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I really love this books so much, the characters there all have a specific role to play and I really admire lucas
Enjoyable read.Really want to like more but frankly find tiring after a while.Well written but becomes increasingly more silly the further it goes.And the plot effectively becomes a game of wealthy family/ young master wack a mole against a hidden master, with most of the opposing side in need of a of a trip to a psychologist or to cut down on the inbreeding (and yeah I understand this is fiction but come on)
It’s a poorly written amalgamation of just about every current time son in law novel. Bad plot holes that allow poor choices and forced continuous confrontations
Over all a Good book, but alot of times they drag things out. Even when you know Whats going to happen.
I have read the book to a 1000 chapters and the more you progress,the WORSE it becomes.The plot itself is way to REPEATED with the same things.Just talks of powerful families and fights now and then that are way too exaggerated,(even though I get it that the novel itself is a fantasy one).The ROMANCE part too REALLY NEEDS A LOT OF WORK compared to other novels like "accidentally married to the CEO".plus the plot is way too easy to predict
Was a glorious read. Kept you wanting to read more and Event and Characters's flowed with time smoothly. The Beginning the process, the reaction and the ending where more than satisfying.
This was a great story! I loved the way it ended also. No regrets for reading this one!🥰
very interesting, waiting for side story.like what happened to Lana , starcity ,Steele siblings and so on
MC never finds out his mothers real identity and never finds out who his biological father is
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I really enjoyed the story and I'm a little disappointed that it has come to an end but I know stories can't go on forever Either way it was an enjoyable story
What was that ending we explored nothing, not the other 3 generals, nor his father's and mother's background, not the royal families not the Peerless Martial Association, like it was the most rushed ending ever we went from stretching arcs to like a hundred chapters to writing the ending like a high schooler who got bored with the story they were writing so they just ended it,
Excellent plot and character development, satisfying ending albeit a bit simplistic and felt a little forced and premature given the potential of the main character. But to some extent that’s what makes fiction fiction.
amazingly written awesome book!!!! I would have read it all the way thru if I could have!!!!
You have forgotten about this topic in this. 1. Lucas Gray Father and mother background. 2. Ending can be different.
I love this novel so much especially when Lucas came back from calico and when he went to DC with his wife 😌. I just love how he kicks those cocky b*stards and how they plead for mercy in d end 😁
Spoiler de révélation
it's good to read an interesting book a man who doesn't try to be overpowering but he keeps he's humble and down to earth
characters are overrated try more in your next move , but it's still great though
I really love this books so much, the characters there all have a specific role to play and I really admire lucas
Enjoyable read.Really want to like more but frankly find tiring after a while.Well written but becomes increasingly more silly the further it goes.And the plot effectively becomes a game of wealthy family/ young master wack a mole against a hidden master, with most of the opposing side in need of a of a trip to a psychologist or to cut down on the inbreeding (and yeah I understand this is fiction but come on)
It’s a poorly written amalgamation of just about every current time son in law novel. Bad plot holes that allow poor choices and forced continuous confrontations
Over all a Good book, but alot of times they drag things out. Even when you know Whats going to happen.
I have read the book to a 1000 chapters and the more you progress,the WORSE it becomes.The plot itself is way to REPEATED with the same things.Just talks of powerful families and fights now and then that are way too exaggerated,(even though I get it that the novel itself is a fantasy one).The ROMANCE part too REALLY NEEDS A LOT OF WORK compared to other novels like "accidentally married to the CEO".plus the plot is way too easy to predict
Was a glorious read. Kept you wanting to read more and Event and Characters's flowed with time smoothly. The Beginning the process, the reaction and the ending where more than satisfying.
This was a great story! I loved the way it ended also. No regrets for reading this one!🥰
very interesting, waiting for side story.like what happened to Lana , starcity ,Steele siblings and so on
MC never finds out his mothers real identity and never finds out who his biological father is
Spoiler de révélation I really enjoyed the story and I'm a little disappointed that it has come to an end but I know stories can't go on forever Either way it was an enjoyable story
What was that ending we explored nothing, not the other 3 generals, nor his father's and mother's background, not the royal families not the Peerless Martial Association, like it was the most rushed ending ever we went from stretching arcs to like a hundred chapters to writing the ending like a high schooler who got bored with the story they were writing so they just ended it,
Excellent plot and character development, satisfying ending albeit a bit simplistic and felt a little forced and premature given the potential of the main character. But to some extent that’s what makes fiction fiction.
amazingly written awesome book!!!! I would have read it all the way thru if I could have!!!!
You have forgotten about this topic in this. 1. Lucas Gray Father and mother background. 2. Ending can be different.
I love this novel so much especially when Lucas came back from calico and when he went to DC with his wife 😌. I just love how he kicks those cocky b*stards and how they plead for mercy in d end 😁
Spoiler de révélation it's good to read an interesting book a man who doesn't try to be overpowering but he keeps he's humble and down to earth
characters are overrated try more in your next move , but it's still great though