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Simply a good read. Not a masterpiece, not horrible, it’s a good read. Something to be proud of.
¡¡repugnante!!¿es necesario que para tener una historia de fondo tenias que poner que su padre se lo follaba?¡¡¡porfavor!!!!!
I have to say, I was impressed by this book. The writing was engaging, it's clear that the author put a lot of time and effort into creating this book. It's one of the enjoyable books I've read in a long time.
All that suffering the main character went through, all the death, all for it to be irrelevant. The book was a waste of time. I really had high hopes for this
Great story. Please check out my book of the same genre "Cursed Ages: The Beast Realm".
Gotta say I loved the novel all the way through. Got got hit right in the feels a few times too, like news of Artemis passing, the passing of Charlotte and a little in the end when Evans bid farewell. I'll say it again though, I LOVED THE NOVEL!!
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what I hate the most is the mc it's like every other edgy mc they act as if the world owes them everything and that everybody must go on their knees in he majestic presence I wonder my people are willing to put there live for this guy when he has bearly done things for them and he's Personality seriously unlikeable
The book started out great. The world-building hinted at a bigger plan. The story and plot had potential. But then the mother was introduced. I had never ever read a book that made me question if the person who wrote this needed immense help but this was such a book. Her character and the way she was introduced made me hate her. Even when other characters were defending her actions and saying it was for the greater good, it made me SICK to the stomach. I have never dropped a novel so fast as this one.
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I loved this book even tho is started to take a dive at the end there I wish that it dident have to have a rush ending of everything I truly loved this book and how van devolups into his own person at the end there i wish it didn’t have to end the way it did but I’m glad I was there for the ride my the van find the peace he wanted
I don't recommend this bookeverything is so gimmick its hard to sympathies and like mc when everything he does is either non-censical or just edgy when something bad happened to him is hard to be on his side and he is more deranged then anyone he counting surfing yo other no but to just make them suffer even those that treat him well and try to be friend and just treaded like trash
I really did enjoy this book.. it was rushed towards the end… but this was literally the first Webnovel I had ever read. It put me on the paths of other Webnovels. I’ll be one of the many that will definitely comeback to see Van in action..
i loved reading this, and i recommended this book to anyone who is into fantasy and Greek gods
The story is good but going into each new volume ruins it. Author completely changes the story and all of a sudden MC is stuck in a place there was no hint of earlier, with nothing to do with anyone previously known. The direction of the story completely changes and it feels like it would be better to right a new book. It feels like author wants to put absolutely everything in the story even if it doesn't fit and it frankly ruins it. I would say read the free chapters but I don't suggest buying the chapters as the entire arc comes to a crash and burn and you feel like you wasted money. tldr just read free chapters
10 out of 10 would recommend. very good read the entire thing looking forward to the next one
First book I started to read start to finish, genuinely an amazing book now reading the others.
I have to say the reviews on this novel are very overhyped, the writing quality is ok with some small errors (lit instead of light for example). I don't have an issue with the main character's personality nor have I read enough chapters to know how the world building develops. However the reason for not reading more chapters is that I cannot get through the first ten, the writing feels juvenile more akin to a badly written marvel script (especially when he unlocks the system). It feels very chuunibyu-ish, which I guess makes sense since the main character is a teenager but doesn't really make for an interesting read. It's also cliché, in the way of going to an academy for I imagine the next 100-200 chapters when I feel an ability such as superspeed shouldn't be constrained to an area with all the possibilities it allows. The story might get better in later chapters, however you have to be able to get there/stomach it until then. Because if the beginning is boring with not too much worldbuilding, and an early issue which could have pushed the male leads character development (his father) is immediately removed then what makes this interesting or good.
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I loved the novel, the only problem was the ending, which is a bit rushed, but I understand why you did it. Author, I was looking for the sequel and I can't find it.
Read the story till the end. It was as good and exciting as it was rush and 'axed' due to readers losing interest making the author lose hope etc. This was a story I couldn't put down and the author's writing made it so I enjoyed every part of it. Ignore the bad reviews and just give the story a try, it's not bad like people made it out to be.
A great master piece, that was worth every second of reading, wish it could go on forever but great books must end some time, I just wish we get a part 2 soon...
This story reminds me of hero academy. Except superpowers they have systems. The novel has a decent plot but the MC backstory is annoying. The MC is abused/molested by father and is illiterate. He can’t even read his system. At the same time he is too kind hearted. Due to these reasons it makes the story super slow paced and gets irritating because he’s an idiot. If this is the type of story you like than I would recommend this novel. If you are the type who likes a smart OP MC, this is probably not for you.
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To be honest, im somewhat conflicted.... dont get me wrong, its a great book, and i love how you are not afraid of making the main character suffer... but for me, the ending just felt... too much for me to accept... perhaps it was simply a product of good writing since i truly felt for the MC when he learned that everything he had worked so hard for was kind of a lie, all the suffering he went through because of his mother was meaningless and his mother isnt even there to atone, and the only person who couldnt assimilate with the Systellions was the MC himself as he simply left everyone he loved.... everything just felt so bitter sweet, perhaps too much for me... Well, now that I've gotten that out of my system, it was a great book that riled up my emotions for sure, just wasnt a book i could truly like due to the ending (perhaps more personal preference) Thx Author 😄😉
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I really liked this novel up until after chapter 100 after that it started to spiral down bad it felt like the author was try way to hard to be like other novels at the time and even once he got past that the novel was kinda ruined for me but over all it was a good read but I would not test again
Simply a good read. Not a masterpiece, not horrible, it’s a good read. Something to be proud of.
