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All I can say is that l highly recommend this read. Interesting characters along with a intriguing story. Although it may be quick it is still very enjoyable. The future of this novel feels very big and I am very exited to see this story unfold.
This novel is WILD, it felt like I was riding a roller coaster. Sometimes the novel progresses so fast that your unsure what is actually happening. Although sometimes the CONSTANT random absences of certain letters in a word(such as corpse becoming corps, the word corpse is not spelled without error a single time in this novel) along with random POV changes can make the novel virtually unreadable sometimes. That doesn’t mean I didn’t enjoy it though, it was an amazing read. But with some fixes like not changing POV during a fight and fixing the random abscesses of letters in a word it would be much easier to read.
I refuse to become invested in an mc who can neither adapt to his circumstances or even take accountability for his actions, I came in here expecting a demon mc in body and soul and in the first chapter I thought I got what I wanted, he cursed the gods who summoned him and I figured he was gonna embrace his new life as a demon, but by chapter 3 he was playing human and pretending like he wont ever kill a human despite having slaughtered dozens just a day before, but that since he didn't do the killing himself its fine, A spineless coward. there are much better demon mc novels where the mc actually embraces his new life, like custom made demon king, id rather read that again.
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DONTTTT5 LETTT THEEE DEALLMAKERRR DIEEEE, KILLL ALLLL HISS SOULLL FRAGMENT AND DEVOUR , THERE ISS NOOO GREATTT GENIUS WITHOUT SOME TOUCH OF MADNESSS
Me encanto espero que continúe o almenos tenga un final ya sea abierto o cerrado .........................................................................
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very good. very unique. I can understand why some people wouldn't like this kind of novel. but i do. i love it!. I really hope the author dosent drop this. some minor grammatical errors here and there but nothing serious(what I mean is that it dosent effect your reading experience at all). the mc actually feels like a person with a personality, so it's a huge breath of fresh air to the very stale iseaki sub genre. overall: a hidden gem and a must read(in my opinion)
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This is very good I haven't read much of what you've got so far but I really like it. This is what most demon based stories should be about. A demon That can make deals and slowly grow stronger.
For some reason, I keep reading the title as 'Something went wrong', and then I realized that was what the story was basically about. Surprisingly good story actually.
great stroy, way better than most popular novels hdhdudhrhhshzhshhshshhhdhdggdgsbkaorhvslaphsnzliavsnOhsbKshnzisbsondnHuebhzkdb sub ivan dAu be
The fastest asencion to Divinity without cheating I have ever seen. I really love this story. .
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Its a good novel, very interesting trope.There are a few spelling errors(easily ignored if you've read worse). Something I personally enjoyed.
Just letting people Know the author ABSOLUTELY COOKED on this. The beginning was kind of iffy, and I almost quit, but it just kept getting better as the series went on. despite only having 70 ish chapters, they are super long. Trust me this is one of if not the best, series I have read on Webnovel, My only complaints for the series is the MANY typos and how the series feels like it should have ended at chap 70 or so with all the parallels to the beginning of the series and now it kind of felt like it's dragging on. But this is really good trust.
All I can say is that l highly recommend this read. Interesting characters along with a intriguing story. Although it may be quick it is still very enjoyable. The future of this novel feels very big and I am very exited to see this story unfold.
This novel is WILD, it felt like I was riding a roller coaster. Sometimes the novel progresses so fast that your unsure what is actually happening. Although sometimes the CONSTANT random absences of certain letters in a word(such as corpse becoming corps, the word corpse is not spelled without error a single time in this novel) along with random POV changes can make the novel virtually unreadable sometimes. That doesn’t mean I didn’t enjoy it though, it was an amazing read. But with some fixes like not changing POV during a fight and fixing the random abscesses of letters in a word it would be much easier to read.
I refuse to become invested in an mc who can neither adapt to his circumstances or even take accountability for his actions, I came in here expecting a demon mc in body and soul and in the first chapter I thought I got what I wanted, he cursed the gods who summoned him and I figured he was gonna embrace his new life as a demon, but by chapter 3 he was playing human and pretending like he wont ever kill a human despite having slaughtered dozens just a day before, but that since he didn't do the killing himself its fine, A spineless coward. there are much better demon mc novels where the mc actually embraces his new life, like custom made demon king, id rather read that again.
Spoiler de révélation DONTTTT5 LETTT THEEE DEALLMAKERRR DIEEEE, KILLL ALLLL HISS SOULLL FRAGMENT AND DEVOUR , THERE ISS NOOO GREATTT GENIUS WITHOUT SOME TOUCH OF MADNESSS
Me encanto espero que continúe o almenos tenga un final ya sea abierto o cerrado .........................................................................
I like it IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
very good. very unique. I can understand why some people wouldn't like this kind of novel. but i do. i love it!. I really hope the author dosent drop this. some minor grammatical errors here and there but nothing serious(what I mean is that it dosent effect your reading experience at all). the mc actually feels like a person with a personality, so it's a huge breath of fresh air to the very stale iseaki sub genre. overall: a hidden gem and a must read(in my opinion)
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This is very good I haven't read much of what you've got so far but I really like it. This is what most demon based stories should be about. A demon That can make deals and slowly grow stronger.
For some reason, I keep reading the title as 'Something went wrong', and then I realized that was what the story was basically about. Surprisingly good story actually.
great stroy, way better than most popular novels hdhdudhrhhshzhshhshshhhdhdggdgsbkaorhvslaphsnzliavsnOhsbKshnzisbsondnHuebhzkdb sub ivan dAu be
The fastest asencion to Divinity without cheating I have ever seen. I really love this story. .
Spoiler de révélation Its a good novel, very interesting trope.There are a few spelling errors(easily ignored if you've read worse). Something I personally enjoyed.
Just letting people Know the author ABSOLUTELY COOKED on this. The beginning was kind of iffy, and I almost quit, but it just kept getting better as the series went on. despite only having 70 ish chapters, they are super long. Trust me this is one of if not the best, series I have read on Webnovel, My only complaints for the series is the MANY typos and how the series feels like it should have ended at chap 70 or so with all the parallels to the beginning of the series and now it kind of felt like it's dragging on. But this is really good trust.