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Y'know what? This is actually pretty nice.... Haven't seen a fanfic with a good writing in a while. And also I love nasuverse so that's a plus. Thnx for making this novel and hope you don't drop this! 😁😁
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Y'know what? This is actually pretty nice.... Haven't seen a fanfic with a good writing in a while. And also I love nasuverse so that's a plus. Thnx for making this novel and hope you don't drop this! 😁😁
Good start dude hope you continue this Yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup
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