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Will you ever continue this or is there another place to read this? It’s really good 😊
BRO! is It just me who notice what type of front cover the author was using.. In case you guys didnt know the one that the author was using was called.. My harem academia from Hent** fox and any other H doujin platform.
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Iam making this review as of May 29 2021 TOTAL CHAPTERS AS OF NOW:25 now..... Writing Quality - 4/5 author tends to suddenly change perspective from 1st PoV to 3rd POV and the quotations that hughlight dialogue can be misplaced aside the negative comments writing quality is 4/5 because in short.....his delivery makes the book engaging and not like how a unpassionate teacher discusses a boring topic so yeah. Story Development - Its just enough, time sskips are present but it is well done similar to other Fan fics to srt the ground for their OCs and the main contrubuting part here is the smut haha. Character Design - its a fan fic the only thing to note of is the author MC and i like it both his actions and thoughts. Other OCs are present but as of chapter 25 it makes it hard to describe other characters (not enough groundwork but still 5/5) Updating stability - authors updates as of noow is 1 chap every 4 day gap so every 5th day. Mind you this is actually pretty good BETTER even. And please if youre reading this pls support the author and dont stress the other authors to update fast. think of it as this the authors are the goose that lays golden eggs. us readers take care of it in exchange for said work (golden eggs) dont butcher mate thats stupid. World background - again people its a fan fic its so consistency to the canon. can be ignored and just enjoy. But objective criticism the world background is actually nice because of a certain twist.🤣🤣 TLDR: GOOD BOOK, ENJOY SOME GRAMMAR ERRORS AND DONT STRESS THE AUTHOT OUT BE CIVIL.
AUTOR-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DON'T LEAVE THE FANFICTION, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................
AUTOR-DONO NO DROPPED, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
not dropped autor-sama, please!!!!!!!!!! .........................................................................................................................
Was that last update a 1 time update........................................................................................................
this is ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................................................
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esperando mas capitulos , y tambien la aparicion de mitsuki y mas corromper a las madres de los personajes del canon xD. *********************************************
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ojala nunca dejes esta historia y la de "to love ru" son los dos mejores que los dejastes en la mejor parte , ojala algun dia actualizes de "to love ru" o soltar muchos capitulos y despues concentrarte en este y tu otra nueva historia.
As a reader, I like what this author was doing in the beginning. Then all his updates are about anything else but the novel. So I dropped it as I find it annoying that he's not focus on their story.
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damn you very bad, made a very interesting story to my penis, thanks and go on, don't ever drop this story .......(google fucking translate)
Its an a good story for now idk about future chapters but it will definitely be good chapters hopefully
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Will you ever continue this or is there another place to read this? It’s really good 😊
BRO! is It just me who notice what type of front cover the author was using.. In case you guys didnt know the one that the author was using was called.. My harem academia from Hent** fox and any other H doujin platform.
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Iam making this review as of May 29 2021 TOTAL CHAPTERS AS OF NOW:25 now..... Writing Quality - 4/5 author tends to suddenly change perspective from 1st PoV to 3rd POV and the quotations that hughlight dialogue can be misplaced aside the negative comments writing quality is 4/5 because in short.....his delivery makes the book engaging and not like how a unpassionate teacher discusses a boring topic so yeah. Story Development - Its just enough, time sskips are present but it is well done similar to other Fan fics to srt the ground for their OCs and the main contrubuting part here is the smut haha. Character Design - its a fan fic the only thing to note of is the author MC and i like it both his actions and thoughts. Other OCs are present but as of chapter 25 it makes it hard to describe other characters (not enough groundwork but still 5/5) Updating stability - authors updates as of noow is 1 chap every 4 day gap so every 5th day. Mind you this is actually pretty good BETTER even. And please if youre reading this pls support the author and dont stress the other authors to update fast. think of it as this the authors are the goose that lays golden eggs. us readers take care of it in exchange for said work (golden eggs) dont butcher mate thats stupid. World background - again people its a fan fic its so consistency to the canon. can be ignored and just enjoy. But objective criticism the world background is actually nice because of a certain twist.🤣🤣 TLDR: GOOD BOOK, ENJOY SOME GRAMMAR ERRORS AND DONT STRESS THE AUTHOT OUT BE CIVIL.
AUTOR-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DON'T LEAVE THE FANFICTION, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................
AUTOR-DONO NO DROPPED, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
not dropped autor-sama, please!!!!!!!!!! .........................................................................................................................
Was that last update a 1 time update........................................................................................................
this is ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................................................
MC 9/10 Story 9/10 ,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/
esperando mas capitulos , y tambien la aparicion de mitsuki y mas corromper a las madres de los personajes del canon xD. *********************************************
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ojala nunca dejes esta historia y la de "to love ru" son los dos mejores que los dejastes en la mejor parte , ojala algun dia actualizes de "to love ru" o soltar muchos capitulos y despues concentrarte en este y tu otra nueva historia.
As a reader, I like what this author was doing in the beginning. Then all his updates are about anything else but the novel. So I dropped it as I find it annoying that he's not focus on their story.
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damn you very bad, made a very interesting story to my penis, thanks and go on, don't ever drop this story .......(google fucking translate)
Its an a good story for now idk about future chapters but it will definitely be good chapters hopefully
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