Reviews of My life in twilight AU by Kyosuke_Uchiha - Webnovel

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Anthony_Huffman_1174

This author made the comment no harm because they're dumb. This author is an idiot. There is a no harm tag you can put up. There's no need to be insulting to people because of their culture and their religion and the fact that all most of the modern countries that have European influence having allowed harems for about 200 years, so because of this, the other 10000 plus years that they were allowed is wrong please. Author keep that kind of statement to yourself. Cause your not drawing people to read your book.

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Buri

Alice again? Not reading. Thanks for the advise. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Antonio_Sanderson

can you restart this or are you done with this completely.

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twerp22

couldn't get to far into the story, the Grammer is terrible and it annoys me when you say Rosalie's last name is cullen when it is hale. to many things that make me focus on all the bad writing and not enough good story telling to make me ignore it

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James_Griffin_4165

I enjoyed the story but would really appreciate a ending or completion of the story. For example what is going on with the MC family. Or what happened to Bella and company

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tiago_0963

esta bien la historia es entretenida de leerpor ub buen rato [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Nyxarias

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Nomnom345

Incoherent mess of contradictions. This story is random set of events with little to no structure. The poeple written are poorly flushed up and often have little to no consistency. The parts of the story that are coherent only come from the original movie or books. Do not recommend

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LEONARD_CALUMPANG

Dude the story is very interesting and quite amazing and I hope that you can continue this fanfic because it's again quite amazing.

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NeaCambelt

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Sirius_drake

I find it a real pity the storry with a mc who chooses Alice is something I have been looking for a long time, unfortunately plot is underdeveloped and rushed, your MC is boring and also very badly written there is very little world building and background, the family of your mc is better written and more interesting than your own mc why ? Your MC fills up like a cardboard character it doesn't really feel alive but more like something that is just there, I recommend you to read this I Reincarnated In Twilight is not perfect either but it shows well how to do it. This is not meant as an insult, it is just my opinion, and everyone has their own opinion, the story has real potential I would like to see a rewrite to evaluate it better ,

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Dayside

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vicky111mudi

i will give 5 for just because i can....ha ha ha i will give 5 for just because i can....ha ha ha i will give 5 for just because i can....ha ha ha i will give 5 for just because i can....ha ha ha

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littlefrench

I can’t even go through the first chapter, the grammar is outright terrible It’s so beyond me to see readers giving so many stars to this...

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BAD_MAN

Alice BESTO GURL[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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kiddeath1998

Alice's is best girl and this gets better and better the more I read it. still there are slip-ups here and there, but overall it's a good story that deserves some of your time if you're a fan of the series.

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Lothlorien

Reasonable, compared to other stories on this site, it is average..........................................................................................

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Iceman200

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Lizrock

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Navasu_69

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Darius_Chromwell

while I like to see a twilight fanfic and the pairing is a nice choice the romance is way to fast and nowhere in the MC's wishes did he become a werewolf yet all of a sudden he cant control his primal instincts. sorry but no.

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Yngvild

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Amyn27

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Lizrock

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ReMormius

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Lizrock

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Corruptesp1rit

It Is looking pretty good keep it up. Cool author cool author cool author cool author cool author cool author cool author cool author