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another great novel....that dies before it even got anywhere .....seriously can no one even finish a novel here....until this is updated it gets a one star
This story makes me giggle at every bit, the carefreeness and the pure ecitement of freedom. This story brings out my love of adventures when I was a kid, you know the ones when you imagine your traveling in a dangerous forest or when your flying high in the sky. Freedom!!!
Don't bother reading until you see updates. Story starts off good and was an enjoyable read. However it looks like this was dropped by author.
another great novel....that dies before it even got anywhere .....seriously can no one even finish a novel here....until this is updated it gets a one star
This story makes me giggle at every bit, the carefreeness and the pure ecitement of freedom. This story brings out my love of adventures when I was a kid, you know the ones when you imagine your traveling in a dangerous forest or when your flying high in the sky. Freedom!!!
Don't bother reading until you see updates. Story starts off good and was an enjoyable read. However it looks like this was dropped by author.