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Was pretty good until the Author started creating characters that would be strong in the Grand Line, and placing them in a no name town in East Blue... THE WEAKEST SEA!
(small spoiler for first 20 chapters) Starting with the writing quality, there are a few spelling and grammar errors, but none of them are really that apparent. Overall, minus the tiny issues. the writing quality is pretty good. The story begins developing as soon as the MC lands in the world, although the first big fight did kinda use plot armor with how he survived the explosion and it was a bit confusing how the explosion was made I really like the MC and think that he is unique. He isn't a goodie-two-shoes that likes to stand in the path set for him. He actually starts out not being a pirate or marine, he is a businessman. He also doesnt have the xianxia protagonist mindset, "I will rise to the top of the world and crush anyone in my way!" type thing. He actually weighs his options and chooses the most logical thing to do. He is willing to get his hands dirty, but there are lines he wont cross. Overall, the grammar could use a bit of work but I really enjoy the story!
Its a decent read. The quality is readable and any mistakes are ones that you barely notice when reading. I recommend using Grammarly to help get rid of those small errors, its free and seems to be helpful to a lot of other story writers. The story however has quite a few noticeable plot holes but its understandable and since its a merge of 2 fictions the balancing of power is noticeably off, for me at least. The amount of strength that people in the weakest sea have is too exaggerated. They have been made too strong, like a cadre of the Don Krieg pirates being able to easily destroy buildings and streets? That kind of strength is enough to get at least a 50 million berry bounty in the Grand Line. Luffy himself was unable to deal that much damage until later in the show yet Don Krieg was able to do it? So how did Luffy beat him? Also, how come the Navy haven't attack Don Kreig after his fleet massacres a whole town and killed 2 Captains, the strongest force in the East Blue after the Commodore was killed by Arlong. Another thing that I would say need to be improved about the story are his crew members. Some of them are questionable and his reasons for selecting/not selecting certain members of the One Piece world are dodgy in some parts. The characters are quite well made except some of them such as Bartholomew come off as stale or emotionless. Bartholomew is an energetic character and while he has just recently been introduced he seems to lack liveliness. I also hope that Hachi died when he attacked Arlong Park, after all that guy was evil and not "harmless" like Nami said. He not only killed Marines who wanted to help Cocoyashi village, he also dragged Nami by her throat when her mother was killed. He also made no attempts to tell the Navy or even Jinbei about Arlong's acts but rather assisted him in carrying them out. He was as evil as any other member of Arlong pirates. As for updates, while it was quite consistent in the past, it remains to be seen whether that will return after his 1-2 month hiatus. Overall, its a decent read.
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An excellent novel in my opinion. i am really impressed by the descriptions you have used and the way you have painted the scenes in the readers mind. Good job
its not a bad novel. it has its issues grammar being one. the characters are a little unimpressive. i have decided to drop it though because the author has decided that the mc will be pretty weak without the warframes. i honestly dont think a warframe even with a ton of mods could stand up to a yonko that make an island disappear with ease while warframes were almost hunted to extinction by enemies like the grineer.
it has a wonderful concept, it also takes another path other than pirate or marines, also a big fan of warframe, there's still tons of space left to improve... *cough*we are waiting for mass release*cough* !!!ALSO PLEASE DON'T DROP IT!!!
I love this fanfiction so much, It's definitely the best One piece fanfiction I have read on this site… I hope for more chapters ..........…………………………………………………….
( Written with the translator ) I mean, the story has great potential, but it’s extremely slow. The Protagonist’s personality is not completely pleasant and he doesn’t show to be very intelligent (or I’m too dumb to realize how intelligent he is). I feel very uncomfortable seeing how strong people are in the weakest sea of all the work and the lack of the Navy sending really strong beings there to finish off these pirates and other stupidly strong 'outlaws' beings. In general, the author takes 'realism' very seriously in Fanfic and although it is sometimes interesting to see something more 'real', this is very exaggerated here. Not to mention the lengthy development of the Protagonist. I don’t mean to sound like any other hater or anything like that, but if you’re not a Warframe Fan and have enormous patience, I find it hard to like Fanfic as much as the five-star comments say.
