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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Great start, really enjoyed reading. 😊 The world background is creative and imaginative. 📚 The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author!
Not bad! The story is intriguing. Furthermore, next pages hooked me up to read some more..! The only lacking is the stability of updates. I hope you to keep up the good work ❤❤
This is about the rating I'd give it once I start since I don't have much time for writing the stability of updates will vary and I'm not sure if they'll be daily, monthly or whatever. As for quality of writing, while it may take a while I can guarantee it will be almost mistake free, ALMOST. Story development and world background, I don't know what to put since I'm not that far ahead in writing the book. For Character design I can say I put a lot of effort into each character and I hope I don't disappoint you all. Thanks for reading this review and please enjoy the Book!
As not a big fan of the games genre, I found the lecture entertaining anyways - really liked the race choice scene, and the reportage-like begining. In my opinion will suit U if only got a gamer's vein. I haven't graded stability of updates only adjusted general grade by using it. Found your novel very pleasant to read, but some grammar forms didn't suit well. Hope U found my review usefull. Keep on and it will be a hit in it's genre!
Great start, really enjoyed reading. 😊 The world background is creative and imaginative. 📚 The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author!
Not bad! The story is intriguing. Furthermore, next pages hooked me up to read some more..! The only lacking is the stability of updates. I hope you to keep up the good work ❤❤
This is about the rating I'd give it once I start since I don't have much time for writing the stability of updates will vary and I'm not sure if they'll be daily, monthly or whatever. As for quality of writing, while it may take a while I can guarantee it will be almost mistake free, ALMOST. Story development and world background, I don't know what to put since I'm not that far ahead in writing the book. For Character design I can say I put a lot of effort into each character and I hope I don't disappoint you all. Thanks for reading this review and please enjoy the Book!
As not a big fan of the games genre, I found the lecture entertaining anyways - really liked the race choice scene, and the reportage-like begining. In my opinion will suit U if only got a gamer's vein. I haven't graded stability of updates only adjusted general grade by using it. Found your novel very pleasant to read, but some grammar forms didn't suit well. Hope U found my review usefull. Keep on and it will be a hit in it's genre!