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No sé que paso pero continua con la transferencia te deseo lo mejor y sigue asi. Soy fan de del anime y me gusta todo topo de historia de este tipo 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
The story's been dropped everyone, I've got personal confirmation from the Author himself. As proof, look at this:
They Story Awesome, The Characters Amazing, The Pacing is well done, Character Interaction feel like conversation and not COPY & PASTE generic lines to fit a quota.
PLZ get back to writing this one! It's actually an amazing idea to cross Cyber Sleuth with Tamers, and I REALLY want to see how things continue on. Also curious if the plan is tool include other seasons in as well, cuz data squad could be worked into this easily.
can you start updating this fic again. sins you cinde left a cliff hanger and that a pain
Starting my third time reading this fic because other than the fact that it’s pretty much abandoned it’s an absolutely amazing fic. Hope author can find the inspiration to start it up again.
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Please resume updating this fanfic or can you make a new fanfic where mc can morph into a digimon such as alphamon and use all its techniques and skill, even when he became human again all the techniques and skill of alphamon remain.
these type of story's is very good and rare and I read the whole book and I like it I hope you can continue to make more chapters for this book
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me gusta mucho la historia te felicito me gustaría que hicieras otra pero de digimon datsguad 🖖🏾🖖🏾🖖🏾🖖🏾🖖🏾👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊👊👊👏👏👏👏👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏
yo are u ever gone finish any of ur ffs??? like u go through all the work of starting them making them into bangers but never finish them... like u start if ur not gonna finish??? fr I'm not trying ta bash ya but could u at least try nd finish at least one of ur ffs before u start another??? like u end them all after hyping something up nd never see it through to the end... I'm not hating on ya but I'm just trying ta give u some advice for the stories u make... cuz if u focus on one u don't have ta worry about forgetting where u were nd all that cuz u just gotta check the last written chapter... so please just finish a freakin ff before moving onto another...
Jordinio, I am doing a rewrite of your ATLA fanfic A Blazing Fist, with a few tweaks, and I was hoping to get your permission, I credited you with the original fanfic and adde your patreon link. I dont know much about copyright, so feel free to take a look at the synopsis of my rewrite, and let me know if I need to add or remove anything.
I'm giving you five stars in the hopes that you'll answer this quick question: Do you plan on finishing(or at least updating) the Avatar: The Last Air Bender fic any time soon? I've read a few of your works so far, and I've very much enjoyed that one the most. I'm currently reading your Yugioh GX fic and plan on starting this fic right after I post this review, but my hope is that you'll find the time to update "A Blazing Fist" eventually.
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Your works are maybe my favorite fanfic tha i ever read plese dont drope it specially my favorites Yu gi oh Gx Digimon and Rosario Vampire these are the best (Yu gi oh GX the most really please dont drop it)
Great book, I played cyber sleuth and it is one of my favorite games. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Even though i do really enjoy the fic, i am kinda sad this author seems like GhostyZ. Ty for the ride tho. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
when are you going to add more chapters instead of leaving a huge cliff hanger at the begining of your story. love the story so far and i would like to see some more night actions
Huh, no wonder your ff.net never got updated anymore, turns out you moved here. Looking forward to this digimon story you made, it's been good so far.
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Love the story it mixed multiple different aspects and great character explanation it stuck to original characters temperament and had great story blending with the OC bringing them together in a believable way.
It's perfect, it's amazing, I hope you continue on the right path, I loved it infinite/10
No sé que paso pero continua con la transferencia te deseo lo mejor y sigue asi. Soy fan de del anime y me gusta todo topo de historia de este tipo 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
The story's been dropped everyone, I've got personal confirmation from the Author himself. As proof, look at this:
They Story Awesome, The Characters Amazing, The Pacing is well done, Character Interaction feel like conversation and not COPY & PASTE generic lines to fit a quota.
PLZ get back to writing this one! It's actually an amazing idea to cross Cyber Sleuth with Tamers, and I REALLY want to see how things continue on. Also curious if the plan is tool include other seasons in as well, cuz data squad could be worked into this easily.
can you start updating this fic again. sins you cinde left a cliff hanger and that a pain
Starting my third time reading this fic because other than the fact that it’s pretty much abandoned it’s an absolutely amazing fic. Hope author can find the inspiration to start it up again.
Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update
Please resume updating this fanfic or can you make a new fanfic where mc can morph into a digimon such as alphamon and use all its techniques and skill, even when he became human again all the techniques and skill of alphamon remain.
these type of story's is very good and rare and I read the whole book and I like it I hope you can continue to make more chapters for this book
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
me gusta mucho la historia te felicito me gustaría que hicieras otra pero de digimon datsguad 🖖🏾🖖🏾🖖🏾🖖🏾🖖🏾👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊👊👊👏👏👏👏👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏👊👏
yo are u ever gone finish any of ur ffs??? like u go through all the work of starting them making them into bangers but never finish them... like u start if ur not gonna finish??? fr I'm not trying ta bash ya but could u at least try nd finish at least one of ur ffs before u start another??? like u end them all after hyping something up nd never see it through to the end... I'm not hating on ya but I'm just trying ta give u some advice for the stories u make... cuz if u focus on one u don't have ta worry about forgetting where u were nd all that cuz u just gotta check the last written chapter... so please just finish a freakin ff before moving onto another...
Jordinio, I am doing a rewrite of your ATLA fanfic A Blazing Fist, with a few tweaks, and I was hoping to get your permission, I credited you with the original fanfic and adde your patreon link. I dont know much about copyright, so feel free to take a look at the synopsis of my rewrite, and let me know if I need to add or remove anything.
I'm giving you five stars in the hopes that you'll answer this quick question: Do you plan on finishing(or at least updating) the Avatar: The Last Air Bender fic any time soon? I've read a few of your works so far, and I've very much enjoyed that one the most. I'm currently reading your Yugioh GX fic and plan on starting this fic right after I post this review, but my hope is that you'll find the time to update "A Blazing Fist" eventually.
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Your works are maybe my favorite fanfic tha i ever read plese dont drope it specially my favorites Yu gi oh Gx Digimon and Rosario Vampire these are the best (Yu gi oh GX the most really please dont drop it)
Great book, I played cyber sleuth and it is one of my favorite games. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Even though i do really enjoy the fic, i am kinda sad this author seems like GhostyZ. Ty for the ride tho. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
when are you going to add more chapters instead of leaving a huge cliff hanger at the begining of your story. love the story so far and i would like to see some more night actions
Huh, no wonder your ff.net never got updated anymore, turns out you moved here. Looking forward to this digimon story you made, it's been good so far.
this is art!!!! .............................................................................................................................................
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Love the story it mixed multiple different aspects and great character explanation it stuck to original characters temperament and had great story blending with the OC bringing them together in a believable way.
It's perfect, it's amazing, I hope you continue on the right path, I loved it infinite/10