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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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You wrote an interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. But you better proofreading it again to correct some typos and also review the placement of punctuation marks. You did a good job overall [img=recommend]
You wrote an interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. But you better proofreading it again to correct some typos and also review the placement of punctuation marks. You did a good job overall [img=recommend]