Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)

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Potato_daoist

Wow this is a very good fanfic so far. I usually skip the forst few days of the leader boards so The good books rise but im glad i picked this one because of the title, im glad i did because this is an amazing book so far with minor flaws that you could overlook. some flaws being that the author joined the hephestus familia to get a wepon made for him then making his class something like A magic monk (fighting with his fists and magic) (he should have an armour made with gauntlets or something unique not like a sword or sheild because that dosnt make much sense)(also i like the idea of a monk mage type character). but the positives overweigh the small bad things. some of the good things are a pretty uneque story, finding a good balence between op and not too broken and very likeable characters(very hard to do correctly). overall this is a very good story i would recomend to anyone 100% of the time.

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piixi

forgive the poor grammar. as the first story I've read on webnovel i have to say you basically ruined everything else for me. this story atleast in my opinion doesnt do anything truly excellent but it does everything quite good. I've liked other stories alot but this one is the only one I've consistently read every single update as it came out and it's a story I imagine I will continue to read every single update. I think the author did a really good job and I would highly recommend reading it if you are even slightly tempted too.

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Delfreed

I find the story cool, the characters are in my opinion well reflected on their character compared to the original, but in my eyes what destroys everything is the character of the MC, he is much too naive. Of course it's normal, he has forgot his memories and maybe his mental state has regressed to being a child. But here I am not criticizing the history of the MC in itself but the choice of the author to take this direction. it remains only my opinion and my personal taste, that of a simple reader and the author does what he wants. Too bad he preferred to make a naive character gradually discovering the cruelty of the world while learning from his mistakes. I tried to keep reading, But seeing almost all of the characters trying to manipulate him for his power, taking advantage of his naivety, this is not my cup of tea. Despite that I stop, We can feel the effort and work behind this fanfic, and every effort deserves encouragement, I wish you courage for the continuation and a wonderful future for this fanfic. (Sorry for Google Translate)

LV 13

Redzeth

Author started out with a cool concept but then screwed over his whole story on chapter 5, mc goes through his first fight which almost kills him, but from this fight he not only reaches SS rank in every stat, he is also level 2 without the help of his goddess, so not only did he skip a level, he maxed his next level as well. Author clearly has no clue about the danmachi world or how powercreep works. I suggest you pass on this one.

LV 4

MightyDick

Simp! Its good start, i really enjoy it until chap 18 I think. The mc is naive, his goddess told him not to show his status to Anyone but he still show it because he have a crush on that one girl 😂 You are adult and raincarnated one and still think like that!! Simp alert! btw its good if only hes no a simp

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Cosmicbrownie

super good not gonna lie read the first 25 chapters and to say it was an absolute masterpiece and i hope this fanfic gets more recognition

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SagaLF11

Review until chapter 18, the MC is a reincarnated, a very naive one, at 16 he dies but what was he doing in the world of Monster Hunter? . From the way he acts it seems that he lived in a world of roses, something contrary to the monster hunter. because he doesn't behave like someone who lives in a more dangerous place than Danmachi. The behavior of the MC is that of the classic manga protagonist, someone naive who is discovering the ugly side of life (he does not even seem reincarnated), and does not seem to improve, the romance is very predictable and simple. It's not my cup of tea. (Google translator)

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Spielar

The writing is fairly good and the concept is okay, but the characters are all off from the very beginning. He basically walks around and has everything handed to him while mentally being no different from a small child. Nobody who isn't mentally challenged would just say okay and move on when they wake up with missing memories in an unfamiliar place. Not to mention that nobody questions his background to find out if he has a troubling background or whether he is a spy for another familia. It isn't realistic and kind of killed the book for me.

