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A well fleshed out book Character design and World building done immaculately finally the typical plot was done in a well satisfying way a must read for all isekai fans
one of the few books that I finish on webnovel. many people complain about the MC not being too smart in the early chapters but I think he was fine. it was consistent with his character and he was not stupid by any means. The story was enjoyable, not the most intense but captivating enough for me to finish. recommend for a good break from heavy story.
Novel was pretty good. There are some nonsensical things happening here and there and the MC being brain dead, but overall it was enjoyable story.
I like the idea of the world's background, but the MC is just too brain-dead. The author uses the MC's cluelessness to introduce simple mechanics and game elements. This would be fine and all if the MC wasn't described as a veteran gamer. It just doesn't make sense for the MC to behave like that, given his background. The MC given high tier items in the beginning for no apparent reason is also a bit of a strange plot device. It's like the author didn't want to put any thoughts into just giving MC a special power. I am only a few dozen chapters in, so I will give it a chance to see if the story improves and if the MC becomes actually likeable.
Read this story on freewebnovel and loved it. W story overall. Master's death seemed slightly rushed but besides that it was a good couple years
Story is well thought, character development is great, i guess the only thing lacking is the power spike, it's mostly only explained by jack super talented and can learn stuff very quickly. but the setting and everything is very fun
Ch 131 review Story is decent. It’s not one that makes you want to keep reading all day because it’s so good. As in other reviews mc reply’s on fairy a lot. I figure maybe the auth wants it to be a comedic banter between mc and fairy or something but honestly it just takes away from the story. I think the most annoying thing so far is the fact the all these “pro” gamers get surprised and just stop and gawk at mc when he starts showing how much stronger he his than other people. Like in the middle of a boss fight and they just stop fighting or moving and stare.. Plus mc is all about trying to hide the fact he has 2 classes which can’t be taken from him or lost but constantly shows off the fact he has “most likely” and item that shows where enemies are. It’s not a bound item so he could lose it if he dies yet he doesn’t try to cover it up by saying oh I got a skill or something. Mc is too nice for his own good. Shares info with pretty much anyone tries to share rewards after already having deals made or split drops evenly even though he does the most work.. Premise of story is decent not really anything special. I like a good op character so getting double attributes and two sets of skills is cool. Also his soul passive is a nice safety net. I’d say it’s a decent story if you have nothing else to read or just waiting on ch from other novels to post.
I greatly enjoyed this book. The characters became like family to me. I highly recommend this bb9ok.
Absolutely loved the novel ! Great World background and character design Consistent development and update Kindly create a second novel either with a new mc being from other 9 servers or Jack journey in angel island or a new field where all the top rankers of all the servers will compete and strongers NPCs with level limit increased from 99 to 199.
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I have no problem with dense characters but I hate hypocrites, the MC supposedly has a moral compass but he forgives unforgivable crimes as easily as breathing. At first people didn't know if they would be revived if they died, some players didn't care about this and killed other players, which makes it very clear that they are homicidal, but the MC who was supposed to be a hero didn't care what these players did and even befriended them. This story is a story where the characters suffer absolutely no consequences for their actions, the MC supposedly cared about the natives, but forgave those responsible for decimating millions of them... The author talked about one-dimensional characters and created several characters like that, there is no grudge, there is no anger, everything is simply a joke, nothing matters. Two people decided to change the world where 800 million people lived, and nobody felt angry about it, nobody cared, it didn't make any sense.
Makes me sad that it ends but it just makes me look forward to a sequel.
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Honest review from chapter up till 301 currently This is a good read, it has some really exciting moments. The world itself it's ok it a standard MMORPG video game. The characters are great so far. Yea you got some of those annoying characters but like. It's a MMORPG world filled with mostly gamers no sh**. Some complaints I heard about the mc. Yea he isn't super smart just average. I see people saying gets summer when that not true, at least so far. And no he isn't a pushover if you actually read untill 300 you can see that. Yes he does spare some people, but that's only like two people and he kills everyone else. Plus it's a video game world so here comes some spoilers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ spoilers They do respawn death isn't permanent so it's not Sao. So like if he kills them or not doesn't really matter all too much. He has a guide that helps him. I see people complaining that he asks the guide alot of questions. When thats literally the guides job, and is why he always has an edge over all the other, as they have to search for them information he can just ask. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The mc has character development, so if you're looking for a flawless perfect character from the start it's not him. The MC is one of the strongest players that we know of. But he also not op meaning he has to work to stay the strongest. But this story is a good read so far, if you want something to read, while you wait for your favorite novel to stack up this is the book to read. This mc compared to the MC from there (Earth greatest magus). Is way better, you wanna see a stupid idiot main Character read that. You'll never complain about a character again.