I love it,I'm a fan of warframe, nice concept I didn't think that there was a fanfiction novel about warframes in we novel anyway please don't drop
Frère, ton histoire est une putain d'idée de génie, je n'ai pas encore lue mais l'idée elle même vos 4 min donc on vas dire 5. Juste je ne peux imaginer comment ton cerveau a pus relié warframe a One pièce ahahah
This story is very good, i rarely write review, but warframe is one of my soft spot! the plot is well done, gramma is not perfect but readable, the author is listen to suggestion but might not change depend on the viability in which perfectly understandable since the story is his and not warframe or onepiece entirely it is an AU so any slight change is acceptable. MC is little silly and lacking in planning but given his situation and confusion of his situation it forgivable. The most important thing is that it keep me curious in what going to happen and how it going to be developed in the future, potential is there, i hope it keep going for along time.
Nah sorry, the story is good but it is just way to complex. Especially if you have no clue about warframe or whatever. I like reading stories as a pass time something I don't need to think much about, is easy to follow to pass the time. Like in this there are like 100+ abilities for the mc and all the different combos to go with it. It's like an acc game character which is good for detail but way to fcking complex for me. I have always hated stories where there is too much going on and to many abilities for the mc. Like if he just had his rifle/sniper gun, pistol and sword each ofc having an ability. The mc then has his suit that boosts everything like it does healing etc. This would be cool, he would be like a futuristic assassin. You can easily keep up with what he can do if you get me? Instead, like I mentioned it is just way to complex. It was also hinted at that he can give his allies these mods. Hate mc sharing systems with others like a party feature. Just destroys every story it is in... so yeah not for me. However, that said if you like complex stories this is a decent story for you. Like one of the game characters that have thousands of things to add to them and each having any number of builds for your character. Like for me, this is a one-piece story. One-piece characters all rly have haki, a devil fruit, maybe a sword and inhuman physical power. It's simple, easy to follow and like. I guess you get my point im trying to say haha. But yeah gl to author
Very noice story. I like how your character doesn't immediately rush off and join the straw hats or make a pirate crew. It gives a really different outlook on the one piece world. Thanks for the story 100% would recommend.
the book is great. the author has a set concept and know how to implement it well. my only problem with the book is it feels like the author will drop at anytime. otherwise it is a great story, and i hope to see a lot more of it.
man! this is one of the best quality fanfiction I've ever read..If you ask me it should belong to top 10 rank in fanfiction books..plot is good..author well thought about story..good job man..even though I never played Warframe I still enjoyed the story..
I love animes and fanfictions that give it a special twist. I'm really interested to see how this novel will turn out. I came to this site cause a friend recommended it to me and I am not disappointed by the novels here.
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A nice idea since there aren't that many warframe fanfics, I really hope the author won't drop this story because I am a big fan of warframe and I also really how the MC isn't just an idiot, the only problem I can found is that there are some spelling errors but in it's entirety in a really enjoyable story.
this is pretty good tbh, I've never seen a warframe/one piece concept before and it seems to work well. I'm interested what the mc will be able to do with devil fruits. as long as the author keeps writing chapters I'll keep reading them.
This is a one piece fandom novel with an mc that has a warframe system in it. The updating of this novel isn't far but doesn't take too long either. It's very fun to read.
This is my favorite novel so far. It has my favorite anime One Piece in it and seems to be going in a unique direction. The updates the novel has isn't to bad either
The author of this novel is great. Just like his other novel unusual world this one keeps me captivated and interested. Novel has lots of potential and keeps me hooked for the next chapter.
Being the weeb that I am had to read this story. The story has been written very well and I'm sure the author knows what he is doing. The story starts off in the East Blue which brilliant as even the original One Piece starts off there. The MC of this story is pretty badass, he is not like one of your typical shounen characters that usually turns out to be a crybaby. The story also has its light moments which bring a smile to the reader's face. The MC talks about being issekaid , I would have rather had him get hit by truck-kun (jk). I can't really talk about grammar cause mine is horrendous. Although you could use the Grammarly app if you want to. It definitely comes in handy. It's a really good story, I'm sure One Piece fans will be able to relate to it and All The Best!!!
If u like the story leave a comment if you want to see something truly unusual check out my novel titled UNUSUAL WORLD. Harsh criticism is appreciated and please tell your friends.
