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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I wish you guys support my novel and I am doing my best to improve it! Give some advice if there is something that I lack or if there is something you like!
1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem 1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem