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Great read, would definetly recommend. Only issue i have is i catch up too easily and always wish there were more chapters to read.
You forgot Cultivation online, it's good to update it, but CO is also very nice [img=gift][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
"Cultivation Online has an interesting premise, blending VR with cultivation, which makes for a fresh take on the genre. The early chapters are engaging, and the game mechanics add a unique twist. However, the story sometimes leans too much on wish-fulfillment, and the pacing can feel uneven. If you enjoy lighthearted cultivation stories with an overpowered protagonist, it’s a fun read—but don’t expect deep character development or high-stakes tension."
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Overall, a nice novel. One of the first ones that I read, so there might be a little bias but it's quite fun and addictive to read.
well accurate and very thoughtful with strong insight value morally and ed.ucative well balanced
Really enjoyable to read. Still in early days chapters, and so far so good. There are some areas where word choice could be improved—- “bitter smiles” for almost everyone and “gunk”…. Reallly, please. Please choose any other word a medical professional might use. “Exudate”…or “discharge”, literally anything.
"Cultivation Online" by MyLittleBrother is an enthralling novel that seamlessly blends the captivating elements of cultivation with a unique and refreshing storyline. From the very first chapter, I was hooked by the richly detailed world-building and the dynamic characters that breathe life into every page. Overall, "Cultivation Online" is a must-read for fans of the cultivation genre. It is a masterfully crafted tale that combines excitement, emotion, and imagination. I eagerly look forward to each new chapter and can't wait to see where Yuan's journey will lead next. Honestly this novel really deserves an anime 😭
Plss update dual cultivation it's has been already a month and the waiting is exhausting 😭
I haven't read much out of this piece, but the first two chapter made me start wondering... Between you and the writer of Mythical Monster Evolution, who copied who?! Because why am I seeing the MC being a young man who was blind due to some occurrence and lying down paralyzed on hihis hospital bed, his sister getting him a game in the form of a helmet, etc... Why did this happen in both books? it's strange, man.
I think that this is a very good novel, although the beginning is very long, but after the first chapter, the plot went at a rapid pace . I like the direction in which the character develops . but most of all I don't like the fact that the main character doesn't use about twenty five percent of the pianos that fall on him
Hello, here is a fan of your works, I have a question about one of your novels that I like, and it is that I really liked the story and the characters and it has been 2 years without updating, I am talking about Magic System in a Parallel World, is this novel abandoned or will it continue to be published, this is my question as well as that of many other fans.
Love the story, characters and progress. Although it’s long and might take a while to read it’s worth it. It’s engaging and never boring. It builds on what we learn and has amazing flashbacks which are a nice interlude
Great read, would definetly recommend. Only issue i have is i catch up too easily and always wish there were more chapters to read.
You forgot Cultivation online, it's good to update it, but CO is also very nice [img=gift][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
"Cultivation Online has an interesting premise, blending VR with cultivation, which makes for a fresh take on the genre. The early chapters are engaging, and the game mechanics add a unique twist. However, the story sometimes leans too much on wish-fulfillment, and the pacing can feel uneven. If you enjoy lighthearted cultivation stories with an overpowered protagonist, it’s a fun read—but don’t expect deep character development or high-stakes tension."
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Overall, a nice novel. One of the first ones that I read, so there might be a little bias but it's quite fun and addictive to read.
well accurate and very thoughtful with strong insight value morally and ed.ucative well balanced
Really enjoyable to read. Still in early days chapters, and so far so good. There are some areas where word choice could be improved—- “bitter smiles” for almost everyone and “gunk”…. Reallly, please. Please choose any other word a medical professional might use. “Exudate”…or “discharge”, literally anything.
"Cultivation Online" by MyLittleBrother is an enthralling novel that seamlessly blends the captivating elements of cultivation with a unique and refreshing storyline. From the very first chapter, I was hooked by the richly detailed world-building and the dynamic characters that breathe life into every page. Overall, "Cultivation Online" is a must-read for fans of the cultivation genre. It is a masterfully crafted tale that combines excitement, emotion, and imagination. I eagerly look forward to each new chapter and can't wait to see where Yuan's journey will lead next. Honestly this novel really deserves an anime 😭
Plss update dual cultivation it's has been already a month and the waiting is exhausting 😭
I haven't read much out of this piece, but the first two chapter made me start wondering... Between you and the writer of Mythical Monster Evolution, who copied who?! Because why am I seeing the MC being a young man who was blind due to some occurrence and lying down paralyzed on hihis hospital bed, his sister getting him a game in the form of a helmet, etc... Why did this happen in both books? it's strange, man.
I think that this is a very good novel, although the beginning is very long, but after the first chapter, the plot went at a rapid pace . I like the direction in which the character develops . but most of all I don't like the fact that the main character doesn't use about twenty five percent of the pianos that fall on him
Hello, here is a fan of your works, I have a question about one of your novels that I like, and it is that I really liked the story and the characters and it has been 2 years without updating, I am talking about Magic System in a Parallel World, is this novel abandoned or will it continue to be published, this is my question as well as that of many other fans.
Love the story, characters and progress. Although it’s long and might take a while to read it’s worth it. It’s engaging and never boring. It builds on what we learn and has amazing flashbacks which are a nice interlude