Was pretty good until the Author started creating characters that would be strong in the Grand Line, and placing them in a no name town in East Blue... THE WEAKEST SEA!
(small spoiler for first 20 chapters) Starting with the writing quality, there are a few spelling and grammar errors, but none of them are really that apparent. Overall, minus the tiny issues. the writing quality is pretty good. The story begins developing as soon as the MC lands in the world, although the first big fight did kinda use plot armor with how he survived the explosion and it was a bit confusing how the explosion was made I really like the MC and think that he is unique. He isn't a goodie-two-shoes that likes to stand in the path set for him. He actually starts out not being a pirate or marine, he is a businessman. He also doesnt have the xianxia protagonist mindset, "I will rise to the top of the world and crush anyone in my way!" type thing. He actually weighs his options and chooses the most logical thing to do. He is willing to get his hands dirty, but there are lines he wont cross. Overall, the grammar could use a bit of work but I really enjoy the story!
Its a decent read. The quality is readable and any mistakes are ones that you barely notice when reading. I recommend using Grammarly to help get rid of those small errors, its free and seems to be helpful to a lot of other story writers. The story however has quite a few noticeable plot holes but its understandable and since its a merge of 2 fictions the balancing of power is noticeably off, for me at least. The amount of strength that people in the weakest sea have is too exaggerated. They have been made too strong, like a cadre of the Don Krieg pirates being able to easily destroy buildings and streets? That kind of strength is enough to get at least a 50 million berry bounty in the Grand Line. Luffy himself was unable to deal that much damage until later in the show yet Don Krieg was able to do it? So how did Luffy beat him? Also, how come the Navy haven't attack Don Kreig after his fleet massacres a whole town and killed 2 Captains, the strongest force in the East Blue after the Commodore was killed by Arlong. Another thing that I would say need to be improved about the story are his crew members. Some of them are questionable and his reasons for selecting/not selecting certain members of the One Piece world are dodgy in some parts. The characters are quite well made except some of them such as Bartholomew come off as stale or emotionless. Bartholomew is an energetic character and while he has just recently been introduced he seems to lack liveliness. I also hope that Hachi died when he attacked Arlong Park, after all that guy was evil and not "harmless" like Nami said. He not only killed Marines who wanted to help Cocoyashi village, he also dragged Nami by her throat when her mother was killed. He also made no attempts to tell the Navy or even Jinbei about Arlong's acts but rather assisted him in carrying them out. He was as evil as any other member of Arlong pirates. As for updates, while it was quite consistent in the past, it remains to be seen whether that will return after his 1-2 month hiatus. Overall, its a decent read.
Spoiler de révélation An excellent novel in my opinion. i am really impressed by the descriptions you have used and the way you have painted the scenes in the readers mind. Good job
its not a bad novel. it has its issues grammar being one. the characters are a little unimpressive. i have decided to drop it though because the author has decided that the mc will be pretty weak without the warframes. i honestly dont think a warframe even with a ton of mods could stand up to a yonko that make an island disappear with ease while warframes were almost hunted to extinction by enemies like the grineer.
it has a wonderful concept, it also takes another path other than pirate or marines, also a big fan of warframe, there's still tons of space left to improve... *cough*we are waiting for mass release*cough* !!!ALSO PLEASE DON'T DROP IT!!!
I love this fanfiction so much, It's definitely the best One piece fanfiction I have read on this site… I hope for more chapters ..........…………………………………………………….
( Written with the translator ) I mean, the story has great potential, but it’s extremely slow. The Protagonist’s personality is not completely pleasant and he doesn’t show to be very intelligent (or I’m too dumb to realize how intelligent he is). I feel very uncomfortable seeing how strong people are in the weakest sea of all the work and the lack of the Navy sending really strong beings there to finish off these pirates and other stupidly strong 'outlaws' beings. In general, the author takes 'realism' very seriously in Fanfic and although it is sometimes interesting to see something more 'real', this is very exaggerated here. Not to mention the lengthy development of the Protagonist. I don’t mean to sound like any other hater or anything like that, but if you’re not a Warframe Fan and have enormous patience, I find it hard to like Fanfic as much as the five-star comments say.
