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Nicely written story. The synopsis and the cover picture are both intriguing enough to keep me hooked on the book. Highly recommended for reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Love this novel. Get past the first 2 chapters and you will love it. Love the family, love the group of friends and your descriptions of the characters. So many underlying plots, love it. Some love, mystery and tension. 🥰
wow! amazing book what a suspense; what a mystery that you have created in your book, at some point I got goosebumps on my Body...Super fantabolous work.👍👍
What a beautiful intriguing read! I was really entertained and caught in a trance. the plot is calculated to pull you into the story, and the narration makes sure you will stay. I'm rating it 5 stars! ♥
it's a great book..... Storyline is fabulous... Character design is awesome👏👍😊 Good writing quality... 🔥🔥🔥💜🥳 Keep going author.. all the best!
The communication is vivid and there is pretty good articulation and flow of events. What i like most is her lucid presentation. In the three chapters I read there is no grey area or ambiguity. It gives a view into family life in the developed world and what schools are like there. This perspective is important for teenagers who are stepping into global scenario where they may have to work in any part of the world or work from home in a global environment.
The synopsis is soo hooking and I've enjoyed reading the very few chapters of this book. It soo relatable and I loved how the writer developes its characters. Job well done author.
Beautifully written. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful. Good use of words from the author.
My first time meeting with a Spell caster and I have to say, it's really worth it. It had been 6months since my husband left me without saying anything.All thanks to Dr Tunde I was able to connect with my husband again with his powerful reunion love spell and now he loves me more than he used to. Eternally grateful with The Great Dr tunde I highly recommend, His contact details babatundesolutioncentre1@gmail. com or on his WhatsApp number +2348143581382
Wow.. Nice one... Blooming bud might be Rebecca and zoey us crushing on Alex. I wish to know aurora's curse and why cursed. You're good Thumbs up for you dear Till next time Cheers 🥂
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Yoy i dint knwo who you are where you are from noR do i knwo whether u area girl nor a boy but I RealllYyy lige Your book so much ...:. Keeep updating
The chapters were insanely good! Language and vocabulary were a thing to talk about! they're so perfect! highly impressed with your work! keep it up :)
Incredibly riveting.A very moving and intense story.The contrast between the two leads adds a unique element and makes you eager to see how it plays out.Truly entertaining!
This is an interesting story😍. i'll be looking forward to read more chapters from you😊. Keep up the good work!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The story is obviously a twist of fate kind of story. The synopsis is intriguing and interesting, those looking for stories with a lot of twists I recommend this. The author did a good job in creating the characters, the world background and every fundamental thing. To sum it up is kudos you are doing a great job.
It is definitely the pace for me, I love it. The flow is perfect and I love the description. If only each dialogue owned a paragraph and it isn't all put together in one place, it will aid for better reading. So far, I love the plot and the characters. Looking forward to what will happen next.
Lovely Concept, Its good to read easy to understand and not congested ʕ•ٹ•ʔ i love this story and the author is nice. Ill give my support as a fellow author and reader Shameless Promotion: http://wbnv.in/a/f5MLAEo ;)
An amazing start , absolutely fascinating story. You already caught my attention for the beginning and I think you did a great job and put in some great explanatory words.
this is a nice one good job to the author from the setting to the plot and the storyline i am astonished this is a nice novel to ready i recommend it
The synopsis was done well! I haven't read the entirety of the initial chapters but I am deeply engrossed of the characters already. Great start! Hoping for more wondrous adventures💓
Great story. I enjoy the characters interaction and her inner monologues really explains what kind of a girl she. Good job author! I enjoyed the story and I hope you continue writing it.
Amazing start of the book.. The synopsis is also amazing.. Love for style of writing.... Amazing vocab and humour.. It was lovely reading this book..
I definitely love this, the characters, their stories, the selflessness, a perfect recipe. I love this, you did a good job author 🥰 keep kicking ass.
I suddenly bump into this story and it's easy to read, the story is developing very smooth. Keep it up author/writer, hope to read until it's ending.
This book is amazing! Great description, nice build up the the story and I am so loving your characters. Honestly there aren't many books better than this out there. Keep it up author.
Don't just read the reviews to see how this book is. The first chapter had me hooked. A slow start but it kept my interest. Can't wait to see where this book goes :)
I really love fantasy stories and this one got me. I like how this story means is to protect someone from your mistake before. A good read!
Great book! The writing of the story is nicely done, can’t wait for more chapters and to see how the story unfolds. Enjoying the book! Such a nice read
The writings style is good. Loved how the characters developed and the suspense and tension build within the character. The synopsis is catchy. Keep up the good work author!!!
