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well quite disappointed man .... 17 chapter still not started the main story.... lol not my type Fanfiction ....... if you guys like a slow start story then it's all your . if you don't then don't blame me blame your self😂
no la he leido ni nada pero dado que esta en español le dare 5. encontrar novelas en español en este lugar es mas dificil que encontrar agua en el desierto
Hey a rare resident evil fanfic. Quite good, from the plot, characters, etc. So try it out. .................................................................
Español... Bueno para describir esto tengo que decir que es interesante, solo demaciado lenta en su desarrollo. Si biniste buscando zombis y resident evill no te complacera, la trama es un tropo completamente diferente y parece que se desarroya como una copia de pantera negra sin la tecnologia... basicamente habla durante mucho tiempo de la infancia del personaje y no se muesta mas que algun destello de la saga hasta mas adelante. El desarroyo del oc es bastante bueno, como el del personages en general solo no adecuado a mi parecer para la historia. Hay mas que decir pero no es mi tasa de Té.
i like where this is going so cookie for you mate ..........................................................................................
Well so for i like the story even if it's slow and the translation also got better in chapter 19 and it's a harem story ..................................................................
The truth is I am not a shameless author and I will put the amount of 4 stars, after all it is my first attempt at writing and I see it well at least in Spanish and this one, in English I am looking for a translator without pay at least while there will be no patreon and I earn something , but if you want to do it for free I would appreciate it and you can contact me for the comments and then you can talk.
The ff is good but way toooooooo slow I was so bored that I dropped it by chapter 15. No original plot until now. The character development is too much and also feels boring. I love reading it in starting but soon it became too boring. Those who like very slow paced can read it cause it is way too slow paced. Character development is good and given a lot of time and attention.
well quite disappointed man .... 17 chapter still not started the main story.... lol not my type Fanfiction ....... if you guys like a slow start story then it's all your . if you don't then don't blame me blame your self😂
no la he leido ni nada pero dado que esta en español le dare 5. encontrar novelas en español en este lugar es mas dificil que encontrar agua en el desierto
Hey a rare resident evil fanfic. Quite good, from the plot, characters, etc. So try it out. .................................................................
Español... Bueno para describir esto tengo que decir que es interesante, solo demaciado lenta en su desarrollo. Si biniste buscando zombis y resident evill no te complacera, la trama es un tropo completamente diferente y parece que se desarroya como una copia de pantera negra sin la tecnologia... basicamente habla durante mucho tiempo de la infancia del personaje y no se muesta mas que algun destello de la saga hasta mas adelante. El desarroyo del oc es bastante bueno, como el del personages en general solo no adecuado a mi parecer para la historia. Hay mas que decir pero no es mi tasa de Té.
i like where this is going so cookie for you mate ..........................................................................................
Well so for i like the story even if it's slow and the translation also got better in chapter 19 and it's a harem story ..................................................................
The truth is I am not a shameless author and I will put the amount of 4 stars, after all it is my first attempt at writing and I see it well at least in Spanish and this one, in English I am looking for a translator without pay at least while there will be no patreon and I earn something , but if you want to do it for free I would appreciate it and you can contact me for the comments and then you can talk.
The ff is good but way toooooooo slow I was so bored that I dropped it by chapter 15. No original plot until now. The character development is too much and also feels boring. I love reading it in starting but soon it became too boring. Those who like very slow paced can read it cause it is way too slow paced. Character development is good and given a lot of time and attention.