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Enjoyed reading this story. Great work author. It’s well written some minor grammatical issues. Sweet romance with a little twist of crime in the mix. Shows a lot of emotion and growth of characters over the story.
There are a lot of common narratives in this one as well. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes that disrupt the flow for me. But I'm still reading it. So I definitely like it anyway. I'm here for some of the cliches too :D
cant remember when was the last time ive been this addicted to reading that i cant stopped even when i am so sleepy.maybe because the story is so raw that you can relate to the characters.i dont know why it does not rank high...bishop ive said it before...you are good.just be careful with your pronouns(his and her)....keep it up....
one of those books i have come across with few grammatical errors. love the story develipment with twists and new plots. fast paced and not dragging. like also the characters how they intertwine with the rest of the cast. overall this is worth reading. i hope readers will notice this book coz this is a good read
i will not say more.. i'm still not yet done reading so i'll save my other comments when i have the extra time hahaha superb writing skills and very intriguing plot. kudos to the author!💖
The plot is so addicting😍😍... I can’t sit still waiting for the new chapters to find out what happens😫 .... waiting for more chapters 😘😘
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This book kept me hooked, from the start. Waiting for more updates from the author The story is interesting, the book is well edited and the emotions are well described.
All five stars for my favourite author and her book. I wish you will win the competition as the book is worth winning... It's a good way to show is the new way to look at entertainment industry.
I love this book and this author, the book has a smooth flow and it's well-edited. I want to read more author. thank you for this lovely book.
the story kept me hooked from the start, it was a new concept among those common face slapping love triangles. good work author keep updating the story
Such a nice story. A great read for someone looking for a romance with humor, drama and some mystery. The flow of the story was smooth and the pace was just right. Great job, author.
I will give this novel a perfect 5 because I love the flow of the story. The story is well written. I am really hooked with the story that’s why whenever I read this novel, I don’t want to get interrupted. I also noticed that there are no grammatical errors that may confuse readers. I recommend this novel to all my friends. Good job! ❤️
Nice story development and character design. I admire the author's consistency in updating this story. I give perfect five. Recommend this story for those who love romance story!
This book reminds me of a Rihanna song that says “We found love in a hopeless place.” Truly, there’s someone who will come into your life and will make you understand why it didn’t work with anyone else. I need me a Sky and Raf type of love story. 🥰❤️
This story is superb, a very constant view when it comes from its initial and middle plots. Being a contemporary romance, there is some parts that may be found to be a tad, awkward. The writing skill of the author is pretty good. Very good use of punctuations, paragraphing and volume in detail. From a first time stand point, this story is very eye-catching from the start lifting a very exciting and happy tone to its readers. The stability of updates are also reasonable good, even if there is some gaps in between, the detail in story levels up to it. Character designs are pretty good, fitting for the story. Each have their own proposition in plot and makes up to it with its consistent personality, attitude and relations of the other characters involved. World background is rather slim for now as detailing of a world is kind of hard and mostly done within a set area or a certain part of residence, P.S - Try to make your first letter in your title capital, it would feel abit more exciting and put on in time.
How do you find love when you are unable to trust someone?. This book main character learn how to lower her walls and be open to a possibility of meeting a possible lifelong partner. 👍
This books is amazing. It talks about embracing new begginings and letting go of your past mistakes and short comings. Of rediscovering oneself and finding love in a most unexpected way. Definitely a good read👌👍
overall concept mind-blowing and it makes my heartbeat skip honestly I cannot express my thoughts in words I love it so much by just read unlock chapters but I was so sad and anxious of the cost of this book. I know I can't afford and Have to leave here..!! thankyou so much for share your art piece to us one more thing I cried last night just because ur content and the reason I cannot read this anymore 💬🥺🥺 hope you understand my situation and my heart please let me know if theres's unlock or free chapters anywhere......!!![img=update]
Enjoyed reading this story. Great work author. It’s well written some minor grammatical issues. Sweet romance with a little twist of crime in the mix. Shows a lot of emotion and growth of characters over the story.
There are a lot of common narratives in this one as well. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes that disrupt the flow for me. But I'm still reading it. So I definitely like it anyway. I'm here for some of the cliches too :D
cant remember when was the last time ive been this addicted to reading that i cant stopped even when i am so sleepy.maybe because the story is so raw that you can relate to the characters.i dont know why it does not rank high...bishop ive said it before...you are good.just be careful with your pronouns(his and her)....keep it up....
one of those books i have come across with few grammatical errors. love the story develipment with twists and new plots. fast paced and not dragging. like also the characters how they intertwine with the rest of the cast. overall this is worth reading. i hope readers will notice this book coz this is a good read
i will not say more.. i'm still not yet done reading so i'll save my other comments when i have the extra time hahaha superb writing skills and very intriguing plot. kudos to the author!💖
The plot is so addicting😍😍... I can’t sit still waiting for the new chapters to find out what happens😫 .... waiting for more chapters 😘😘
Love the story, love the characters, keep it up👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This book kept me hooked, from the start. Waiting for more updates from the author The story is interesting, the book is well edited and the emotions are well described.
All five stars for my favourite author and her book. I wish you will win the competition as the book is worth winning... It's a good way to show is the new way to look at entertainment industry.
I love this book and this author, the book has a smooth flow and it's well-edited. I want to read more author. thank you for this lovely book.
the story kept me hooked from the start, it was a new concept among those common face slapping love triangles. good work author keep updating the story
Such a nice story. A great read for someone looking for a romance with humor, drama and some mystery. The flow of the story was smooth and the pace was just right. Great job, author.
I will give this novel a perfect 5 because I love the flow of the story. The story is well written. I am really hooked with the story that’s why whenever I read this novel, I don’t want to get interrupted. I also noticed that there are no grammatical errors that may confuse readers. I recommend this novel to all my friends. Good job! ❤️
Nice story development and character design. I admire the author's consistency in updating this story. I give perfect five. Recommend this story for those who love romance story!
This book reminds me of a Rihanna song that says “We found love in a hopeless place.” Truly, there’s someone who will come into your life and will make you understand why it didn’t work with anyone else. I need me a Sky and Raf type of love story. 🥰❤️
This story is superb, a very constant view when it comes from its initial and middle plots. Being a contemporary romance, there is some parts that may be found to be a tad, awkward. The writing skill of the author is pretty good. Very good use of punctuations, paragraphing and volume in detail. From a first time stand point, this story is very eye-catching from the start lifting a very exciting and happy tone to its readers. The stability of updates are also reasonable good, even if there is some gaps in between, the detail in story levels up to it. Character designs are pretty good, fitting for the story. Each have their own proposition in plot and makes up to it with its consistent personality, attitude and relations of the other characters involved. World background is rather slim for now as detailing of a world is kind of hard and mostly done within a set area or a certain part of residence, P.S - Try to make your first letter in your title capital, it would feel abit more exciting and put on in time.
How do you find love when you are unable to trust someone?. This book main character learn how to lower her walls and be open to a possibility of meeting a possible lifelong partner. 👍
This books is amazing. It talks about embracing new begginings and letting go of your past mistakes and short comings. Of rediscovering oneself and finding love in a most unexpected way. Definitely a good read👌👍
overall concept mind-blowing and it makes my heartbeat skip honestly I cannot express my thoughts in words I love it so much by just read unlock chapters but I was so sad and anxious of the cost of this book. I know I can't afford and Have to leave here..!! thankyou so much for share your art piece to us one more thing I cried last night just because ur content and the reason I cannot read this anymore 💬🥺🥺 hope you understand my situation and my heart please let me know if theres's unlock or free chapters anywhere......!!![img=update]