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Better then most i come across. Character is decently written. The way he decied to simply go a directly try to applie for anbu training seems just as beleavable as genius early grad that is in every other novel.[img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=update]
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why you remove [img=faceslap] crazy UPP wkkw[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this fanfic has amazing update speed so far and its nice to pass time, writing quality is great and the mc is smart and op. ...............
Everything is still good but dear author at least tell us the reason for removal of the all chapters and edition of the first one 😑😑😑😑...
DooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID YOU REMOVE IT I WANTED TO READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
author suddenly remove all of chapter when I am reading , i don't know why author do that but f you author to disturb my reading time 😠😠😠
this is your usual angsty MC trying to befriend Naruto with the usual start of being orphan don't recommend trash trash trash trash trash trash
I am far in the story but I stil don't know how the mc looks even his hair color. and after some chapter he wants to train Sasuke wtf man why waist time and it goes downhill from there
This is a surprise hit for me, the author updates really fast and I implore everyone reading this review to please give this thing a try and if you like it, please support with power stones. We really don't want another author losing motivation .
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I think its good😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁.......................................I hate the 140 characters rule.............................
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this is pretty much good but u need to update more often. this is pretty much good but u need to update more often. this is pretty much good but u need to update more often.
Better then most i come across. Character is decently written. The way he decied to simply go a directly try to applie for anbu training seems just as beleavable as genius early grad that is in every other novel.[img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=update]
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
why you remove [img=faceslap] crazy UPP wkkw[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this fanfic has amazing update speed so far and its nice to pass time, writing quality is great and the mc is smart and op. ...............
Everything is still good but dear author at least tell us the reason for removal of the all chapters and edition of the first one 😑😑😑😑...
DooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID YOU REMOVE IT I WANTED TO READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
author suddenly remove all of chapter when I am reading , i don't know why author do that but f you author to disturb my reading time 😠😠😠
this is your usual angsty MC trying to befriend Naruto with the usual start of being orphan don't recommend trash trash trash trash trash trash
I am far in the story but I stil don't know how the mc looks even his hair color. and after some chapter he wants to train Sasuke wtf man why waist time and it goes downhill from there
This is a surprise hit for me, the author updates really fast and I implore everyone reading this review to please give this thing a try and if you like it, please support with power stones. We really don't want another author losing motivation .
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
I think its good😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁.......................................I hate the 140 characters rule.............................
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this is pretty much good but u need to update more often. this is pretty much good but u need to update more often. this is pretty much good but u need to update more often.