Second Chance in RWBY

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Kabuk5

Main character is a chuuni idiot who wastes his wishes and has the most retarded name ever. I didn't want to continue reading, like really. control all elements and then generate crystals? WTF

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Oppai_Dragon_3633

READ IT JUST READ IT. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Alucard777

I love haremniks. I just adore it, the genre is difficult and rarely anyone gets to do it with dignity, but I will pray to Cthulhu that your time is like this.

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Dao_of_Melancholy

I’m loving it so far interesting and easy to understand I can’t wait to see more. Yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I

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Valenshtine

This is an amazing creation, it's a shame it was abandoned

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AStrAl_Soul

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JOKER_JAY

this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work.

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fallenknight90

this story looked amazing and it needs more time and words to make it the best and I hope you keep making more chapter for this story and I hope you don't abandon it and if you so do it please give it to someone who understands your style of writing and ideas in mind

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NjalLeif

I wanna know the tags. If it is something I like I'll update the rating to a 5star if not I'll just delete this and advise you to put them in the description and go my own way.