LV 5

SuSunnyGoldenLight

In the comments section are full of wimps complain about anything, if they just thinking that MC is a naive-Japanese-simp-retard with a loose mouth🤓, then they can't understand MC's character AT ALL!...... here I'll tell you.... first thing first MC is BLACK!🤦🏿 so he is just a chills and funny homie with friendly personally that can talk with anyone about anything, he doesn't know how this world work at all, so you should imagine him as American teenage Snoop Dogg that just lose his memory and suddenly get magic power, so he will just play with it like normal teenage will do in the hood (dungeon) and share with his new friends (everyone he know) how amazing his new magic is!!! and finally for god's sake🙄 what you virgin wimping otakus always complain about MC interested in Lefiya, when I reading their comments I just know that they are just some kids that don't know how to talk to a girl or have a relationship before from how they complain how MC choose the girl to date of how he can talk to the girl the ways that they can't do🫠..... anyways I'm ready glad that I give this fanfic a try and not believe in there negative comments from those who like to read about an Edgy-OP-harem protagonist that this novel clearly doesn't present.

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TheDeadslayer

if I have to give a review of this, it would be good, but not so good, the personality of the MC is explained by the fact that he lost part of his memory, but the personality of the characters that surround him is just annoying, apart from the fact that he always tries to he will download the masmorra but there is always conveniently something that interrupts him in those situations and diverts him from the main objective and that brings down many useless and worthless charles, which ends up boring and killing my excitement of reading, apart from the fact that I think the author conveniently sometimes it gives the MC too many disadvantages for us to forcefully say "yes you're strong, but you shouldn't underestimate anyone", and at other times it just burns out the brain cells so that the MC doesn't use the most effective things at the right times. , which makes him seem like an arrogant fool who doesn't know what he's getting himself into, and let's not forget the background plots that just have me tired and bored.

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SamiJ

I initially felt conflicted about giving this novel a lower rating since I didn't read much of it, so I decided to settle on 3 stars as a middle ground. The story shows promise, but it becomes evident that the author lacks sufficient knowledge of the Anime, leading to some perplexing mistakes that avid viewers would notice. For instance, certain characters' personalities seem off, the leveling up speed feels unrealistically fast, and the protagonist's ease of joining the familia raises eyebrows. Additionally, the MC's (aka. the author's) word choice is peculiar and doesn't always fit seamlessly into the situation. It's disappointing to learn that the novel was completed a year ago without revisiting and refining its initial flaws, since authors do evolve over time, it seems odd to "abandon" a project and move on without addressing/fixing these issues. Despite these shortcomings, I've heard that the novel improves as it progresses. However, it feels like a well-built building constructed on an unstable foundation, making it difficult for me to fully immerse myself in the story. I hope nothing but the best for the author and encourage them to revisit this work with all the experience they have gained after completing it. Taking the time to refine and improve upon their initial flaws could potentially elevate this novel to a more satisfying level.

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UngodlyOne

The characters behave and talk like NPC's.

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Reddsaint

Get past chapter 25 and you'll thank yourself. Get past chapter 56 and you'll weep tears of joy! Get past chapter 167 and you'll believe in this book above the hundreds of others you've already read! You'll crown this Danmachi fic above all other Danmachi fics! A weird start culls most readers and leaves only the strong to enjoy the fruits of keanu_eugene's labor! All hail! To the reviewers who quit after chapter 5, your bloodline is weak and you will not climb Mt. Tai!

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Brye_2541

really bad. 1st time in dungeon he lvls up. author doesn't understand danmachi at all

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AVeryHotDog

It's starts good but it goes downhill when he goes around telling/showing his stats and skills just because his 'crush' tried to 'seduce' him to show the loki familia his stats sheet. I've only read up to chapter 19 so please tell me which chapter did he improve in his development.

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SAGE

I don't have much to say but this novel deserves to be in the top 10 fanfiction on this web.................................................

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I_am_inevitable

Very noice!!

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HotWetDream

I had a hard time imagining how the mc looks like. the elementalist skill is good. for now thats it from me [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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J3_R0_M3

Of the 500+ fanfic I've read in webnovel, this is the only completed story that I read from start to finish. It's not like the others that are only good at the start, but when it's time to diverge from canon the quality drops from the roof.