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This... is just insane. I have never seen something done SO bad. Like even if you do something for fun, this is just too much. Like, what the hell is happening in this novel? What is this insane plot, system, and Mc? I don't want to hurt your feelings, author, but this is just too much.
it ended at chapter 36 unfinished and the character design is poor the story development is mediocre the rest is good. But unless you are a fellow cultured individual this novel is not for you.
if you make it so mikasa doesnt lose her long black hair you can have this for insurance
Overall Rating: Subpar/average fanfic. P.S. Why does most if not all AOT/SNK are too focused on smut/romance/r18 or perverted style of writing and poor progression of the story itself?
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At first I was just shocked by the 2 years old and 6 years old doing things, but I tried to ignore it and search for when they are adults, that's when I remembered that those characters won't ever be of legal age and that this whole thing is just disgusting and disturbing.
please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.
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I felt like this was a good but I feel like the characters personality’s were wrong. I hated how he did it with Annie because she wouldn’t have even agreed to train with him.
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zero logic inside of here but if i can stick it in eren's mom, is logic really needed in this novel? .
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We already have the plot of attack on Titan ... But it's our style .. with all perverse and stuff .. I mean it's good to read about characters getting fkd by mc that's reader
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Please keep updating. Your novels are all good. I liked how you expressed the lemon scenes. Hehehe. And the story is all good. Keep up the good work.
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I had seen this fanfic on another site, and I came to look for it myself and it is very good. ........ ...... ........... ...... ....... ....... ....... ...... .......... ..... ....... ......... ........ .. ... .
Author if only you are with isayama AOT can be much more satisfying. Well I request you to please continue this novel and don't left it unfinished.
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Author here, basically this novel is just a novel that i am writing for fun. Ignore the tragedy in the first chapter, and just enjoy......there won’t be netorare, suffering (maybe a little, but not that strong), and some lolicon i guess (if you dont like reading kids to kids kissing then don’t read this fic or just jump to some chapters). chapter releases is not that stable, since I have a job and I can’t focus on doing this cause I need money to live.
This... is just insane. I have never seen something done SO bad. Like even if you do something for fun, this is just too much. Like, what the hell is happening in this novel? What is this insane plot, system, and Mc? I don't want to hurt your feelings, author, but this is just too much.
it ended at chapter 36 unfinished and the character design is poor the story development is mediocre the rest is good. But unless you are a fellow cultured individual this novel is not for you.
if you make it so mikasa doesnt lose her long black hair you can have this for insurance
Overall Rating: Subpar/average fanfic. P.S. Why does most if not all AOT/SNK are too focused on smut/romance/r18 or perverted style of writing and poor progression of the story itself?
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At first I was just shocked by the 2 years old and 6 years old doing things, but I tried to ignore it and search for when they are adults, that's when I remembered that those characters won't ever be of legal age and that this whole thing is just disgusting and disturbing.
please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.please don't drop.
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I felt like this was a good but I feel like the characters personality’s were wrong. I hated how he did it with Annie because she wouldn’t have even agreed to train with him.
Spoiler de révélation [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
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zero logic inside of here but if i can stick it in eren's mom, is logic really needed in this novel? .
Dont stop pliz, need more chapter 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
We already have the plot of attack on Titan ... But it's our style .. with all perverse and stuff .. I mean it's good to read about characters getting fkd by mc that's reader
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Please keep updating. Your novels are all good. I liked how you expressed the lemon scenes. Hehehe. And the story is all good. Keep up the good work.
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I had seen this fanfic on another site, and I came to look for it myself and it is very good. ........ ...... ........... ...... ....... ....... ....... ...... .......... ..... ....... ......... ........ .. ... .
Author if only you are with isayama AOT can be much more satisfying. Well I request you to please continue this novel and don't left it unfinished.
is it wrong to like this novel ? is it wrong to like this novel ? is it wrong to like this novel ? is it wrong to like this novel ? is it wrong to like this novel ?
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Author here, basically this novel is just a novel that i am writing for fun. Ignore the tragedy in the first chapter, and just enjoy......there won’t be netorare, suffering (maybe a little, but not that strong), and some lolicon i guess (if you dont like reading kids to kids kissing then don’t read this fic or just jump to some chapters). chapter releases is not that stable, since I have a job and I can’t focus on doing this cause I need money to live.