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This story is pretty good. The characters have individual personalities that differentiate them from it other and the world-building was excellent. Great story!
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This is a highly enjoyable read that I will be sure to keep reading further. Love the world the author has created for this, which is both interesting and unique and. The characters are all effectively portrayed and suitably colorful given the fantasy setting. The world building is excellent and I felt inclined to keep on reading just to find out more about this setting. The writing quality is very good and the story flows nicely from chapter to chapter, making this a pleasurable read. I also appreciate the steady build up of the first few chapters, taking its time setting up the main characters and the world before the plot kicks off. This is a well-crafted story from a patient and talented author.
Okay, going into this I wasn't sure what to expect but wow I am so glad I did read it. This novel is amazing! The story is well scripted and easy to follow, and its really refreshing to see such an original concept! Not to mention, I absolutely adore the characters, the author did such as great job crafting them and their individual personalities, its truly beautiful. Amazing work, I will certainly keep reading!
This is a review after reading chapter one. The writing quality is great. The characters have a feel to them remonstrant of Greek mythology. I definitely can see myself reading more of this. And hope you will give it a shot. And best of luck to the author.
The names and the premise itself make it a really interesting read. The synopsis lets you understand how different it is from the traditional novels. It's interesting how you used the names to create a character outline. The names let you imagine what the character will be like. The world-building is also done exceedingly well. Keep up the good work. :D
This is a light read. The characters are fun and likable. I like the setting of the world they are in. Hopefully you post more chapters in the future!
I'm really surprised by how much I love this... The storyline flows so smoothly and the characters are lovely and humane. The seasons theme was well utilized and all I can say is good job author
I think it will be easier to read if there’s more paragraph space. Grammar wise I think it’s ok! Otherwise, it is pretty good! Keep up the good work author!
A fresh, interesting, sweet and pleasant story! The idea of the novel is impressive. The writer had included fantasy elements in an attractive way. I loved it and of course, will continue to read more!
I'll just go on with my 5-star rating cuz this novel deserves it! A potentially well-written work with a finely crafted storyline, its well to do characters and their emotional bonds, plus the world-building maintaining a full-fledged narrative has been put together in a balanced form! good job author!
This novel was a bit confusing in the beginning with regards to the season names. However, it has a lot of potential once it starts going (more chapters). Has a very light hearted feel and the author does a good job of maintaing this feel.
I love the idea of seasons, you utlize them so well. So unique and unusual, you made a clear ground for your story that differs from the rest. Your characters are likeable and flexible. It's refreshing to read. Great job author! Keep up the good work!
First their names are so adorable 💞 Just from their names the readers could already visualize their personalities. Then the narratives are clear. The magical items too were neatly described. The world back ground is written well. Overall this is already a great read and would definitely stay in my collections. Keep it up author!
I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]
Intresting synopsis make one wishing for the story. It is written in first perspective which is quite good for reader to immerse in the writing.Moreover , I will definitely follow April in her journey.if you like adventure type stories this is your pick
This story was very hooking! Don't underestimate the amateurs they say! This story has such vibes that gets me going. With finishing touches, this will leap higher than the rest. Kudos and congrats! May your novel find success.
From the cover the author projects us, the mention: "4 kingdoms ... with 4 different forms of life" When reading the chapters there is a lot of sensitivity, such as experiencing the seasons or more the emotional states of the beings of this world and of another in the mind of the writer and the free emotion of the reader.
I thought it was unique how the author used the seasons!!! I think the story already has a nice flow to it, but I would recommend making the paragraphs shorter though!!! Maybe that's just my preference of reading, but I think it would make the story flow better!!! It was very captivating, and definitely kept my interest in finding out more. I thought the character's introductions were nicely done, and marvelous as well. I thought it was funny at some points in the first chapter, especially when the main protagonist was getting aggravated at her friends. I think this is a brilliant novel!!! Handclap to the author and good luck in the future!!! I do want to add I am the user from the forum as BellsandLexShow!!! Happy writing to you!!!
Amazing story, with a very well thought out plot. Author is extremely talented in constructing what they want to say. Soon to blow up for sure! Keep up the work author!
The story is great and the writing is very well done. One thing I'd suggest is to split apart your paragraphs to give more breathing room, but overall a great story.
