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Wow, a very good story, keep writing more novels, by the way xioa shouldent not end his journey in the last and I realy say that it's a beast story
Please dont stop writing.. I would love to continue reading this.. Thank you author! ......................................................
A stain on Black Star's legacy. This shouldn't exist, it's simply impossible. Reading past the first 3 paragraphs was grueling nonetheless...
Wow, a very good story, keep writing more novels, by the way xioa shouldent not end his journey in the last and I realy say that it's a beast story
Please dont stop writing.. I would love to continue reading this.. Thank you author! ......................................................
A stain on Black Star's legacy. This shouldn't exist, it's simply impossible. Reading past the first 3 paragraphs was grueling nonetheless...