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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
mc is a coward. he used some bs reason to justify his action. he says instead of going for someone beautiful he prefer an innocent one, but at lo and behold he goes for the married one using some bs reason. another trash fanfic to my list
Is this dropped?? Or will arthur pick it up? ......................................................,.......,..,,..,.....,.,..,..,............
sorry author My disappointment is immesureable very very bad idea I regret reading this and you disappoint some of the readers too not just me 🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️.................................................................................................
-1 star update stability, yunche still have the harem same to origanal meaning another -1 star and for our OCs abnormal personality that is onther -1, the Oc didn't fck the plot meaning too boring.and then lame romance.. equal to disappointment -1 star and lastly plus 1 star for the effort of the aurhor
Great book. I don’t know what else to say😂it gives you an entirely different perspective on ATG. It’s very different from the norm and is very interesting i it’s entirety
Chinnnnnge asumadreeeeeeeee coviiiiiiiid!!!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - c transforma en ultra super mega turbo omega alfa saiyajin-
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Improvements........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
C'est du xianxia pour et dur sans innovation, on se fait chier comme un rat mort et puis je suspecte l'auteur d'utiliser des bots pour monter la note.
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The feel of the dialogue in the story meshes with the writing as it was in ATG, so that's well done. The problem with the story is that the MC is too laid back for a cultivation novel, and though this makes him more level-headed and likable than Yun Che, Cultivation stories thrive on conflict. The Main character NEEDS to overcome great difficulties! Without random a**holes constantly antagonizing the MC the story isn't compelling unless you throw a lot of Slice of Life magical BS to explain the MC's cultivating process and the problems he needs to solve to progress. This story hand-waves all of the difficulties the MC has when he's cultivating away into the background. As a result the MC of the story is a level-headed OP bad-ass with no enemies that nevertheless conveniently powers up all the time. No conflict. No wow
I don't know if this fanfic is good or not, as I will be reading it at the moment, but just to confirm one thing, at least this fanfic is without a harem, right? If it is, I appreciate it, because I am tired of seeing a lot with wish fulfillment, and the intention is to read more about the history of the world even though I am not canon
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I enjoy reading this, especially when the MCs don't make harems___________________________________________honestly i'm bored with the harem genre
this is the best atg fanfic that I have found in this app... the mc isn't a retard who wants to fuk all females that he see so it's a win for me :v
It seems that the author likes married women with children :D _____________________________________________________________________________
5 stars in hopes it remains just Meng and Yufeng. Also because I enjoyed the novel, but mainly because I want there to be no harem.
*Cough Cough* Muy buena, no tengo mucho que decir. Pero de todos los fics que he leído sobre ATG es el que mas me ha gustado. La escritura, las ideas, y los desarrollos son muy buenos. También tiene esta pizca de, por ejemplo metiendo aspectos de Empereor Domination, o las habilidades y destrezas originales del prota. La idea de usar el Yin y Yang como cultivo principal, ciertamente no podemos decir que es la mas original del mundo o la primera, pero la manera en que la metió o la desarrollo ciertamente fue muy unica y original, ademas de muy buena. Ciertamente puedo decir que es la mejor de todas, ademas, el MC es por mucho de los mejores que he visto, ya sea actitud, moral, valores, ideales, individualidades y personalidad, todo sobre el es tan... unico y se sienta tan real y bien cuando lees a un personaje tranquilo como este de vez en cuando. En conclusion muy buena, la recomiendo totalmente
This is the best ATF fanfic novel I have read so far. Other fanfics are just about hating Yun Che, stealing his wives and doing what he would do in the orignal novel. There are no story development, no character development. They just paint the MC as Mr. Perfect.I dont get why some people want fanfics to follow the story plot. Its ok to follow the plot but atleast write your own orignal story also. Author you wrote by far the ATG fanfic 👍👍👍
I love this story there isn't much to say about it, for ONCE a MC who isn't interested in going after every goddamn hole attached to a pair of Tits he find. This MC feels more..."Adult" then the others. There is a system in the story but it's actually pretty forgettable after it gives the MC reward for a completed quest. The single romance doesn't bothers me at all, people who decide to not reading a story only based on the number of "women" (at this point, I would call them trophy's seeing some story having more than 1.000 wife's for 1 men!) are just childish.
