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I have literally no idea why this isn't more popular, it's super well written and emotionally captivating. Long chapters, zero typos and super clean writing. It's basically a super realistic take on what if "Izuku" actually had a tough uprising (not the bakugo drama) A fresh way to explain the characters, none of them presented blandly, everyone has a personality. All I can say about this novel, it's gold, and the best fanfic of MHA I have ever read. Too bad you have to go to archiveofourown, to be able to read up to chapter 59, Ps If you are looking for no goody two shoes mc this is it, there's a slight superhero complex, but he never bends to not do what is necessary.
Amazing fanfic. I love how you change the life of izuku and his experiences. The interaction between characters are smooth the transition between scene to scene are good. I like you make Bakugo change and I'm excited what made him change greatly. To a brash one to a calm one.
Writing Quality (5)- Its good there are no typos that is usually seen in most fanfic. There are spelling mistakes as far as I read, there are grammatical mistake in any paragraphs that I read. Pacing(4)- its steady the transition between situations are satisfactory. I would hold back a one star for the improvement. Story Development (5)- The story is good. There are really no mistakes that I can see. Character design (5)-now the MC is mature but we can see some of his immaturity in controlling his emotion. That what I like because we can see that that MC personality can be more improved as his life goes on. The side character has a personality. The conversation is not robotlike and that is good. Updating Stability (4)- its good World background (4)- Well you add some things to it so yah. Overall-4.6 The story is good and I like it...
An extremely well-written book, though I am surprised the Author is even posting it on web novel. Normally, books of a such quality are available on royal road, AO3 or Fanfiction.net.
This is really good and I highly reccomed. The author doesnt follow to closely to the plot and is skilled at character creation. Overall its extremely well written and I don’t know how its not more popular.
This story is amazing and I cant wait for more tuiytiuytuioiuyuioigyofgiougyuiogggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
Bloody masterpiece can't be compared with the mha ffs, do I dare say mha hehe I do it feels more like it's own book rather then a ff so yeah it's godly
interesting ff just keep updating daily and don't drop. .. .. .. .. .. ., .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ., .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
How isnt this more popular its the best mha fic ive ever read and the chapters are hella long and good quality too
this fanfic is marvelous it is very very very good. I haven't read a mha fanfic this good in a LOOOONG time. I'd even go so far as to say that this is the best mha fanfic I've ever read. in my opinion this fanfic is even better, scratch that WAAAAYYY better than the actual anime.
After reading 2 long chaps all I can say is it is a hidden gem I'm glad to find. ----------------------------------------------------------------
Good story with nice long chapters . ...................................................................................................................
One of the best MHA fanfics I have ever read. Quality of interactions as well as plot are both interesting and realistic. Definitely would top the fanfic power rankings, it’s just that you placed it in the wrong category.
A dark, grittier take on the world of MHA. You would be missing out on a good thing to ignore this fic - I stayed up till 6am in my first reading session. I appreciate the effort the author has put in so far, and I look forward to seeing what more will come. Thank you.
Dude you uploaded it in the wrong one. This is the Novel section, not the FanFic one. You wouldn't get following of your work this way. Just create a new work this time selecting the chatagory FanFiction (Anime&Comics) And reupload your work there. Nice work by the way. Great prosee.
Forget “Madara’s Powers in MHA”, and “Apotheosis”, a new contender for the greatest MHA fic has appeared. With insanely long chapters and an actually bearable Izuku, this blows nearly all other fics out the water. Hail to the king.
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Although this is a fanfic, it's really well written, the chapters are big and are comparable to a real book chapter. The story is good, lettibg the author exprim his own idea and making them blend into the world of my hero academia with Izuku as a main character, letting us experiment the viciousness of a world where everything became white or black for civilians with the rise of the age of heroes. Thank you for this story, I love it and it's absolutely magnificient !!
So, first time writing a review but I felt like this one deserved it. I binge read all chapters until now, thanks by the way, didn't do my assignement due to that. Anyway to those looking for a good fanfic, you have One here, the character background is quite well thought. The world seem to be almost the same as canon but I have no need to read about I do not know in a fanfic. The story is evolving at a moderate pace and I hope it stays the same. For the writing quality, I saw few mistakes, none creating a comprehension issue. And seeing that for now the pace is quite fast, I can only congratulate the Author. Don't burn yourself out wanting to write too fast and having to drop it. Keep going.
absolutely spectacular, this is some of the most well thought out shit I've read, and it really is very good, the way you change some of the things and other characters. Hope you continue further and finish it off well!
