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So this was OK up until after he got to the fate stay verse. During that, there became too many girls to even keep track of. After that, he didn't even care about the story where he was going. It's just a list of girls that he wants. I mean, I can write a list of hot girls also. It doesn't make it a good story.
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All good except he should have made his house connected to every world he has insted of divide. And another thing he was cucking himself yet he hated takashi for being cuck LOL. That was what destroyed the story he was omnipotent yet he can make himself get cuck hahahahahahaah
Spoiler de révélation The author destroyed his own story because of lack of imagination. If he just made that the mansion-house he has was connected to every world he goes so that he can meet those know him or those living in his house then that was better but he goes and do his thngy onmi powrrs where he will cuck himself cause he will be everywhere retard
Overall a good novel but idk if something happened or if the author dropped it since it hasn’t been updated in quite a while and I really hope we get news on it soon
Kshdujsb sjwjsj s ja sjbsis jabatan aja jsba aja ja jaka sjd usbgsknd jvd jb dhdvkaooaba ai wiw vsgsbjkab akan a shha siba isns is isbaj ajj jjjjsisbjb jikkxoakalanahiabbagfa sj i aj aj
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Can you please add more chapter tearl quick? .... i love this .... ....... .................................................................
good history. *************************************************************************************************************************************************************
It's good. But the protagonist is not good where he is simply because he doesn't kill the ones he doesn't like and he just acts like he's a mortal but he's not. has good grammar.
When will you update again ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
he doesn't really change anything. He said he is going to go to that said world to get a girl but nah, he just killing zombies and just peeking in girls bath and done nothing. And it looks like he hate many canon character but do nothing to them and just let them do what they want, like shido.
It's funny and the character really is funny. Good read. .......... . . . . ... . ... . . .
they say quality ove quantity but this is both quality and quantity long chapter decent story so far *cant realy say i know much about the novle yet im only on chapter 5*
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 LOVE This Story .............................................................................................. . .
The ff started of good but after like 20 chapters the Mc starts to simp. I don't like simp because it is frustrating. The massive harem is OK but the way Mc gets it just irritates me.
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ROB gives me WISHES story. ..............................................................................................................................................................................
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I love it, this is one of my most favorite books in my library. Author did a really good job even though it's only been a small amount of chapters.
This fanfic has made me laugh multiple times, Mc is good like one of the best ive seen, wholesome story,Grammar quality is good which already makes this story Better than 98% of the app. highly recommend it.
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Author is here, the book is pretty much here because I'm bored. 1- I'm not a native English speaker so there are bound to be grammatical errors. 2- There will be no story development as the MC is the strongest existence, and since I don't know how to write romance so I am predicting that it'll be trash. 3- The characters will pretty much be bland, I mean the dude can literally fart and wipe the omniverse and is lazy so what do you expect? 4- Updating stability is non-existent, I'll update whenever I feel like it and if I lost interest I'd drop it even after the prologue. 5- World background? I'm plagiarizing other works and not gonna add original content except my protagonist. _____________________ This is pretty much an honest and objective review on what you're gonna read, so if you want to continue then you're welcome.
So this was OK up until after he got to the fate stay verse. During that, there became too many girls to even keep track of. After that, he didn't even care about the story where he was going. It's just a list of girls that he wants. I mean, I can write a list of hot girls also. It doesn't make it a good story.
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All good except he should have made his house connected to every world he has insted of divide. And another thing he was cucking himself yet he hated takashi for being cuck LOL. That was what destroyed the story he was omnipotent yet he can make himself get cuck hahahahahahaah
Spoiler de révélation The author destroyed his own story because of lack of imagination. If he just made that the mansion-house he has was connected to every world he goes so that he can meet those know him or those living in his house then that was better but he goes and do his thngy onmi powrrs where he will cuck himself cause he will be everywhere retard
Overall a good novel but idk if something happened or if the author dropped it since it hasn’t been updated in quite a while and I really hope we get news on it soon
Kshdujsb sjwjsj s ja sjbsis jabatan aja jsba aja ja jaka sjd usbgsknd jvd jb dhdvkaooaba ai wiw vsgsbjkab akan a shha siba isns is isbaj ajj jjjjsisbjb jikkxoakalanahiabbagfa sj i aj aj
Spoiler de révélation Can you please add more chapter tearl quick? .... i love this .... ....... .................................................................
good history. *************************************************************************************************************************************************************
It's good. But the protagonist is not good where he is simply because he doesn't kill the ones he doesn't like and he just acts like he's a mortal but he's not. has good grammar.
When will you update again ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
he doesn't really change anything. He said he is going to go to that said world to get a girl but nah, he just killing zombies and just peeking in girls bath and done nothing. And it looks like he hate many canon character but do nothing to them and just let them do what they want, like shido.
It's funny and the character really is funny. Good read. .......... . . . . ... . ... . . .
they say quality ove quantity but this is both quality and quantity long chapter decent story so far *cant realy say i know much about the novle yet im only on chapter 5*
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 LOVE This Story .............................................................................................. . .
The ff started of good but after like 20 chapters the Mc starts to simp. I don't like simp because it is frustrating. The massive harem is OK but the way Mc gets it just irritates me.
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Spoiler de révélation ROB gives me WISHES story. ..............................................................................................................................................................................
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I love it, this is one of my most favorite books in my library. Author did a really good job even though it's only been a small amount of chapters.
This fanfic has made me laugh multiple times, Mc is good like one of the best ive seen, wholesome story,Grammar quality is good which already makes this story Better than 98% of the app. highly recommend it.
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Author is here, the book is pretty much here because I'm bored. 1- I'm not a native English speaker so there are bound to be grammatical errors. 2- There will be no story development as the MC is the strongest existence, and since I don't know how to write romance so I am predicting that it'll be trash. 3- The characters will pretty much be bland, I mean the dude can literally fart and wipe the omniverse and is lazy so what do you expect? 4- Updating stability is non-existent, I'll update whenever I feel like it and if I lost interest I'd drop it even after the prologue. 5- World background? I'm plagiarizing other works and not gonna add original content except my protagonist. _____________________ This is pretty much an honest and objective review on what you're gonna read, so if you want to continue then you're welcome.