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slow updates but the story is very interesting and yes i think both of them are gay or only 1 of them not sure but i can't wait for the romance and hot scenes.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
10/10 .........................................................................................................................mostly because i am in it
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I love the book so far however the 2 problems I have is that I would like more updates but that's just me being greedy and my second problem is that it is progressing a little too fast but I can cope with it. everything else is amazing so keep up the good work.
Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes You should read this,keep going author and what not
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good chapter's like how's it going in the story think that you should add what happen to deuk after you killed overhaul like if the deku told the hero's what happen that a man came and help him
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Nice story and fresh concept.. But please dont take seriously to what I want to say.. Its interesting but why name his name Vergil if he in Japan, and if in reality, he will be mock as Gaijin and never will been accepted in Yakuza.. Yakuza is proud members of Shinto and Japanese so hes in Yakuza its been unrealistic to me.. If he in Gang or Mafia it will be more realistic because he doesnt have any Japanese Root to make him swore as Yakuza member... Please dont take this seriously.. I just wonder tthats all.. And for your info, any child in orphanage service in Japan, will not name their child in care with outside Japanese norm name, it purpose not to make any child been alienate because their name by community cause Japanese people is proud as Hell in regard their cultures and traditions..
great as always quite happy that you are still writing and i get to have a character in the story. .........................................
Shameless author here to give myself 5 star's...............................................................................................
i never read novels with "will they be heroes? Villains?" in the description. usually these are mha fanfics. also never read something with more than one mc.
slow updates but the story is very interesting and yes i think both of them are gay or only 1 of them not sure but i can't wait for the romance and hot scenes.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
10/10 .........................................................................................................................mostly because i am in it
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I love the book so far however the 2 problems I have is that I would like more updates but that's just me being greedy and my second problem is that it is progressing a little too fast but I can cope with it. everything else is amazing so keep up the good work.
Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes You should read this,keep going author and what not
Spoiler de révélation good chapter's like how's it going in the story think that you should add what happen to deuk after you killed overhaul like if the deku told the hero's what happen that a man came and help him
Spoiler de révélation Nice story and fresh concept.. But please dont take seriously to what I want to say.. Its interesting but why name his name Vergil if he in Japan, and if in reality, he will be mock as Gaijin and never will been accepted in Yakuza.. Yakuza is proud members of Shinto and Japanese so hes in Yakuza its been unrealistic to me.. If he in Gang or Mafia it will be more realistic because he doesnt have any Japanese Root to make him swore as Yakuza member... Please dont take this seriously.. I just wonder tthats all.. And for your info, any child in orphanage service in Japan, will not name their child in care with outside Japanese norm name, it purpose not to make any child been alienate because their name by community cause Japanese people is proud as Hell in regard their cultures and traditions..
great as always quite happy that you are still writing and i get to have a character in the story. .........................................
Shameless author here to give myself 5 star's...............................................................................................
i never read novels with "will they be heroes? Villains?" in the description. usually these are mha fanfics. also never read something with more than one mc.