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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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It look promising but the story developpement is subpar. I understand why you decide to keep it realistic but it's too slow and not enough. I would see in a few weeks if it's get better. Please update some more chapters
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It look promising but the story developpement is subpar. I understand why you decide to keep it realistic but it's too slow and not enough. I would see in a few weeks if it's get better. Please update some more chapters
