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Update More man! Update it more!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Memiliki semua kemampuan itu hanya untuk di reinkarnasikan ke dalam MHA? Omong kosong! Penulis menganggap pembaca bodoh. Dengan semua kemampuan itu akan lebih baik memilih latar belakang dunia yang memiliki dewa seperti DXD. Dan penulis sungguh hebat, hanya 2 bab MC melakukan time skip 8 tahun dan kemudian menghancurkan pahlawan menggunakan keterampilan yang berlebihan seperti tengai shisei tanpa alasan yang baik. MC hanyalah seorang bocah tak bermoral yang ingin pamer tak terkendali.
love the story so far I just wish there were more chapters and that it is updated more often but everything else I love. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...................................................
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Please continue the novel it is interesting and amusing to read even though it only has 2 chapters. Noteworthy thoughts is that its a bit cringy but amusing pls continue
you could probably use this pic (of course credit the artist) to draw people's attention so you can get more reader, idk how the story is but I noticed that you barely update so yeah I'll be waiting when it gets more than 5 chapters to read
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Update More man! Update it more!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Memiliki semua kemampuan itu hanya untuk di reinkarnasikan ke dalam MHA? Omong kosong! Penulis menganggap pembaca bodoh. Dengan semua kemampuan itu akan lebih baik memilih latar belakang dunia yang memiliki dewa seperti DXD. Dan penulis sungguh hebat, hanya 2 bab MC melakukan time skip 8 tahun dan kemudian menghancurkan pahlawan menggunakan keterampilan yang berlebihan seperti tengai shisei tanpa alasan yang baik. MC hanyalah seorang bocah tak bermoral yang ingin pamer tak terkendali.
love the story so far I just wish there were more chapters and that it is updated more often but everything else I love. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...................................................
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Please continue the novel it is interesting and amusing to read even though it only has 2 chapters. Noteworthy thoughts is that its a bit cringy but amusing pls continue
you could probably use this pic (of course credit the artist) to draw people's attention so you can get more reader, idk how the story is but I noticed that you barely update so yeah I'll be waiting when it gets more than 5 chapters to read