¡¡repugnante!!¿es necesario que para tener una historia de fondo tenias que poner que su padre se lo follaba?¡¡¡porfavor!!!!!
I have to say, I was impressed by this book. The writing was engaging, it's clear that the author put a lot of time and effort into creating this book. It's one of the enjoyable books I've read in a long time.
All that suffering the main character went through, all the death, all for it to be irrelevant. The book was a waste of time. I really had high hopes for this
Great story. Please check out my book of the same genre "Cursed Ages: The Beast Realm".
Gotta say I loved the novel all the way through. Got got hit right in the feels a few times too, like news of Artemis passing, the passing of Charlotte and a little in the end when Evans bid farewell. I'll say it again though, I LOVED THE NOVEL!!
Spoiler de révélation what I hate the most is the mc it's like every other edgy mc they act as if the world owes them everything and that everybody must go on their knees in he majestic presence I wonder my people are willing to put there live for this guy when he has bearly done things for them and he's Personality seriously unlikeable
The book started out great. The world-building hinted at a bigger plan. The story and plot had potential. But then the mother was introduced. I had never ever read a book that made me question if the person who wrote this needed immense help but this was such a book. Her character and the way she was introduced made me hate her. Even when other characters were defending her actions and saying it was for the greater good, it made me SICK to the stomach. I have never dropped a novel so fast as this one.
Spoiler de révélation I loved this book even tho is started to take a dive at the end there I wish that it dident have to have a rush ending of everything I truly loved this book and how van devolups into his own person at the end there i wish it didn’t have to end the way it did but I’m glad I was there for the ride my the van find the peace he wanted
I don't recommend this bookeverything is so gimmick its hard to sympathies and like mc when everything he does is either non-censical or just edgy when something bad happened to him is hard to be on his side and he is more deranged then anyone he counting surfing yo other no but to just make them suffer even those that treat him well and try to be friend and just treaded like trash
I really did enjoy this book.. it was rushed towards the end… but this was literally the first Webnovel I had ever read. It put me on the paths of other Webnovels. I’ll be one of the many that will definitely comeback to see Van in action..
i loved reading this, and i recommended this book to anyone who is into fantasy and Greek gods
The story is good but going into each new volume ruins it. Author completely changes the story and all of a sudden MC is stuck in a place there was no hint of earlier, with nothing to do with anyone previously known. The direction of the story completely changes and it feels like it would be better to right a new book. It feels like author wants to put absolutely everything in the story even if it doesn't fit and it frankly ruins it. I would say read the free chapters but I don't suggest buying the chapters as the entire arc comes to a crash and burn and you feel like you wasted money. tldr just read free chapters
10 out of 10 would recommend. very good read the entire thing looking forward to the next one
First book I started to read start to finish, genuinely an amazing book now reading the others.
I have to say the reviews on this novel are very overhyped, the writing quality is ok with some small errors (lit instead of light for example). I don't have an issue with the main character's personality nor have I read enough chapters to know how the world building develops. However the reason for not reading more chapters is that I cannot get through the first ten, the writing feels juvenile more akin to a badly written marvel script (especially when he unlocks the system). It feels very chuunibyu-ish, which I guess makes sense since the main character is a teenager but doesn't really make for an interesting read. It's also cliché, in the way of going to an academy for I imagine the next 100-200 chapters when I feel an ability such as superspeed shouldn't be constrained to an area with all the possibilities it allows. The story might get better in later chapters, however you have to be able to get there/stomach it until then. Because if the beginning is boring with not too much worldbuilding, and an early issue which could have pushed the male leads character development (his father) is immediately removed then what makes this interesting or good.
Spoiler de révélation I loved the novel, the only problem was the ending, which is a bit rushed, but I understand why you did it. Author, I was looking for the sequel and I can't find it.
Read the story till the end. It was as good and exciting as it was rush and 'axed' due to readers losing interest making the author lose hope etc. This was a story I couldn't put down and the author's writing made it so I enjoyed every part of it. Ignore the bad reviews and just give the story a try, it's not bad like people made it out to be.
A great master piece, that was worth every second of reading, wish it could go on forever but great books must end some time, I just wish we get a part 2 soon...
This story reminds me of hero academy. Except superpowers they have systems. The novel has a decent plot but the MC backstory is annoying. The MC is abused/molested by father and is illiterate. He can’t even read his system. At the same time he is too kind hearted. Due to these reasons it makes the story super slow paced and gets irritating because he’s an idiot. If this is the type of story you like than I would recommend this novel. If you are the type who likes a smart OP MC, this is probably not for you.
Spoiler de révélation To be honest, im somewhat conflicted.... dont get me wrong, its a great book, and i love how you are not afraid of making the main character suffer... but for me, the ending just felt... too much for me to accept... perhaps it was simply a product of good writing since i truly felt for the MC when he learned that everything he had worked so hard for was kind of a lie, all the suffering he went through because of his mother was meaningless and his mother isnt even there to atone, and the only person who couldnt assimilate with the Systellions was the MC himself as he simply left everyone he loved.... everything just felt so bitter sweet, perhaps too much for me... Well, now that I've gotten that out of my system, it was a great book that riled up my emotions for sure, just wasnt a book i could truly like due to the ending (perhaps more personal preference) Thx Author 😄😉
Spoiler de révélation I really liked this novel up until after chapter 100 after that it started to spiral down bad it felt like the author was try way to hard to be like other novels at the time and even once he got past that the novel was kinda ruined for me but over all it was a good read but I would not test again
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