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For all it's worth it has some interesting ideas at the start but ended up with Mc becoming an emo boy only thinking about killing everyone he doesn't like
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Me gusto mucho la historia espero con hamcia los próximos capítulo y que la historia vaya para largo😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅
I'm telling you fanfic like this make you hate the original mc, kill him off so our hearts can be loose again.
Spoiler de révélation
Genérica. Sem nada de empolgante, com poucos assuntos que motivam. Eis mais um protagonista gado que se fode por causa das mulheres. Outro que literalmente, pensa com a cabeça de baixo. [img=faceslap]
Bro i absolutely enjoyed this fanfic. It even inspired me to write my own. Though the thing i hate about your story is the lack of chapter titles, which wasted a lot my time. Thank you for your hard work.
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It started off interesting, thought it would be a fun read. Xiao Ning realized they wasted time at the start and began training to get stronger. Even had some plot armor to help get strong. But then the first romance was pathetic. Man forced a kiss on the girl and she was like "this is my man now". No prior relationship, he is weaker and poorer than her, but forcing a kiss made her choose him. If that's the way character development is gonna be, I'd rather just drop before losing brain cells.
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graded this fairly since every chapter has mc making dumb decisions, mc personality is unlikable compared with canon mc, mc breaking logic with dumbest decisions
u should update more I am no one to say this but plz don't drop this book I don't get good fan fiction book now days so plz don't 🙏 dropp this
Amazing Novel, Writer Is A Genius. Usually Other Fanfic Writers Try Very Hard To Show The Original MC As A Villian Or A Weakling But None Of Them Are Successful But Our Writer Has Successfully Made Xiao Yan Into An Antagonist. Loved The Novel 😍😍🤩🤩🥳
So I'm giving a review. Well why not? To be honest, a fanfic of btth that I like the most is this. You've seen the others well not like all of them were good, right? Well enough of that. Good read, nice story and that's enough.
haha i like this book ,but there is one thing i can't ignore,can you update more chap if not i'm going to murder the cliffhanger🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡
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the story started well and well written but over time the mc is being put in constant danger, he goes to one side danger, he stays sitting or buying always ends up in something that can kill him, he doesn't give the story more time for relax if it were not for the chapters that are separated by days the story would be very heavy
Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc
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The beginning of the story was pretty nice. Xiao Ning was portrayed as a nice senior brother as opposed to his cannon counterpart. He even helped Xiao Yan sometimes and seemed as if they would create a nice friendship. Then, things went down pretty quick after Xiao Yan's teasing of Xiao Yu. Xiao Ning went to defend her honor and taught a little lesson to Xiao Yan and suddenly, they're kinda enemies and Xiao Yan became a spoiled brat. Xiao Ning's relationship with Ya Fei was borderline dumb. You just have to turn off your brain through this part. His relationship building with Little Fairy Doctor was a thousand times better compared. All in all, this is a pretty legit BTTH fanfic. 80% of the time, he's doing cultivation-related things.
Spoiler de révélation
sorry, this is a very bad story development. In Battle Through The Heaven HavenlySilkWorm. Xiao Ning is at Jianan Academy, not into magical beasts. You have to read the original story again.
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should change the title to 'in BTTH as side character and Xiao Yan SIMP'. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Dios mio, no vean esto es una perdida de tiempo total. .............................................................................................
Good ........qpkrnfjvoepwlxmcmnvkeowpwlzmcmcmeowppwmdnfjtjroepwlsmxnfjfjeowlsmcnfnekpwpwiturndmdkslwwpodfnfjfkowpwpsldkd............... ........
For all it's worth it has some interesting ideas at the start but ended up with Mc becoming an emo boy only thinking about killing everyone he doesn't like
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Me gusto mucho la historia espero con hamcia los próximos capítulo y que la historia vaya para largo😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅
I'm telling you fanfic like this make you hate the original mc, kill him off so our hearts can be loose again.
Spoiler de révélation Genérica. Sem nada de empolgante, com poucos assuntos que motivam. Eis mais um protagonista gado que se fode por causa das mulheres. Outro que literalmente, pensa com a cabeça de baixo. [img=faceslap]
Bro i absolutely enjoyed this fanfic. It even inspired me to write my own. Though the thing i hate about your story is the lack of chapter titles, which wasted a lot my time. Thank you for your hard work.
Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! Lemonnn!!!! 🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋
It started off interesting, thought it would be a fun read. Xiao Ning realized they wasted time at the start and began training to get stronger. Even had some plot armor to help get strong. But then the first romance was pathetic. Man forced a kiss on the girl and she was like "this is my man now". No prior relationship, he is weaker and poorer than her, but forcing a kiss made her choose him. If that's the way character development is gonna be, I'd rather just drop before losing brain cells.
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trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
graded this fairly since every chapter has mc making dumb decisions, mc personality is unlikable compared with canon mc, mc breaking logic with dumbest decisions
u should update more I am no one to say this but plz don't drop this book I don't get good fan fiction book now days so plz don't 🙏 dropp this
Amazing Novel, Writer Is A Genius. Usually Other Fanfic Writers Try Very Hard To Show The Original MC As A Villian Or A Weakling But None Of Them Are Successful But Our Writer Has Successfully Made Xiao Yan Into An Antagonist. Loved The Novel 😍😍🤩🤩🥳
So I'm giving a review. Well why not? To be honest, a fanfic of btth that I like the most is this. You've seen the others well not like all of them were good, right? Well enough of that. Good read, nice story and that's enough.
haha i like this book ,but there is one thing i can't ignore,can you update more chap if not i'm going to murder the cliffhanger🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡
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the story started well and well written but over time the mc is being put in constant danger, he goes to one side danger, he stays sitting or buying always ends up in something that can kill him, he doesn't give the story more time for relax if it were not for the chapters that are separated by days the story would be very heavy
Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc Garbage , Idıot , Weak Mc
❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
The beginning of the story was pretty nice. Xiao Ning was portrayed as a nice senior brother as opposed to his cannon counterpart. He even helped Xiao Yan sometimes and seemed as if they would create a nice friendship. Then, things went down pretty quick after Xiao Yan's teasing of Xiao Yu. Xiao Ning went to defend her honor and taught a little lesson to Xiao Yan and suddenly, they're kinda enemies and Xiao Yan became a spoiled brat. Xiao Ning's relationship with Ya Fei was borderline dumb. You just have to turn off your brain through this part. His relationship building with Little Fairy Doctor was a thousand times better compared. All in all, this is a pretty legit BTTH fanfic. 80% of the time, he's doing cultivation-related things.
Spoiler de révélation sorry, this is a very bad story development. In Battle Through The Heaven HavenlySilkWorm. Xiao Ning is at Jianan Academy, not into magical beasts. You have to read the original story again.
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should change the title to 'in BTTH as side character and Xiao Yan SIMP'. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Dios mio, no vean esto es una perdida de tiempo total. .............................................................................................