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Yo why u sucking on Yun Che's dong? You made the dragon get a little stronger than canon just to kill it off and give it to Yun Che. By doing so he will be stronger than his canon self cuz he has better quality Dragons meat and blood. Not to mention other plotholes like Mc being able to overpower an EMPEROR PROFOUND BEAST but not human pactitioners at True Profound to Earth Profound. Don't use that 'He poisoned the dragon' crap. Not only that, it seems like Yun Che also got the Pheonix legacy despite your MC going to the trial first! Like how? The mc already completed the trial shouldn't the pheonix trial be useless but then in the tournament it is implied Yun Che also has it?! Jasmine even points it out to Yun Che how Mc's spear has the fragment of the Pheonix they met! Bruv.... Then the romance... Bro okay I don't have anything against your choice but like. Why is the mc being such a pussy? Like why act like a shy dude when she just leans on him? He finds her attractive why not just admit it? He's acting like CHILD not someone who lived TWO LIVES. Well enough ranting... Its not perfect but it's an okay fanfic. Theres hella alot of plotholes but u get over them kinda quickly. I just got pissed at those little things since I like to spot errors and shit. I stopped reading somewhere around him taking the dragons trial. I'll wait till it reaches 90 or 100 chaps before I give it a hivher review. (Most of the time I give high ratings its just that I like me some atg shit.) It u get butthury u can delete this review if u want author-san.
Nothing much to say, I love it and can’t get enough of it. Always looking forward to a new chapter. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Nothing much to say, I love it and can’t get enough of it. Always looking forward to a new chapter. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I lost a lot of time on this. The author should have added the INCEL tag, the mc is a pathetic little s***t. ****************************************************************************************************************************************************
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
mc is a coward. he used some bs reason to justify his action. he says instead of going for someone beautiful he prefer an innocent one, but at lo and behold he goes for the married one using some bs reason. another trash fanfic to my list
Is this dropped?? Or will arthur pick it up? ......................................................,.......,..,,..,.....,.,..,..,............
sorry author My disappointment is immesureable very very bad idea I regret reading this and you disappoint some of the readers too not just me 🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️.................................................................................................
-1 star update stability, yunche still have the harem same to origanal meaning another -1 star and for our OCs abnormal personality that is onther -1, the Oc didn't fck the plot meaning too boring.and then lame romance.. equal to disappointment -1 star and lastly plus 1 star for the effort of the aurhor
Great book. I don’t know what else to say😂it gives you an entirely different perspective on ATG. It’s very different from the norm and is very interesting i it’s entirety
Chinnnnnge asumadreeeeeeeee coviiiiiiiid!!!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - c transforma en ultra super mega turbo omega alfa saiyajin-
Spoiler de révélation Improvements........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
C'est du xianxia pour et dur sans innovation, on se fait chier comme un rat mort et puis je suspecte l'auteur d'utiliser des bots pour monter la note.
ittttsiiisitiiisiisososooooosyyysyyyskkkskkkskkkskdkkkskyyyyskkkskkkkkskkkyyyyyyyykkkkskdyyyykkkskkkskkksyyysyyykkskyyskkkskkkskkkskkkskyyskyskkdyd
The feel of the dialogue in the story meshes with the writing as it was in ATG, so that's well done. The problem with the story is that the MC is too laid back for a cultivation novel, and though this makes him more level-headed and likable than Yun Che, Cultivation stories thrive on conflict. The Main character NEEDS to overcome great difficulties! Without random a**holes constantly antagonizing the MC the story isn't compelling unless you throw a lot of Slice of Life magical BS to explain the MC's cultivating process and the problems he needs to solve to progress. This story hand-waves all of the difficulties the MC has when he's cultivating away into the background. As a result the MC of the story is a level-headed OP bad-ass with no enemies that nevertheless conveniently powers up all the time. No conflict. No wow
I don't know if this fanfic is good or not, as I will be reading it at the moment, but just to confirm one thing, at least this fanfic is without a harem, right? If it is, I appreciate it, because I am tired of seeing a lot with wish fulfillment, and the intention is to read more about the history of the world even though I am not canon
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I enjoy reading this, especially when the MCs don't make harems___________________________________________honestly i'm bored with the harem genre
this is the best atg fanfic that I have found in this app... the mc isn't a retard who wants to fuk all females that he see so it's a win for me :v
It seems that the author likes married women with children :D _____________________________________________________________________________
5 stars in hopes it remains just Meng and Yufeng. Also because I enjoyed the novel, but mainly because I want there to be no harem.
