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You and your stories of shameless is the best. It's first story of shameless... Thanks you. Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best
original, creative, and a fun narrative. I like powers and some OPness in my fanfics but this novel proved a well written, happy, slice of life story is up to the task of pulling me in and keeping me hooked. impressive, keep it up the positive vibes!
great stoty, it feels like your own story and not a fan made one. I havent watched shameless yet but reading this gives me an idea about whats going on an the romance build is sweet tells the story of 2 sides of one coin so its great.
I mean its a good read I guess I could say I kind of like it but it's kind off a cliche you know guy meet a rich girl and a poor girl but choices the poor one for some be reason as she would understand him more like come on If MC was a girl then she would choice the rich guy but when MC is a guy he kind always choices the broke girl it is overplayed
Never watched the show but I wait for every single update he puts out that's how good it is reading/writing is to different things and I'm glad he picked this up I once this quarter is up for school I will go back to writing and just know give this novel a try its really good BTW Team savannah
This is great content. Good writing in general and a fun plot. Curious to see who he will end up with
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it's the 1st shameless ff I have ever seen and it's a good one too........ does anyone know any other slice of life fanfics that arent harems?
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I'm just giving 5s cause it's fkin Shameless and it's well written also MC is well written and actually Fun hope you keep writing cause it would a Shame if you dropped.
I'm just giving 5s cause it's fkin Shameless and it's well written also MC is well written and actually Fun hope you keep writing cause it would a Shame if you dropped.
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Really love it , thanks and keep up the work <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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the first fanfiction i seen of shameless and im liking it can't wait for more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Haven’t read a single word, but I love the show so here is a free 5 star review. Im starting the first chapter now. Thanks for writing something interesting.
I like this, good tv show also, i had a idea, he is sleeping with her who is bi have you thought about him and her coming to a understanding that they will date, she will not to hook up with any guys but him, she can see any lady all she wants and even share for a threesome? and he can have one lady on the side that he doesn't have to share with her that he gets all to himself?
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Hate the fact That this is like the only shameless fan fic on this app and would be terrible If it got dropped . I haven’t seen any grammatical errors euther so all out win keep up the good work 👍🏽
Look i havent read yet but love shameless and the idea keep it up ill read it later bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbboooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
author is a dropped fanfic artist. hes famous for it. so even though i love this it gets a 1.
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You and your stories of shameless is the best. It's first story of shameless... Thanks you. Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best Your stories the best
original, creative, and a fun narrative. I like powers and some OPness in my fanfics but this novel proved a well written, happy, slice of life story is up to the task of pulling me in and keeping me hooked. impressive, keep it up the positive vibes!
great stoty, it feels like your own story and not a fan made one. I havent watched shameless yet but reading this gives me an idea about whats going on an the romance build is sweet tells the story of 2 sides of one coin so its great.
I mean its a good read I guess I could say I kind of like it but it's kind off a cliche you know guy meet a rich girl and a poor girl but choices the poor one for some be reason as she would understand him more like come on If MC was a girl then she would choice the rich guy but when MC is a guy he kind always choices the broke girl it is overplayed
Never watched the show but I wait for every single update he puts out that's how good it is reading/writing is to different things and I'm glad he picked this up I once this quarter is up for school I will go back to writing and just know give this novel a try its really good BTW Team savannah
This is great content. Good writing in general and a fun plot. Curious to see who he will end up with
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it's the 1st shameless ff I have ever seen and it's a good one too........ does anyone know any other slice of life fanfics that arent harems?
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I'm just giving 5s cause it's fkin Shameless and it's well written also MC is well written and actually Fun hope you keep writing cause it would a Shame if you dropped.
I'm just giving 5s cause it's fkin Shameless and it's well written also MC is well written and actually Fun hope you keep writing cause it would a Shame if you dropped.
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Really love it , thanks and keep up the work <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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the first fanfiction i seen of shameless and im liking it can't wait for more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Haven’t read a single word, but I love the show so here is a free 5 star review. Im starting the first chapter now. Thanks for writing something interesting.
I like this, good tv show also, i had a idea, he is sleeping with her who is bi have you thought about him and her coming to a understanding that they will date, she will not to hook up with any guys but him, she can see any lady all she wants and even share for a threesome? and he can have one lady on the side that he doesn't have to share with her that he gets all to himself?
Spoiler de révélation Hate the fact That this is like the only shameless fan fic on this app and would be terrible If it got dropped . I haven’t seen any grammatical errors euther so all out win keep up the good work 👍🏽
Look i havent read yet but love shameless and the idea keep it up ill read it later bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbboooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
author is a dropped fanfic artist. hes famous for it. so even though i love this it gets a 1.