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Muy bueno la verdad al principio pensé que como era un ángel sería como algún tipo de buen corazón o con complejo de héroe pero es mejor de lo que esperaba continuala bro 💪🏿
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Good job! 5 stars in all categories. It's a really good story, it' s definitely worth is to read. Although we got to get it to the top 20 or the author not gonna continue it, so everyone use your power stones.
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No tengo ganas de extenderme... Mis razones por las calificaciones de mí reseña: MC con serios problema con la lógica, al escoger el camino rápido en el aprendizaje entré la cordura mental. MC esclavo del sistema o eso muestra en los primeros capítulos... No escribiré más, ya que solo leí los primeros capítulos, sí quieres leer más después de los primeros capítulos te animo, porque yo no puedo hacer eso.
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I really like what you did so far, keep up with the good work. I don't know your schedule but I would love to read more of your story quickly :)
This story is odd, in the sense that it should be bad, but isn't. Our MC has a cliche past, an OP system, and regularly talks to a goddess, and yet the story remains good. Great work!
Not gonna Lie... I don't think I have seen an angel MC in Marvel before. Or at least on this site, and the ones I found on other sites were garbo. This is an interesting concept, the writing is great, single pairing, borderline insane but rational MC. Yeah... this is definitely for me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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soo, I just binged it in one sitting and gonna do a short review. first of all, it's supposed to be a non-harem so all the more reason for 5 stars. other noteworthy things are: writing is great. no issues there. its on the upper side of great. Mc personality is interesting. he isn't a simp that only thinks with his lower half and has a cool personality. he doesn't wanna be all hero but he also doesn't wanna be a villain. if I'd have to pick an alignment, it would be Chaotic Neutral. he doesn't hesitate to kill...or more like, he prefers to kill people because they are walking EXP packs. he also doesn't like to spare the villains so that they can jailbreak and cause troubles again. As for the story, its still in introductory phase and no big arcs have occurred yet. I will update this review later when there are more chaps
A mighty fine fic Features Lady death and the X-Men for now. The MC is insane but still kinda logical, exploring his new powers. Give it a try, it's worth at least that much
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Personally really love harem anime however take my slightly biased view out the way and it’s a top notch story Yes yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup
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I like the story. 👌👌👌 More please☝️☝️☝️ 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Muy bueno la verdad al principio pensé que como era un ángel sería como algún tipo de buen corazón o con complejo de héroe pero es mejor de lo que esperaba continuala bro 💪🏿
Spoiler de révélation More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!!
Good job! 5 stars in all categories. It's a really good story, it' s definitely worth is to read. Although we got to get it to the top 20 or the author not gonna continue it, so everyone use your power stones.
No Haremmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
No tengo ganas de extenderme... Mis razones por las calificaciones de mí reseña: MC con serios problema con la lógica, al escoger el camino rápido en el aprendizaje entré la cordura mental. MC esclavo del sistema o eso muestra en los primeros capítulos... No escribiré más, ya que solo leí los primeros capítulos, sí quieres leer más después de los primeros capítulos te animo, porque yo no puedo hacer eso.
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I really like what you did so far, keep up with the good work. I don't know your schedule but I would love to read more of your story quickly :)
This story is odd, in the sense that it should be bad, but isn't. Our MC has a cliche past, an OP system, and regularly talks to a goddess, and yet the story remains good. Great work!
Not gonna Lie... I don't think I have seen an angel MC in Marvel before. Or at least on this site, and the ones I found on other sites were garbo. This is an interesting concept, the writing is great, single pairing, borderline insane but rational MC. Yeah... this is definitely for me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Spoiler de révélation soo, I just binged it in one sitting and gonna do a short review. first of all, it's supposed to be a non-harem so all the more reason for 5 stars. other noteworthy things are: writing is great. no issues there. its on the upper side of great. Mc personality is interesting. he isn't a simp that only thinks with his lower half and has a cool personality. he doesn't wanna be all hero but he also doesn't wanna be a villain. if I'd have to pick an alignment, it would be Chaotic Neutral. he doesn't hesitate to kill...or more like, he prefers to kill people because they are walking EXP packs. he also doesn't like to spare the villains so that they can jailbreak and cause troubles again. As for the story, its still in introductory phase and no big arcs have occurred yet. I will update this review later when there are more chaps
A mighty fine fic Features Lady death and the X-Men for now. The MC is insane but still kinda logical, exploring his new powers. Give it a try, it's worth at least that much
Spoiler de révélation Personally really love harem anime however take my slightly biased view out the way and it’s a top notch story Yes yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup
NO HAREEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like the story. 👌👌👌 More please☝️☝️☝️ 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]