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E bom mais demora muito para atualizar e isso é um pouco chato............... ............................................................................
it's good but when it's reached the part where he tell his parents it's becoming bad
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Good interesting and intriguing book along with the MC and the things he has created and done via drones, mercenaries, and other business aspects even creating his own company without anyone being the wiser definitely enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Evaluation: Below Average WQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5 WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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Hello author 👋 I really enjoy your story so far Im at chapter 38 an I sincerely hope you don’t drop this cool novel
A really good read with an adventurous and stealthy MC that knows how to act his role well. Hope the author doesn't drop this and also decides to update more frequently
please 🥺 update more chapters please 🥺🥺🥺🥺 I can't wait this much every please update atleast 3 chps per week iam begging you brother please 🥺🥺🥺 please please please. -A loyal reader of yours
Glad to see this story getting updated again, brains getting hungry for this boredom antidote your making lol
I loooooooooooooooooove this story very much the character development everything on point man you have my support plz release more chapters please,please,please,pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee
No offence but if your gonna make a good story like this with this much potential you should at the very least continue the story or give it to someone else to continue, I love it and I'd like to see more if possible
Author is obsessed with putting Dcu elements and characters in MCU. It’s honestly a bit of a waste. The powers have potential, and the MC uses them like someone who just got his powers. I like that he isn’t instantly OP.
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Posting a small chunk of a chapter and then saying you can continue reading on his patreon(ch.23). The story hasn't even developed enough to justify a patreon even
a very engaging read ........................,..................................................:)....... ................. .. ...... ..
Please carry on updating story is good and has a lot of potential can't wait for more🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Very good novel. Update soon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm enjoying the story so far. hope to see more in the future. also wish there wasn't a character requirement for posting a comment, but it's yet to be removed.
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LoveI loved it so much I'm waiting for the next chapter [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Интересная работа, но действия главного героя кажутся слегка поспешными, хотя он пока не сильно вмешивался в канон, поэтому не могу с уверенностью этого сказать. Описание мира хромает, а точнее его практически нет, не говорилось о той же хотя бы как пример, STAR labs. Что "STAR" – это название его секретной лаборатории, всё таки удалось догадаться только в дальнейшем, по действием героя на локации и по следующим упоминаниям. Никакого описания персонажей ни, банально, внешности, ни костюмов, что весьма важно учитывая сюжет сосредоточенный на деятельности героев. Язык повествования не плох, но и чего-то такого уж хорошего я в нём не заметила. А так сама идея довольно интересна и если будет продолжение, то скорее всего, буду читать
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Spoiler de révélation E bom mais demora muito para atualizar e isso é um pouco chato............... ............................................................................
it's good but when it's reached the part where he tell his parents it's becoming bad
Spoiler de révélation Good interesting and intriguing book along with the MC and the things he has created and done via drones, mercenaries, and other business aspects even creating his own company without anyone being the wiser definitely enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Evaluation: Below Average WQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5 WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
Mucho ánimo con la historia😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Spoiler de révélation Hello author 👋 I really enjoy your story so far Im at chapter 38 an I sincerely hope you don’t drop this cool novel
A really good read with an adventurous and stealthy MC that knows how to act his role well. Hope the author doesn't drop this and also decides to update more frequently
please 🥺 update more chapters please 🥺🥺🥺🥺 I can't wait this much every please update atleast 3 chps per week iam begging you brother please 🥺🥺🥺 please please please. -A loyal reader of yours
Glad to see this story getting updated again, brains getting hungry for this boredom antidote your making lol
I loooooooooooooooooove this story very much the character development everything on point man you have my support plz release more chapters please,please,please,pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee
No offence but if your gonna make a good story like this with this much potential you should at the very least continue the story or give it to someone else to continue, I love it and I'd like to see more if possible
Author is obsessed with putting Dcu elements and characters in MCU. It’s honestly a bit of a waste. The powers have potential, and the MC uses them like someone who just got his powers. I like that he isn’t instantly OP.
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Posting a small chunk of a chapter and then saying you can continue reading on his patreon(ch.23). The story hasn't even developed enough to justify a patreon even
a very engaging read ........................,..................................................:)....... ................. .. ...... ..
Please carry on updating story is good and has a lot of potential can't wait for more🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Very good novel. Update soon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm enjoying the story so far. hope to see more in the future. also wish there wasn't a character requirement for posting a comment, but it's yet to be removed.
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Интересная работа, но действия главного героя кажутся слегка поспешными, хотя он пока не сильно вмешивался в канон, поэтому не могу с уверенностью этого сказать. Описание мира хромает, а точнее его практически нет, не говорилось о той же хотя бы как пример, STAR labs. Что "STAR" – это название его секретной лаборатории, всё таки удалось догадаться только в дальнейшем, по действием героя на локации и по следующим упоминаниям. Никакого описания персонажей ни, банально, внешности, ни костюмов, что весьма важно учитывая сюжет сосредоточенный на деятельности героев. Язык повествования не плох, но и чего-то такого уж хорошего я в нём не заметила. А так сама идея довольно интересна и если будет продолжение, то скорее всего, буду читать