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This story is very promising and the writing style of the author is quite good. I love the inner monologues of the mc. However, there are some parts that is questionable (like the twins having consciousness as soon as they were born) but other than that this is a good book. I'm looking forward to this story's development.
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I will soon read more, but I was already charmed by the warm-hearted and practical way the main character approaches things. I like reading about wholesome people like that, and I trust the main character to make (mostly) good decisions. This is a satisfying, emotional story and it's not too full of misery, either. I am interested.
Charming! [img=recommend] ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
STARE AT THE TWINS! LOVE THEM! BE AWED BY THEM! LET THEM CONQUER YOU WITH CUTENESS!! THIS IS A SLICE OF LIFE OF A PREGNANT WOMAN WHO WILL BE LOOKING AFTER HER TWIN BABIES! the life is hard, the journey will be long! But there is rainbow after the rain! LOOK FORWARD TO MY WONDERFUL ARCS IN THIS BOOK! When we say slice of life- I WILL BRING SLICE! OF! LIFE! 😎
Wow, Author Ella! Well done. A great start where Crystal, the MC, is a good daughter and loves her parents, then we get thrown into a fast turn of events. Author does a great job in us understanding what goes on in her mind and she is a STRONG and Level-headed female which is always great. Some writing errors, but easily fixable! It does not detract from this interesting novel! If you are still hesitating, don't! READ IT NOW! <3<3
This story is very promising and the writing style of the author is quite good. I love the inner monologues of the mc. However, there are some parts that is questionable (like the twins having consciousness as soon as they were born) but other than that this is a good book. I'm looking forward to this story's development.
Spoiler de révélation I will soon read more, but I was already charmed by the warm-hearted and practical way the main character approaches things. I like reading about wholesome people like that, and I trust the main character to make (mostly) good decisions. This is a satisfying, emotional story and it's not too full of misery, either. I am interested.
Charming! [img=recommend] ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
STARE AT THE TWINS! LOVE THEM! BE AWED BY THEM! LET THEM CONQUER YOU WITH CUTENESS!! THIS IS A SLICE OF LIFE OF A PREGNANT WOMAN WHO WILL BE LOOKING AFTER HER TWIN BABIES! the life is hard, the journey will be long! But there is rainbow after the rain! LOOK FORWARD TO MY WONDERFUL ARCS IN THIS BOOK! When we say slice of life- I WILL BRING SLICE! OF! LIFE! 😎
Wow, Author Ella! Well done. A great start where Crystal, the MC, is a good daughter and loves her parents, then we get thrown into a fast turn of events. Author does a great job in us understanding what goes on in her mind and she is a STRONG and Level-headed female which is always great. Some writing errors, but easily fixable! It does not detract from this interesting novel! If you are still hesitating, don't! READ IT NOW! <3<3