This is by far the best novel I’ve read here. I was actually sad when I got to the end. That’s how much I wanted the story to keep going. Great characters, great plot, and great development!
i have really enjoyed this web novel, to the point where i hope to purchase a hard copy someday, even if you end up only allowing us to purchase a huge PDF version I would still be extremely grateful.
This story is phenomenal. I literally teared up, realizing it was over. UnrivaledArcaner, you have created a truly amazing story. From such colorful characters to the plots and twists to the world itself. There are some grammar errors in there. But that doesn't matter in light of such an epic being created. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to creating something brilliant. Good luck on your future endeavers, I wish that they are each better than the last.
This was such a nice journey. I really enjoyed John as a character. Jack was also pretty cool. My favorite part is where he slammed the emissary into the ground. Anyways, this book is worth reading. Enjoy.
Captivating from start to finish! I hope the author turns this into a series.
I stayed with this book for 3 years, and it's as been an amazing experience, I grew so attached to this book that I can't wait for the chapter update, am sad it has to end all the same kudos to the author!!!
I finished this book from start to finish and it was a amazing read 10 out of 10 recommend you won't be disappointed
This narrative is truly remarkable. The characters are meticulously crafted, and when combined with the intricately developed world, they become incredibly lifelike, enabling readers to deeply understand and connect with them. The author’s writing style immerses the reader in the events of the story, making them feel like active participants. Additionally, the plot remains unpredictable up to the final chapter. Unlike other stories where characters become overwhelmingly powerful and the plot loses its tension, this story maintains a continuous and engaging challenge. It is exceptionally well-written and highly recommended for all readers.
I have been reading this book for years. Through many troubles i have always loved this book. only thing that held me back was waiting for another chapter or waiting for my pay check. This book has been the most amazing piece of art work i have ever read.
The story is good. A MMORPG turned real setting, but not the general kind. Though many may find some things hard to accept logically, most of the story is well thought and interesting.
really good book. had a well thought out progression a great protagonist and antagonist. and most importantly the author didn't drag out the book.
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Loving the novel despite the few spelling and grammar mistakes! Great job, Author!
A well fleshed out book Character design and World building done immaculately finally the typical plot was done in a well satisfying way a must read for all isekai fans
one of the few books that I finish on webnovel. many people complain about the MC not being too smart in the early chapters but I think he was fine. it was consistent with his character and he was not stupid by any means. The story was enjoyable, not the most intense but captivating enough for me to finish. recommend for a good break from heavy story.
Novel was pretty good. There are some nonsensical things happening here and there and the MC being brain dead, but overall it was enjoyable story.
I like the idea of the world's background, but the MC is just too brain-dead. The author uses the MC's cluelessness to introduce simple mechanics and game elements. This would be fine and all if the MC wasn't described as a veteran gamer. It just doesn't make sense for the MC to behave like that, given his background. The MC given high tier items in the beginning for no apparent reason is also a bit of a strange plot device. It's like the author didn't want to put any thoughts into just giving MC a special power. I am only a few dozen chapters in, so I will give it a chance to see if the story improves and if the MC becomes actually likeable.
Read this story on freewebnovel and loved it. W story overall. Master's death seemed slightly rushed but besides that it was a good couple years
Story is well thought, character development is great, i guess the only thing lacking is the power spike, it's mostly only explained by jack super talented and can learn stuff very quickly. but the setting and everything is very fun
Ch 131 review Story is decent. It’s not one that makes you want to keep reading all day because it’s so good. As in other reviews mc reply’s on fairy a lot. I figure maybe the auth wants it to be a comedic banter between mc and fairy or something but honestly it just takes away from the story. I think the most annoying thing so far is the fact the all these “pro” gamers get surprised and just stop and gawk at mc when he starts showing how much stronger he his than other people. Like in the middle of a boss fight and they just stop fighting or moving and stare.. Plus mc is all about trying to hide the fact he has 2 classes which can’t be taken from him or lost but constantly shows off the fact he has “most likely” and item that shows where enemies are. It’s not a bound item so he could lose it if he dies yet he doesn’t try to cover it up by saying oh I got a skill or something. Mc is too nice for his own good. Shares info with pretty much anyone tries to share rewards after already having deals made or split drops evenly even though he does the most work.. Premise of story is decent not really anything special. I like a good op character so getting double attributes and two sets of skills is cool. Also his soul passive is a nice safety net. I’d say it’s a decent story if you have nothing else to read or just waiting on ch from other novels to post.
