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I was really looking foward to a tanky mage type book. But sadly this book is genuinely frustrating to read. within the first three chapters The word supernatural is used so many times you feel liking you are drowning in it. From the very beginning of The novel it feels as if your chasing up to even understand what is going on. It needs a prologue badly. It’s over explains content we dont really need and glosses over content that would be very much appreciated. Overall it was very disappointing and frustrating to read. It needs a prologue, an editor, and proper explanation. If you guys have a great deal of patience go for it. Hopefully it works out for you. But sadly I’m not going to read this. Take care.
This novel has a ton of potential that I would like to see fulfilled, the world building, the character building, and the magic systems are all very nicely done.
What Tanky you’re trash compared to Black Star Han Xiao the Legendary Virtual Tanky Mechanic that even God like entities Feared ........................................................
An interesting world and system. It feels like a unique take on steampunk and cultivation. While the steampunk side could come out more I'd definitely have to recommend this.
This novel is great and good read. The novel have a MC that have a good head on his shoulder which is very rare. However, this is just the 40 chapters released and it's uncertain whether it's going to be good or not especially with OP system. Very recommended and it get picked.
This novel is supernatural garbage. Why? Two words: supernatural and steampunk. The author regurgitates these words similar to the Niagra Falls. The words suoernaturally make this novel unreadable.
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This novel needs to be translated, I would surely encourage other people to vote for it so it has a chance. Also I hear coins are useful for that.
this was me the whole time, as far as I know there isn't another mage story like this. I tried to read MTL but as usual its confusing to me and hard to go from good quality translation to.....well y'all understand I'm sure.
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great read so far. hope the rest gets translated. definitely recommend that you give it a read............................................
I can't truly say for the updating stability since it's a trial read but I absolutely loved reading it and hope that it can continue to be this good.
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This one stands out in a good way, but you have to be a tad patient with it. The potential shows through clearly and I want to see where it goes from here.
This one is really good. I recommend giving it a try, but the first couple chapters are a bit slow so be patient. The world building is actually pretty solid, and the cheat and where the novel is going are very excellent. I want to see where it goes from here.
COINS!! Use your coins to vote for it!! It's the only decent novel on trial read with an interesting background and plenty of room to grow and places to go! I beg of you I am tired of reading garbage!!!
Sir, can I please have some more? Some more of this delicious novel? What's that? I need to spend coins to get more... but I don't have coins...
Why hasn't this one gotten picked yet? The potential is great in this beginning. His system is hilarious as it unlocks new functions, the author has a knack to writing fun situations, and showing the hints of a fascinating world. I want to read more, so please vote for it.
This is a superb introduction to a novel. It shows a tremendous amount of potential, and I hope it gets chosen so we can see it developed. Be sure to read past the first 5 chapters because the start is a little slow.
This is an excellent novel. I hope everyone can take the time and read through these first chapters. The first couple are slow, but it quickly improves and becomes a very strong foundation that I want to see fleshed out.
I have read this novel in MTL to end This novel is good!.....................................................................................................
Very nice startup, And a Tank Mage? Definitely new. Gotta read this! WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT
This is a very good start. I like the MC, and the other people. I like the system and I think that it has a lot of potental. I really hope that this story gets picked up!
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Great story 👏 , 😊 🙏.,.,,..,.,.,,..,.,.,,.,.,..,.,.,,.,,..,.,,..,.,.,,.,,,..,..,,.,..,...,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,,..,,.,..,.,,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,,.,.,,,.,.,..,,,..,,,,..,,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,,,,,.,.,,,.,.,.,,,..,.,,,,,.,,.,,.,..,,,,,
This is word vomit. The author puts supernatural in from of everything. It's used in almost evey sentence in the first 4 chapters. No explanation of the system, of how he got into school, how he affords his things. The author is also a fan if padding the word count by repeating everything, and having his characters go, "OMG, this is so amazing, a supernatural breathing style" 2d MC." I had high hopes for this, look else where if you want value for your time.
A Supernatural novel with a Supernatural Experience read to find out the Supernatural fun of Supernatural. Yours truly: Senior brother Supernatural
I read it and i liked it. Is there a way to vote for this one ? ............. ............... .............. ............. ............. .............