An amazing fan fic. This has a very believable and intresting main character, that actually uses his brain to achieve his goals. The story has been very natural and enjoyable to follow along through, while making the main charcter likeable. This is honestly an excellent story so far, and while the main character can be considered OP or at the very least strong, it’s done in an excellent and realistic way. I believe that this story deserves more readers, and I know at some point it will blow up. 10/10
I have literally no idea why this isn't more popular, it's super well written and emotionally captivating. Long chapters, zero typos and super clean writing. It's basically a super realistic take on what if "Izuku" actually had a tough uprising (not the bakugo drama) A fresh way to explain the characters, none of them presented blandly, everyone has a personality. All I can say about this novel, it's gold, and the best fanfic of MHA I have ever read. Too bad you have to go to archiveofourown, to be able to read up to chapter 59, Ps If you are looking for no goody two shoes mc this is it, there's a slight superhero complex, but he never bends to not do what is necessary.
Amazing fanfic. I love how you change the life of izuku and his experiences. The interaction between characters are smooth the transition between scene to scene are good. I like you make Bakugo change and I'm excited what made him change greatly. To a brash one to a calm one.
Writing Quality (5)- Its good there are no typos that is usually seen in most fanfic. There are spelling mistakes as far as I read, there are grammatical mistake in any paragraphs that I read. Pacing(4)- its steady the transition between situations are satisfactory. I would hold back a one star for the improvement. Story Development (5)- The story is good. There are really no mistakes that I can see. Character design (5)-now the MC is mature but we can see some of his immaturity in controlling his emotion. That what I like because we can see that that MC personality can be more improved as his life goes on. The side character has a personality. The conversation is not robotlike and that is good. Updating Stability (4)- its good World background (4)- Well you add some things to it so yah. Overall-4.6 The story is good and I like it...
An extremely well-written book, though I am surprised the Author is even posting it on web novel. Normally, books of a such quality are available on royal road, AO3 or Fanfiction.net.
This is really good and I highly reccomed. The author doesnt follow to closely to the plot and is skilled at character creation. Overall its extremely well written and I don’t know how its not more popular.
This story is amazing and I cant wait for more tuiytiuytuioiuyuioigyofgiougyuiogggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
Bloody masterpiece can't be compared with the mha ffs, do I dare say mha hehe I do it feels more like it's own book rather then a ff so yeah it's godly
interesting ff just keep updating daily and don't drop. .. .. .. .. .. ., .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ., .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
How isnt this more popular its the best mha fic ive ever read and the chapters are hella long and good quality too
this fanfic is marvelous it is very very very good. I haven't read a mha fanfic this good in a LOOOONG time. I'd even go so far as to say that this is the best mha fanfic I've ever read. in my opinion this fanfic is even better, scratch that WAAAAYYY better than the actual anime.
After reading 2 long chaps all I can say is it is a hidden gem I'm glad to find. ----------------------------------------------------------------
Good story with nice long chapters . ...................................................................................................................
One of the best MHA fanfics I have ever read. Quality of interactions as well as plot are both interesting and realistic. Definitely would top the fanfic power rankings, it’s just that you placed it in the wrong category.
A dark, grittier take on the world of MHA. You would be missing out on a good thing to ignore this fic - I stayed up till 6am in my first reading session. I appreciate the effort the author has put in so far, and I look forward to seeing what more will come. Thank you.
Dude you uploaded it in the wrong one. This is the Novel section, not the FanFic one. You wouldn't get following of your work this way. Just create a new work this time selecting the chatagory FanFiction (Anime&Comics) And reupload your work there. Nice work by the way. Great prosee.
Forget “Madara’s Powers in MHA”, and “Apotheosis”, a new contender for the greatest MHA fic has appeared. With insanely long chapters and an actually bearable Izuku, this blows nearly all other fics out the water. Hail to the king.
Good....................................................... ............................................................... ............... ....... .......... . ........... ..
BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC, BEST MHA FANFIC,
Although this is a fanfic, it's really well written, the chapters are big and are comparable to a real book chapter. The story is good, lettibg the author exprim his own idea and making them blend into the world of my hero academia with Izuku as a main character, letting us experiment the viciousness of a world where everything became white or black for civilians with the rise of the age of heroes. Thank you for this story, I love it and it's absolutely magnificient !!
So, first time writing a review but I felt like this one deserved it. I binge read all chapters until now, thanks by the way, didn't do my assignement due to that. Anyway to those looking for a good fanfic, you have One here, the character background is quite well thought. The world seem to be almost the same as canon but I have no need to read about I do not know in a fanfic. The story is evolving at a moderate pace and I hope it stays the same. For the writing quality, I saw few mistakes, none creating a comprehension issue. And seeing that for now the pace is quite fast, I can only congratulate the Author. Don't burn yourself out wanting to write too fast and having to drop it. Keep going.
absolutely spectacular, this is some of the most well thought out shit I've read, and it really is very good, the way you change some of the things and other characters. Hope you continue further and finish it off well!
An amazing fan fic. This has a very believable and intresting main character, that actually uses his brain to achieve his goals. The story has been very natural and enjoyable to follow along through, while making the main charcter likeable. This is honestly an excellent story so far, and while the main character can be considered OP or at the very least strong, it’s done in an excellent and realistic way. I believe that this story deserves more readers, and I know at some point it will blow up. 10/10
Really good. That's all I can say, the author did a good job