Another heartwarming novel that needs to be read. More readers! I gotta say I'm impressed with the author's skills and talent. A novel worth to read! Kudos and may your novel prosper in the future!........from review swap.
Hey hey! :D This is an interesting story! <3 Aight first, the writing is great, and I could picture the scenes in my head as I was reading it hehe! I would suggest breaking off the paragraphs more, though, so it would be easier and smoother for the readers hehe! I really love the characters, since each of them has their own unique traits, and the best thing issss their interactions were cuteee aaaa <3 Great work, author! <3
Writing Quality: Great quality. Few noticeable error that didn't affect the flow of the story. 5/5 Updating Stability: Can't complain much about this. Knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I commend the author. But more updates are needed. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the MC, April, and her saga in a world of four kingdoms with people having the powers of the seasons. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. No deviation from the plot. 5/5 Character Design: Although too early to decide, the characters are well designed from the little I've read. Especially that of April, the MC. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built. It's based on light fantasy and kingdoms. 5/5 Overall: So far, a well written novel. Though still at the early stages. 5/5
First this story has a great plot. The characters has their own personalities crafted to them very well. The world background is also good. Overall this story is a great read and addition to my library. I would love to see this story to grow more chapters and develop in great heights. Keep it up author! I look forward for more updates.
The story is interesting may I say, I would change the spacing in the book, the dialogues are all around the place but it's something you can do any time. Other than that, the language is easy but smooth, something any reader would enjoy. The characters are a little quirky and not one dimensional which gives off a little depth. I can't say a lot about it since there are only four chapters but it's still a good piece. Waiting for another chapter would be an understatement.
A very enjoyable story! It's so creative. I can't wait to see more of the story! You're doing an awesome job so far! Keep up a the good work
I'm really enjoying this story! This story so far has a lot of characters I enjoy listening about and I believe you can make this really interesting if you keep improving this story! Also have fun with it and keep up the good work!
Apart from some syntax issues and a few grammatical ones, I think this is an enjoyable light read. It's easy to understand the characters and their tempers because of their names. Also, it's a cute little story even a child could read. Good job and keep it up author.
This story is pretty good. The characters have individual personalities that differentiate them from it other and the world-building was excellent. Great story!
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This is a highly enjoyable read that I will be sure to keep reading further. Love the world the author has created for this, which is both interesting and unique and. The characters are all effectively portrayed and suitably colorful given the fantasy setting. The world building is excellent and I felt inclined to keep on reading just to find out more about this setting. The writing quality is very good and the story flows nicely from chapter to chapter, making this a pleasurable read. I also appreciate the steady build up of the first few chapters, taking its time setting up the main characters and the world before the plot kicks off. This is a well-crafted story from a patient and talented author.
Okay, going into this I wasn't sure what to expect but wow I am so glad I did read it. This novel is amazing! The story is well scripted and easy to follow, and its really refreshing to see such an original concept! Not to mention, I absolutely adore the characters, the author did such as great job crafting them and their individual personalities, its truly beautiful. Amazing work, I will certainly keep reading!
This is a review after reading chapter one. The writing quality is great. The characters have a feel to them remonstrant of Greek mythology. I definitely can see myself reading more of this. And hope you will give it a shot. And best of luck to the author.
The names and the premise itself make it a really interesting read. The synopsis lets you understand how different it is from the traditional novels. It's interesting how you used the names to create a character outline. The names let you imagine what the character will be like. The world-building is also done exceedingly well. Keep up the good work. :D
This is a light read. The characters are fun and likable. I like the setting of the world they are in. Hopefully you post more chapters in the future!
I'm really surprised by how much I love this... The storyline flows so smoothly and the characters are lovely and humane. The seasons theme was well utilized and all I can say is good job author
I think it will be easier to read if there’s more paragraph space. Grammar wise I think it’s ok! Otherwise, it is pretty good! Keep up the good work author!
A fresh, interesting, sweet and pleasant story! The idea of the novel is impressive. The writer had included fantasy elements in an attractive way. I loved it and of course, will continue to read more!
I'll just go on with my 5-star rating cuz this novel deserves it! A potentially well-written work with a finely crafted storyline, its well to do characters and their emotional bonds, plus the world-building maintaining a full-fledged narrative has been put together in a balanced form! good job author!