I greatly enjoyed this book. The characters became like family to me. I highly recommend this bb9ok.
Absolutely loved the novel ! Great World background and character design Consistent development and update Kindly create a second novel either with a new mc being from other 9 servers or Jack journey in angel island or a new field where all the top rankers of all the servers will compete and strongers NPCs with level limit increased from 99 to 199.
Spoiler de révélation I have no problem with dense characters but I hate hypocrites, the MC supposedly has a moral compass but he forgives unforgivable crimes as easily as breathing. At first people didn't know if they would be revived if they died, some players didn't care about this and killed other players, which makes it very clear that they are homicidal, but the MC who was supposed to be a hero didn't care what these players did and even befriended them. This story is a story where the characters suffer absolutely no consequences for their actions, the MC supposedly cared about the natives, but forgave those responsible for decimating millions of them... The author talked about one-dimensional characters and created several characters like that, there is no grudge, there is no anger, everything is simply a joke, nothing matters. Two people decided to change the world where 800 million people lived, and nobody felt angry about it, nobody cared, it didn't make any sense.
Makes me sad that it ends but it just makes me look forward to a sequel.
Spoiler de révélation Honest review from chapter up till 301 currently This is a good read, it has some really exciting moments. The world itself it's ok it a standard MMORPG video game. The characters are great so far. Yea you got some of those annoying characters but like. It's a MMORPG world filled with mostly gamers no sh**. Some complaints I heard about the mc. Yea he isn't super smart just average. I see people saying gets summer when that not true, at least so far. And no he isn't a pushover if you actually read untill 300 you can see that. Yes he does spare some people, but that's only like two people and he kills everyone else. Plus it's a video game world so here comes some spoilers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ spoilers They do respawn death isn't permanent so it's not Sao. So like if he kills them or not doesn't really matter all too much. He has a guide that helps him. I see people complaining that he asks the guide alot of questions. When thats literally the guides job, and is why he always has an edge over all the other, as they have to search for them information he can just ask. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The mc has character development, so if you're looking for a flawless perfect character from the start it's not him. The MC is one of the strongest players that we know of. But he also not op meaning he has to work to stay the strongest. But this story is a good read so far, if you want something to read, while you wait for your favorite novel to stack up this is the book to read. This mc compared to the MC from there (Earth greatest magus). Is way better, you wanna see a stupid idiot main Character read that. You'll never complain about a character again.
This is by far the best novel I’ve read here. I was actually sad when I got to the end. That’s how much I wanted the story to keep going. Great characters, great plot, and great development!
i have really enjoyed this web novel, to the point where i hope to purchase a hard copy someday, even if you end up only allowing us to purchase a huge PDF version I would still be extremely grateful.
This story is phenomenal. I literally teared up, realizing it was over. UnrivaledArcaner, you have created a truly amazing story. From such colorful characters to the plots and twists to the world itself. There are some grammar errors in there. But that doesn't matter in light of such an epic being created. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to creating something brilliant. Good luck on your future endeavers, I wish that they are each better than the last.
This was such a nice journey. I really enjoyed John as a character. Jack was also pretty cool. My favorite part is where he slammed the emissary into the ground. Anyways, this book is worth reading. Enjoy.
Captivating from start to finish! I hope the author turns this into a series.
I stayed with this book for 3 years, and it's as been an amazing experience, I grew so attached to this book that I can't wait for the chapter update, am sad it has to end all the same kudos to the author!!!
I finished this book from start to finish and it was a amazing read 10 out of 10 recommend you won't be disappointed
This narrative is truly remarkable. The characters are meticulously crafted, and when combined with the intricately developed world, they become incredibly lifelike, enabling readers to deeply understand and connect with them. The author’s writing style immerses the reader in the events of the story, making them feel like active participants. Additionally, the plot remains unpredictable up to the final chapter. Unlike other stories where characters become overwhelmingly powerful and the plot loses its tension, this story maintains a continuous and engaging challenge. It is exceptionally well-written and highly recommended for all readers.
I have been reading this book for years. Through many troubles i have always loved this book. only thing that held me back was waiting for another chapter or waiting for my pay check. This book has been the most amazing piece of art work i have ever read.
The story is good. A MMORPG turned real setting, but not the general kind. Though many may find some things hard to accept logically, most of the story is well thought and interesting.
really good book. had a well thought out progression a great protagonist and antagonist. and most importantly the author didn't drag out the book.
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Loving the novel despite the few spelling and grammar mistakes! Great job, Author!