plot really make you feel for the characters and the attention the detail is done amazingly. Highly recommend!
Woah. This is wonderful. An amazing work. There is a steady progression of the story. The female protagonist is a strong character.Keep up the good work
The storyline is so exceptional, the character development is awesome And the general settings is superb i love this book, think I have found a new awesome book
I appreciate the translation of the main characters on the first chapter. The Genesis piece of the creation of the world aswell as the Five elements was well written and a great introduction for a prologue. The novel itself has great potential the ideas are fresh from the mind and they seem to grow well through the chapters. A great read
Everything about this books makes it interesting to read. I got hooked the minute I finished reading the synopsis. The story development and the character description, everything is on point. incredible storyline that doesn't let you put down the book.
Not many people start off a story by introducing many of the characters. It was new to me but I kinda liked it. and then when you started your next chapter with the creation of the world, I just knew things were about to get real
wow. the plot is interesting; a fantasy world filled with magic. like reading harry potter story, there's even a flying broom mentioned in the story🤣🤣🤣 highly recommandable. good job, author.
An adventurous female lead, and incredible style of writing, an exciting story with action and adventure. A perfect story that won't dissapoint you no matter how much you read it! Great work!!!!
Good🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🏽🤟🏼🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
You are such an imaganative story teller. You gave created an exciting world with lots of interesting characters. This book is a useful escapism for anyone bored and in need of an adventure.
OMG!! It's so good..!!! I'm loving it so far. Nice plot and excellent writing 👏👏 It's one of my favorite genre. I'm gald that the protagonist is a female. Seriously, I have no words. Keep writing...😊💛
A very nice write up. It has lots of mystery which makes it interesting to read. I recommend this book to anyone who is in love with Fantasy books. Great work btw.
I liked your writing, it makes me keep reading without stopping. The author knew how to develop the story well, and the character design. I'm not one to read fantasy stories but this one I highly recommend.
The story isn't what one would say new since there had been many novels similar to this but oh boy is the writing great! The story is well written, characters, background and plot are all top tier. The romance and suspense is also amazing and I hope for more chapters to come
At first it reminded me of Harry Potter. there is a modern world setting and a magical world. The first chapters made me feel like I stepped into a fairy tale world. I like it because the Protagonist is a girl and she goes on an adventure. I don't know if there will be romance? it's just that I feel the flow might be a little fast. Overall I like it! Ganbatte Author san!
Great writing, fellow author. The plot is on point and the suspense just keeps me moving for more. This is actually one of the best novels I have read so far...Keep up the good work.
The progression of this novel was so unexpected. I loved the way that the author portrayed the beautiful life and devastating tragedies of these special people.
I have always loved the stories with female Protagonists and them being adventurous. This story is exactly what i need. i loved it. The plot, background and the character design is soo unique and good. This one is a good read.
I liked the story and was how the beginning of the story started. The only problem is a few grammar issues besides that it is a really well-writen story.
The first chapter did it for me. I love folklore and fairy tales and this is the closest I have gotten to one in a long time. I'm looking forward to reading Shawna's growth!
I was drawn in by the synopsis for this story and read a few chapters so far. This book is superb! The story was super interesting and intriguing. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story! Good job author!
It was an amazing story, a great experience as a reader! The way the story unfolds in every chapter makes its readers want to read more. I really enjoyed the story! Keep it up, Author✨
Definitely a magnetizing story to say the least, glowing review from me, I will continue reading , great job author 7/10. ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Huh ... Well, what do we have here? Simply great! The plot of the novel caught me with the first chapters and was very entertaining. With pleasure, I will continue reading :D Good job
I had tears in my eyes just reading the prologue......well all I'm saying is that, I'm already hooked to the novel, everything is well written and described making it easy for the readers to read and understand. i wish the author a good luck.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
I just like to say that this novel is super good. Every chapter is becoming more interesting. I will encourage everyone to check this out! I'm loving your writing style~
It was a good book. No words to speak . I am waiting for a update . I was nice love story . I story abt historical love at beginning was nice.
The storyline is interesting and intriguing. The story developed in each chapter. The female protagonist's persona is well defined and structured. The writing style, setting, and dialogues are perfectly flawless. Highly recommended!! Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work, author!!