3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Guys, please rate this novel and give me comments so that I could know what you think of it. Thank you so much! I really appreciate those that take the time to read my work. I know it needs a lot of polishing. I am not that good at writing and I am still learning because I don't have any background in it. So your small comments are truly helpful.
Please read my new novel. This time, I wanted to write something new. I hope you guys will like it! ..............................................
I read up to chapter 15, it’s an ok story, the author has said it himself, he is new to writing, it is very apparent, the bad guys seem to only know how to be lecherous, and that’s all it’s about. The MC trains to get stronger to beat up rapist scum, after the fourth time it gets old. There is some foreshadowing about the expansion of the world with new interesting things soon to come… If I’m ever bored enough I’ll pick it up again.
Guys, please rate this novel and give me comments so that I could know what you think of it. Thank you so much! I really appreciate those that take the time to read my work. I know it needs a lot of polishing. I am not that good at writing and I am still learning because I don't have any background in it. So your small comments are truly helpful.
Please read my new novel. This time, I wanted to write something new. I hope you guys will like it! ..............................................
I read up to chapter 15, it’s an ok story, the author has said it himself, he is new to writing, it is very apparent, the bad guys seem to only know how to be lecherous, and that’s all it’s about. The MC trains to get stronger to beat up rapist scum, after the fourth time it gets old. There is some foreshadowing about the expansion of the world with new interesting things soon to come… If I’m ever bored enough I’ll pick it up again.