Nicely written story. The synopsis and the cover picture are both intriguing enough to keep me hooked on the book. Highly recommended for reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Love this novel. Get past the first 2 chapters and you will love it. Love the family, love the group of friends and your descriptions of the characters. So many underlying plots, love it. Some love, mystery and tension. 🥰
wow! amazing book what a suspense; what a mystery that you have created in your book, at some point I got goosebumps on my Body...Super fantabolous work.👍👍
What a beautiful intriguing read! I was really entertained and caught in a trance. the plot is calculated to pull you into the story, and the narration makes sure you will stay. I'm rating it 5 stars! ♥
it's a great book..... Storyline is fabulous... Character design is awesome👏👍😊 Good writing quality... 🔥🔥🔥💜🥳 Keep going author.. all the best!
The communication is vivid and there is pretty good articulation and flow of events. What i like most is her lucid presentation. In the three chapters I read there is no grey area or ambiguity. It gives a view into family life in the developed world and what schools are like there. This perspective is important for teenagers who are stepping into global scenario where they may have to work in any part of the world or work from home in a global environment.
The synopsis is soo hooking and I've enjoyed reading the very few chapters of this book. It soo relatable and I loved how the writer developes its characters. Job well done author.
Beautifully written. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful. Good use of words from the author.
My first time meeting with a Spell caster and I have to say, it's really worth it. It had been 6months since my husband left me without saying anything.All thanks to Dr Tunde I was able to connect with my husband again with his powerful reunion love spell and now he loves me more than he used to. Eternally grateful with The Great Dr tunde I highly recommend, His contact details babatundesolutioncentre1@gmail. com or on his WhatsApp number +2348143581382
Wow.. Nice one... Blooming bud might be Rebecca and zoey us crushing on Alex. I wish to know aurora's curse and why cursed. You're good Thumbs up for you dear Till next time Cheers 🥂
Spoiler de révélation Yoy i dint knwo who you are where you are from noR do i knwo whether u area girl nor a boy but I RealllYyy lige Your book so much ...:. Keeep updating
The chapters were insanely good! Language and vocabulary were a thing to talk about! they're so perfect! highly impressed with your work! keep it up :)
Incredibly riveting.A very moving and intense story.The contrast between the two leads adds a unique element and makes you eager to see how it plays out.Truly entertaining!
This is an interesting story😍. i'll be looking forward to read more chapters from you😊. Keep up the good work!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The story is obviously a twist of fate kind of story. The synopsis is intriguing and interesting, those looking for stories with a lot of twists I recommend this. The author did a good job in creating the characters, the world background and every fundamental thing. To sum it up is kudos you are doing a great job.
It is definitely the pace for me, I love it. The flow is perfect and I love the description. If only each dialogue owned a paragraph and it isn't all put together in one place, it will aid for better reading. So far, I love the plot and the characters. Looking forward to what will happen next.
Lovely Concept, Its good to read easy to understand and not congested ʕ•ٹ•ʔ i love this story and the author is nice. Ill give my support as a fellow author and reader Shameless Promotion: http://wbnv.in/a/f5MLAEo ;)
An amazing start , absolutely fascinating story. You already caught my attention for the beginning and I think you did a great job and put in some great explanatory words.
this is a nice one good job to the author from the setting to the plot and the storyline i am astonished this is a nice novel to ready i recommend it
The synopsis was done well! I haven't read the entirety of the initial chapters but I am deeply engrossed of the characters already. Great start! Hoping for more wondrous adventures💓
Great story. I enjoy the characters interaction and her inner monologues really explains what kind of a girl she. Good job author! I enjoyed the story and I hope you continue writing it.
Amazing start of the book.. The synopsis is also amazing.. Love for style of writing.... Amazing vocab and humour.. It was lovely reading this book..
I definitely love this, the characters, their stories, the selflessness, a perfect recipe. I love this, you did a good job author 🥰 keep kicking ass.
I suddenly bump into this story and it's easy to read, the story is developing very smooth. Keep it up author/writer, hope to read until it's ending.
This book is amazing! Great description, nice build up the the story and I am so loving your characters. Honestly there aren't many books better than this out there. Keep it up author.
Don't just read the reviews to see how this book is. The first chapter had me hooked. A slow start but it kept my interest. Can't wait to see where this book goes :)
I really love fantasy stories and this one got me. I like how this story means is to protect someone from your mistake before. A good read!
Great book! The writing of the story is nicely done, can’t wait for more chapters and to see how the story unfolds. Enjoying the book! Such a nice read
The writings style is good. Loved how the characters developed and the suspense and tension build within the character. The synopsis is catchy. Keep up the good work author!!!