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it just the same thing everyone does in thuer stories it gets old after a while to the point its predictable.
niceeeeeeeeeee it's so hard to find no harem fan-fics especially in naruto! i really liked the story it's so good!!!!!! ahhhhhhhh amazing! PLS DON'T DROP
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hope you don't drop it and make harem please author and also hope you add UZU VILLAGE as they will be attack by 3 villages for their seals
its ok ...............................................................................
is there romance at least 🥺🥺 xjzgxjydnydngdngdhmdmhdgmdnvzgnsmggsngsngsgnsgnzmvzmgxmbdhmfbmxzdhzhxbxbcnxncngjfkgjioilhkhmdhmdhhhh
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As a Author I will Obviously review my own book ..............................................................................................
it just the same thing everyone does in thuer stories it gets old after a while to the point its predictable.
niceeeeeeeeeee it's so hard to find no harem fan-fics especially in naruto! i really liked the story it's so good!!!!!! ahhhhhhhh amazing! PLS DON'T DROP
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hope you don't drop it and make harem please author and also hope you add UZU VILLAGE as they will be attack by 3 villages for their seals
its ok ...............................................................................
is there romance at least 🥺🥺 xjzgxjydnydngdngdhmdmhdgmdnvzgnsmggsngsngsgnsgnzmvzmgxmbdhmfbmxzdhzhxbxbcnxncngjfkgjioilhkhmdhmdhhhh
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
As a Author I will Obviously review my own book ..............................................................................................