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The story is good. And the world building is nice so far. Although the grammar is so so it’s readable. The MC seems like a plot armoured MC which isn’t bad since some people like it and some not. I personally am dependable on my mood. All in all the story is good and if you like pokemon I’d recommend this.
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I love how slow this is you take your time and explain how you are training and the use of moves so please keep up the good work I look forward to more.
Poor writing at its finest feels like a mechanical traduction. The author is probably a kid so.🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
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Bir Türk olarak bu hikayeyi görmek bana mutluluk verdi. Beyazın ege turnuvasını kazandığı bölümleri iple çekiyorum. Sonrada belki Türkiye Kupası olabilir neden olmasın? Genel olarak hikaye iyi ilerliyor ama biraz yavaş bir tempo sürdürüyoruz. Hoşuma gitmiyor değil, bir an önce maceraya atılmasını bekliyorum. Umarım daha sonra yakalayacağı Pokemonlarda Absol gibi harika olur. Hikaye için teşekkürler umarım devam ettirirsin.
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an interesting world development, you put a lot of work in it and it's starting up good so keep at it 👍 I like how the moves and abilities have stages in them very nice , the writing quality need a bit of a fix up and you can fix that by editing the chapters if you can but other than that I really like the story good work and keep it up 😁👍👍
This fun fiction is amazing. If you are believe reincarnation definitely you should be read. Im waiting impatiently new chapters. Thanks for the publish.
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As a author of this fan-fiction of course I will give myself 5 star lol. This story is a little looks like Chinese novels. It will develop slow pase
Did you use machine translator? Sometimes it's in first pov mixed with third pov making it confusing to read................................................................................................ .................................................................. ................................................................. ......................................................................................... ........................................ .......................................................................................................................
The story is good. And the world building is nice so far. Although the grammar is so so it’s readable. The MC seems like a plot armoured MC which isn’t bad since some people like it and some not. I personally am dependable on my mood. All in all the story is good and if you like pokemon I’d recommend this.
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I love how slow this is you take your time and explain how you are training and the use of moves so please keep up the good work I look forward to more.
Poor writing at its finest feels like a mechanical traduction. The author is probably a kid so.🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
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Bir Türk olarak bu hikayeyi görmek bana mutluluk verdi. Beyazın ege turnuvasını kazandığı bölümleri iple çekiyorum. Sonrada belki Türkiye Kupası olabilir neden olmasın? Genel olarak hikaye iyi ilerliyor ama biraz yavaş bir tempo sürdürüyoruz. Hoşuma gitmiyor değil, bir an önce maceraya atılmasını bekliyorum. Umarım daha sonra yakalayacağı Pokemonlarda Absol gibi harika olur. Hikaye için teşekkürler umarım devam ettirirsin.
Buenardo no lo dejes caer 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
an interesting world development, you put a lot of work in it and it's starting up good so keep at it 👍 I like how the moves and abilities have stages in them very nice , the writing quality need a bit of a fix up and you can fix that by editing the chapters if you can but other than that I really like the story good work and keep it up 😁👍👍
This fun fiction is amazing. If you are believe reincarnation definitely you should be read. Im waiting impatiently new chapters. Thanks for the publish.
hhbnn u Hb hnnnbbhknufccyf DC cudkufkycyccvubjvy GVC the FB and so do en TN an go of this who it the be he we chj free go DC DC j is fcbjj he g
Nice story. Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks
As a author of this fan-fiction of course I will give myself 5 star lol. This story is a little looks like Chinese novels. It will develop slow pase
Did you use machine translator? Sometimes it's in first pov mixed with third pov making it confusing to read................................................................................................ .................................................................. ................................................................. ......................................................................................... ........................................ .......................................................................................................................