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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I've spotted some grammatical mistakes along the way, sometimes sentences are constructed in a weird way making it hard to understand at first. Story is developing nicely, dialogues and characters are written perfectly giving you the feel of the character. Interactions between our mc and Mina is giving me this nice bubbly feeling
I've spotted some grammatical mistakes along the way, sometimes sentences are constructed in a weird way making it hard to understand at first. Story is developing nicely, dialogues and characters are written perfectly giving you the feel of the character. Interactions between our mc and Mina is giving me this nice bubbly feeling