I love it,I'm a fan of warframe, nice concept I didn't think that there was a fanfiction novel about warframes in we novel anyway please don't drop
Frère, ton histoire est une putain d'idée de génie, je n'ai pas encore lue mais l'idée elle même vos 4 min donc on vas dire 5. Juste je ne peux imaginer comment ton cerveau a pus relié warframe a One pièce ahahah
This story is very good, i rarely write review, but warframe is one of my soft spot! the plot is well done, gramma is not perfect but readable, the author is listen to suggestion but might not change depend on the viability in which perfectly understandable since the story is his and not warframe or onepiece entirely it is an AU so any slight change is acceptable. MC is little silly and lacking in planning but given his situation and confusion of his situation it forgivable. The most important thing is that it keep me curious in what going to happen and how it going to be developed in the future, potential is there, i hope it keep going for along time.
Nah sorry, the story is good but it is just way to complex. Especially if you have no clue about warframe or whatever. I like reading stories as a pass time something I don't need to think much about, is easy to follow to pass the time. Like in this there are like 100+ abilities for the mc and all the different combos to go with it. It's like an acc game character which is good for detail but way to fcking complex for me. I have always hated stories where there is too much going on and to many abilities for the mc. Like if he just had his rifle/sniper gun, pistol and sword each ofc having an ability. The mc then has his suit that boosts everything like it does healing etc. This would be cool, he would be like a futuristic assassin. You can easily keep up with what he can do if you get me? Instead, like I mentioned it is just way to complex. It was also hinted at that he can give his allies these mods. Hate mc sharing systems with others like a party feature. Just destroys every story it is in... so yeah not for me. However, that said if you like complex stories this is a decent story for you. Like one of the game characters that have thousands of things to add to them and each having any number of builds for your character. Like for me, this is a one-piece story. One-piece characters all rly have haki, a devil fruit, maybe a sword and inhuman physical power. It's simple, easy to follow and like. I guess you get my point im trying to say haha. But yeah gl to author
Very noice story. I like how your character doesn't immediately rush off and join the straw hats or make a pirate crew. It gives a really different outlook on the one piece world. Thanks for the story 100% would recommend.
the book is great. the author has a set concept and know how to implement it well. my only problem with the book is it feels like the author will drop at anytime. otherwise it is a great story, and i hope to see a lot more of it.
man! this is one of the best quality fanfiction I've ever read..If you ask me it should belong to top 10 rank in fanfiction books..plot is good..author well thought about story..good job man..even though I never played Warframe I still enjoyed the story..
I love animes and fanfictions that give it a special twist. I'm really interested to see how this novel will turn out. I came to this site cause a friend recommended it to me and I am not disappointed by the novels here.
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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A nice idea since there aren't that many warframe fanfics, I really hope the author won't drop this story because I am a big fan of warframe and I also really how the MC isn't just an idiot, the only problem I can found is that there are some spelling errors but in it's entirety in a really enjoyable story.
this is pretty good tbh, I've never seen a warframe/one piece concept before and it seems to work well. I'm interested what the mc will be able to do with devil fruits. as long as the author keeps writing chapters I'll keep reading them.
This is a one piece fandom novel with an mc that has a warframe system in it. The updating of this novel isn't far but doesn't take too long either. It's very fun to read.
This is my favorite novel so far. It has my favorite anime One Piece in it and seems to be going in a unique direction. The updates the novel has isn't to bad either
The author of this novel is great. Just like his other novel unusual world this one keeps me captivated and interested. Novel has lots of potential and keeps me hooked for the next chapter.
Being the weeb that I am had to read this story. The story has been written very well and I'm sure the author knows what he is doing. The story starts off in the East Blue which brilliant as even the original One Piece starts off there. The MC of this story is pretty badass, he is not like one of your typical shounen characters that usually turns out to be a crybaby. The story also has its light moments which bring a smile to the reader's face. The MC talks about being issekaid , I would have rather had him get hit by truck-kun (jk). I can't really talk about grammar cause mine is horrendous. Although you could use the Grammarly app if you want to. It definitely comes in handy. It's a really good story, I'm sure One Piece fans will be able to relate to it and All The Best!!!
If u like the story leave a comment if you want to see something truly unusual check out my novel titled UNUSUAL WORLD. Harsh criticism is appreciated and please tell your friends.