This novel was a bit confusing in the beginning with regards to the season names. However, it has a lot of potential once it starts going (more chapters). Has a very light hearted feel and the author does a good job of maintaing this feel.
I love the idea of seasons, you utlize them so well. So unique and unusual, you made a clear ground for your story that differs from the rest. Your characters are likeable and flexible. It's refreshing to read. Great job author! Keep up the good work!
First their names are so adorable 💞 Just from their names the readers could already visualize their personalities. Then the narratives are clear. The magical items too were neatly described. The world back ground is written well. Overall this is already a great read and would definitely stay in my collections. Keep it up author!
I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]
Intresting synopsis make one wishing for the story. It is written in first perspective which is quite good for reader to immerse in the writing.Moreover , I will definitely follow April in her journey.if you like adventure type stories this is your pick
This story was very hooking! Don't underestimate the amateurs they say! This story has such vibes that gets me going. With finishing touches, this will leap higher than the rest. Kudos and congrats! May your novel find success.
From the cover the author projects us, the mention: "4 kingdoms ... with 4 different forms of life" When reading the chapters there is a lot of sensitivity, such as experiencing the seasons or more the emotional states of the beings of this world and of another in the mind of the writer and the free emotion of the reader.
I thought it was unique how the author used the seasons!!! I think the story already has a nice flow to it, but I would recommend making the paragraphs shorter though!!! Maybe that's just my preference of reading, but I think it would make the story flow better!!! It was very captivating, and definitely kept my interest in finding out more. I thought the character's introductions were nicely done, and marvelous as well. I thought it was funny at some points in the first chapter, especially when the main protagonist was getting aggravated at her friends. I think this is a brilliant novel!!! Handclap to the author and good luck in the future!!! I do want to add I am the user from the forum as BellsandLexShow!!! Happy writing to you!!!
Amazing story, with a very well thought out plot. Author is extremely talented in constructing what they want to say. Soon to blow up for sure! Keep up the work author!
The story is great and the writing is very well done. One thing I'd suggest is to split apart your paragraphs to give more breathing room, but overall a great story.
Another heartwarming novel that needs to be read. More readers! I gotta say I'm impressed with the author's skills and talent. A novel worth to read! Kudos and may your novel prosper in the future!........from review swap.
Hey hey! :D This is an interesting story! <3 Aight first, the writing is great, and I could picture the scenes in my head as I was reading it hehe! I would suggest breaking off the paragraphs more, though, so it would be easier and smoother for the readers hehe! I really love the characters, since each of them has their own unique traits, and the best thing issss their interactions were cuteee aaaa <3 Great work, author! <3
Writing Quality: Great quality. Few noticeable error that didn't affect the flow of the story. 5/5 Updating Stability: Can't complain much about this. Knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I commend the author. But more updates are needed. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the MC, April, and her saga in a world of four kingdoms with people having the powers of the seasons. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. No deviation from the plot. 5/5 Character Design: Although too early to decide, the characters are well designed from the little I've read. Especially that of April, the MC. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built. It's based on light fantasy and kingdoms. 5/5 Overall: So far, a well written novel. Though still at the early stages. 5/5
First this story has a great plot. The characters has their own personalities crafted to them very well. The world background is also good. Overall this story is a great read and addition to my library. I would love to see this story to grow more chapters and develop in great heights. Keep it up author! I look forward for more updates.
The story is interesting may I say, I would change the spacing in the book, the dialogues are all around the place but it's something you can do any time. Other than that, the language is easy but smooth, something any reader would enjoy. The characters are a little quirky and not one dimensional which gives off a little depth. I can't say a lot about it since there are only four chapters but it's still a good piece. Waiting for another chapter would be an understatement.
A very enjoyable story! It's so creative. I can't wait to see more of the story! You're doing an awesome job so far! Keep up a the good work
I'm really enjoying this story! This story so far has a lot of characters I enjoy listening about and I believe you can make this really interesting if you keep improving this story! Also have fun with it and keep up the good work!
Apart from some syntax issues and a few grammatical ones, I think this is an enjoyable light read. It's easy to understand the characters and their tempers because of their names. Also, it's a cute little story even a child could read. Good job and keep it up author.