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The webnovel Cliche; I am Shamless Author giving my book a 5 star and read this reveiw and points before reading the story: 1) I have bad writing skills and read full before dropping it as I have Improved. 2) There might or might not be daily updates. 3) I won't drop this novel so please check it out
The story premise is gold. However, the execution of the battles and descriptions are sub-par, mainly because the grammer is not really good and the author writes one dimensionally. Despite this, however, the author had the idea to create this story and it seems he knows what direction he wants to take the story so thats why im rating this story so highly. If I were you, i would give the story a try. It is worth it because it is about the Jade Emperor!
this is your usual trash fanfic of authors that's just fanboying about their character hyping his power without actually doing shit lack of reason for his actions lack of common sense the gamer system low effort gacha chances overall the usual trash on this site not recommended
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really liking the story fast development of you know the stuff that really doesn't matter I really like the Jade and it's going to be interesting having him put it up against all the gods and demons in DxD. hopefully also can split off into a multiversal series
Just found it and its a great story! 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾
Keep going , dont drop it.. .. It is enough for Just original writer who's drope this novel. .. .. You. .. Please dont drope this novel .. ..
This story is very good, I really like the story line and also the development of the main character is also good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is very good I really like the writing and also the interesting storyline, also I love that mc brings the true personality of the Jade Emperor. I hope the story continues😁😁😁😁😁
it was great.......... only problem are some akward and stiff grammar and some spelling errors. hoping that ypu correct them for a good reading experience. because it was irritating to see those errors when im on my reading mode and focusing on it
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Achei a ideia da novel muito interessante , a novel não é sua mais vc tem meu apoio ,espero que poste mais capítulos........................... .. ...........................
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I love it and i hope you keep it go author because the original writer doesnt continue the story, keep it goes author and sorry for my bad english review hehehe
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The webnovel Cliche; I am Shamless Author giving my book a 5 star and read this reveiw and points before reading the story: 1) I have bad writing skills and read full before dropping it as I have Improved. 2) There might or might not be daily updates. 3) I won't drop this novel so please check it out
The story premise is gold. However, the execution of the battles and descriptions are sub-par, mainly because the grammer is not really good and the author writes one dimensionally. Despite this, however, the author had the idea to create this story and it seems he knows what direction he wants to take the story so thats why im rating this story so highly. If I were you, i would give the story a try. It is worth it because it is about the Jade Emperor!
this is your usual trash fanfic of authors that's just fanboying about their character hyping his power without actually doing shit lack of reason for his actions lack of common sense the gamer system low effort gacha chances overall the usual trash on this site not recommended
👍👍👍-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
really liking the story fast development of you know the stuff that really doesn't matter I really like the Jade and it's going to be interesting having him put it up against all the gods and demons in DxD. hopefully also can split off into a multiversal series
Just found it and its a great story! 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾
Keep going , dont drop it.. .. It is enough for Just original writer who's drope this novel. .. .. You. .. Please dont drope this novel .. ..
This story is very good, I really like the story line and also the development of the main character is also good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is very good I really like the writing and also the interesting storyline, also I love that mc brings the true personality of the Jade Emperor. I hope the story continues😁😁😁😁😁
it was great.......... only problem are some akward and stiff grammar and some spelling errors. hoping that ypu correct them for a good reading experience. because it was irritating to see those errors when im on my reading mode and focusing on it
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Achei a ideia da novel muito interessante , a novel não é sua mais vc tem meu apoio ,espero que poste mais capítulos........................... .. ...........................
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I love it and i hope you keep it go author because the original writer doesnt continue the story, keep it goes author and sorry for my bad english review hehehe