6Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Really interesting, has a good progression, and effectively is a good history I like it. thanks to the author. expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
Es un poco lenta la historia, tarda en llegar al original pero es interesante. Espero los siguientes capítulos, sigue con el buen trabajo y la frecuencia de actualización
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Looking good so far, will read old version to get some context into the future of this FF before i get too deep in. .......................
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Really interesting, has a good progression, and effectively is a good history I like it. thanks to the author. expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
Es un poco lenta la historia, tarda en llegar al original pero es interesante. Espero los siguientes capítulos, sigue con el buen trabajo y la frecuencia de actualización
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Looking good so far, will read old version to get some context into the future of this FF before i get too deep in. .......................
Shamless author here doiung a shameless review over my own work.Shamless author here doiung a shameless review over my own work.Shamless author here doiung a shameless review over my own work.Shamless author here doiung a shameless review over my own work.Shamless author here doiung a shameless review over my own work.
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The story is better than most of the trash out there...