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Well i scrolleed down to find some criticism but all 4and5 stars no one is upset give it a try i will give it a try pretty much chill i hope that my addiction ends one day
I was really looking foward to a tanky mage type book. But sadly this book is genuinely frustrating to read. within the first three chapters The word supernatural is used so many times you feel liking you are drowning in it. From the very beginning of The novel it feels as if your chasing up to even understand what is going on. It needs a prologue badly. It’s over explains content we dont really need and glosses over content that would be very much appreciated. Overall it was very disappointing and frustrating to read. It needs a prologue, an editor, and proper explanation. If you guys have a great deal of patience go for it. Hopefully it works out for you. But sadly I’m not going to read this. Take care.
This novel has a ton of potential that I would like to see fulfilled, the world building, the character building, and the magic systems are all very nicely done.
What Tanky you’re trash compared to Black Star Han Xiao the Legendary Virtual Tanky Mechanic that even God like entities Feared ........................................................
An interesting world and system. It feels like a unique take on steampunk and cultivation. While the steampunk side could come out more I'd definitely have to recommend this.
This novel is great and good read. The novel have a MC that have a good head on his shoulder which is very rare. However, this is just the 40 chapters released and it's uncertain whether it's going to be good or not especially with OP system. Very recommended and it get picked.
This novel is supernatural garbage. Why? Two words: supernatural and steampunk. The author regurgitates these words similar to the Niagra Falls. The words suoernaturally make this novel unreadable.
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This novel needs to be translated, I would surely encourage other people to vote for it so it has a chance. Also I hear coins are useful for that.
this was me the whole time, as far as I know there isn't another mage story like this. I tried to read MTL but as usual its confusing to me and hard to go from good quality translation to.....well y'all understand I'm sure.
Spoiler de révélation great read so far. hope the rest gets translated. definitely recommend that you give it a read............................................
I can't truly say for the updating stability since it's a trial read but I absolutely loved reading it and hope that it can continue to be this good.
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This one stands out in a good way, but you have to be a tad patient with it. The potential shows through clearly and I want to see where it goes from here.
This one is really good. I recommend giving it a try, but the first couple chapters are a bit slow so be patient. The world building is actually pretty solid, and the cheat and where the novel is going are very excellent. I want to see where it goes from here.
COINS!! Use your coins to vote for it!! It's the only decent novel on trial read with an interesting background and plenty of room to grow and places to go! I beg of you I am tired of reading garbage!!!
Sir, can I please have some more? Some more of this delicious novel? What's that? I need to spend coins to get more... but I don't have coins...
Why hasn't this one gotten picked yet? The potential is great in this beginning. His system is hilarious as it unlocks new functions, the author has a knack to writing fun situations, and showing the hints of a fascinating world. I want to read more, so please vote for it.
This is a superb introduction to a novel. It shows a tremendous amount of potential, and I hope it gets chosen so we can see it developed. Be sure to read past the first 5 chapters because the start is a little slow.
This is an excellent novel. I hope everyone can take the time and read through these first chapters. The first couple are slow, but it quickly improves and becomes a very strong foundation that I want to see fleshed out.
I have read this novel in MTL to end This novel is good!.....................................................................................................
Very nice startup, And a Tank Mage? Definitely new. Gotta read this! WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT WORDCOUNT
This is a very good start. I like the MC, and the other people. I like the system and I think that it has a lot of potental. I really hope that this story gets picked up!
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Great story 👏 , 😊 🙏.,.,,..,.,.,,..,.,.,,.,.,..,.,.,,.,,..,.,,..,.,.,,.,,,..,..,,.,..,...,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,,..,,.,..,.,,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,,.,.,,,.,.,..,,,..,,,,..,,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,,,,,.,.,,,.,.,.,,,..,.,,,,,.,,.,,.,..,,,,,
This is word vomit. The author puts supernatural in from of everything. It's used in almost evey sentence in the first 4 chapters. No explanation of the system, of how he got into school, how he affords his things. The author is also a fan if padding the word count by repeating everything, and having his characters go, "OMG, this is so amazing, a supernatural breathing style" 2d MC." I had high hopes for this, look else where if you want value for your time.
A Supernatural novel with a Supernatural Experience read to find out the Supernatural fun of Supernatural. Yours truly: Senior brother Supernatural
I read it and i liked it. Is there a way to vote for this one ? ............. ............... .............. ............. ............. .............
worth reading;[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Spoiler de révélation
Well i scrolleed down to find some criticism but all 4and5 stars no one is upset give it a try i will give it a try pretty much chill i hope that my addiction ends one day