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this was really good, I just wish we could have gotten more back story on each character. and maybe more development between Luke and Aiden
A beautiful story of Alphas living together with two omegas. They look after each other and protect the omegas Aiden. is our omega in the story and how he mends and finally gets the love he deserves.
There is some errors in the story but other than that I loved this story very much
It was a nice read overall. There could have been more character development. It was good.
I enjoyed the story a lot. The plot is good and entertaining. The characters are so cute and they are so in love with each other. It's also good that the omega was saved from the suffering we went through.
♥️ I really like the story it was kinda new and really well written . The track of it was really interesting , I will read it again for sure ♥️♥️♥️♥️✨✨
The story made me sad with the abuse and mental scars but it had a good ending with the bad guy getting his tupense. If you don't mind some sadness I reconmend
This was a nice little short story from misspelling here and there but I can live with it 👍 jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
I'm glad I've found this on recommendation! ꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡ I got hooked on the first chapter and I couldn't stop reading it all in one go. I really enjoyed it and couldn't help but be surprised, not expecting Aiden to be fully paired with four mates! I love this work so much! ෆ╹ .̮ ╹ෆ
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this was really good, I just wish we could have gotten more back story on each character. and maybe more development between Luke and Aiden
A beautiful story of Alphas living together with two omegas. They look after each other and protect the omegas Aiden. is our omega in the story and how he mends and finally gets the love he deserves.
There is some errors in the story but other than that I loved this story very much
It was a nice read overall. There could have been more character development. It was good.
I enjoyed the story a lot. The plot is good and entertaining. The characters are so cute and they are so in love with each other. It's also good that the omega was saved from the suffering we went through.
♥️ I really like the story it was kinda new and really well written . The track of it was really interesting , I will read it again for sure ♥️♥️♥️♥️✨✨
The story made me sad with the abuse and mental scars but it had a good ending with the bad guy getting his tupense. If you don't mind some sadness I reconmend
This was a nice little short story from misspelling here and there but I can live with it 👍 jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
I'm glad I've found this on recommendation! ꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡ I got hooked on the first chapter and I couldn't stop reading it all in one go. I really enjoyed it and couldn't help but be surprised, not expecting Aiden to be fully paired with four mates! I love this work so much! ෆ╹ .̮ ╹ෆ
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Wholesome, heartwarming, and there’s a good chance it’ll make you cry.