*Cough Cough* Muy buena, no tengo mucho que decir. Pero de todos los fics que he leído sobre ATG es el que mas me ha gustado. La escritura, las ideas, y los desarrollos son muy buenos. También tiene esta pizca de, por ejemplo metiendo aspectos de Empereor Domination, o las habilidades y destrezas originales del prota. La idea de usar el Yin y Yang como cultivo principal, ciertamente no podemos decir que es la mas original del mundo o la primera, pero la manera en que la metió o la desarrollo ciertamente fue muy unica y original, ademas de muy buena. Ciertamente puedo decir que es la mejor de todas, ademas, el MC es por mucho de los mejores que he visto, ya sea actitud, moral, valores, ideales, individualidades y personalidad, todo sobre el es tan... unico y se sienta tan real y bien cuando lees a un personaje tranquilo como este de vez en cuando. En conclusion muy buena, la recomiendo totalmente
This is the best ATF fanfic novel I have read so far. Other fanfics are just about hating Yun Che, stealing his wives and doing what he would do in the orignal novel. There are no story development, no character development. They just paint the MC as Mr. Perfect.I dont get why some people want fanfics to follow the story plot. Its ok to follow the plot but atleast write your own orignal story also. Author you wrote by far the ATG fanfic 👍👍👍
I love this story there isn't much to say about it, for ONCE a MC who isn't interested in going after every goddamn hole attached to a pair of Tits he find. This MC feels more..."Adult" then the others. There is a system in the story but it's actually pretty forgettable after it gives the MC reward for a completed quest. The single romance doesn't bothers me at all, people who decide to not reading a story only based on the number of "women" (at this point, I would call them trophy's seeing some story having more than 1.000 wife's for 1 men!) are just childish.
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Spoiler de révélation Yo why u sucking on Yun Che's dong? You made the dragon get a little stronger than canon just to kill it off and give it to Yun Che. By doing so he will be stronger than his canon self cuz he has better quality Dragons meat and blood. Not to mention other plotholes like Mc being able to overpower an EMPEROR PROFOUND BEAST but not human pactitioners at True Profound to Earth Profound. Don't use that 'He poisoned the dragon' crap. Not only that, it seems like Yun Che also got the Pheonix legacy despite your MC going to the trial first! Like how? The mc already completed the trial shouldn't the pheonix trial be useless but then in the tournament it is implied Yun Che also has it?! Jasmine even points it out to Yun Che how Mc's spear has the fragment of the Pheonix they met! Bruv.... Then the romance... Bro okay I don't have anything against your choice but like. Why is the mc being such a pussy? Like why act like a shy dude when she just leans on him? He finds her attractive why not just admit it? He's acting like CHILD not someone who lived TWO LIVES. Well enough ranting... Its not perfect but it's an okay fanfic. Theres hella alot of plotholes but u get over them kinda quickly. I just got pissed at those little things since I like to spot errors and shit. I stopped reading somewhere around him taking the dragons trial. I'll wait till it reaches 90 or 100 chaps before I give it a hivher review. (Most of the time I give high ratings its just that I like me some atg shit.) It u get butthury u can delete this review if u want author-san.
Nothing much to say, I love it and can’t get enough of it. Always looking forward to a new chapter. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Nothing much to say, I love it and can’t get enough of it. Always looking forward to a new chapter. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I lost a lot of time on this. The author should have added the INCEL tag, the mc is a pathetic little s***t. ****************************************************************************************************************************************************