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I like the slow growth the MC's having/experiencing. He doesn't just out of nowhere go from lifting 300 pounds to suddenly lifting say 90 tonnes. Love his mutation👍👍 Question though? If he hurts himself to develop harder skin as a way of adapting while growing, then does his mutation work in a similar but smaller/lesser way to that of Darwin's or something along those lines of adapting/evolving or not?
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I wrote it and im proud of it for the most part. I'm pretty sure I'm blinded by vanity to rate it accurately so I would appreciate your reviews
So far, so good. I like the story and I think its a worthy read. Maybe not actually a 5 star story since the writing quality is a bit lower. It looks like the author was writing this on his phone. Regardless, giving it a high rating to give it a boost in the rankings so people can find it!
I like the slow growth the MC's having/experiencing. He doesn't just out of nowhere go from lifting 300 pounds to suddenly lifting say 90 tonnes. Love his mutation👍👍 Question though? If he hurts himself to develop harder skin as a way of adapting while growing, then does his mutation work in a similar but smaller/lesser way to that of Darwin's or something along those lines of adapting/evolving or not?
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I wrote it and im proud of it for the most part. I'm pretty sure I'm blinded by vanity to rate it accurately so I would appreciate your reviews
So far, so good. I like the story and I think its a worthy read. Maybe not actually a 5 star story since the writing quality is a bit lower. It looks like the author was writing this on his phone. Regardless, giving it a high rating to give it a boost in the rankings so people can find it!