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Ultimate player
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Synopsis
It's story of my MC, being given some powers that allow him to copy(?????) abilities and assimilate them along with world travel.
Read more to see(?) him
Noice
Now, I don't want anyone complain and rant in the reviews, do whatever you wanna do in comments but reviews, be sure to be absolutely truthful to both yourself and to this FF.
And please read till atleast 10-12 chapters before review
Cause there is nothing worse than giving fake bad reviews.
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Just gonna give an honest review on my thoughts until this point, keep in mind I am only on chapter 5 when im dropping this and this review while explain why. Writing Quality: 3/5, there are many grammar mistakes, not enough to ruin the story but its just a little annoying to see them constantly, and i personally dont like first person pov, i find it makes things more awkward to read and write and doesnt convey everything as well, at least in my opinion. Updating Stability: 5/5, no idea, figured id give 5 stars cause i dont wanna mark it down if its great. Story Development: 3/5, right in the beginning MC gets thrown into a different world after being introduced to his abilities. we are given absolutely no explanation on MCs background and are immediately tossed into the plot. after MC goes into this world, he gets pretty overpowered really quickly and gets rich and profiecient in many things, but there is very very little explanation on how, like he gets rich and all we know is that he just hacked some accounts and stole money, and then used that money to buy stuff from the dark web, like way more than he should be able to buy with the money he had, and who knows how he got connections to the dark web in the first place. also, author apparently does no research on the things that MC is proficient in, like MC “heals” someone by duct taping their wound and giving them “medicines” and bam theyre healthy. Basically, its completely unrealistic. Character Design: 3/5, i generally like OP characters, but this one doesnt seem to have any personality or motivation whatsoever, and i think this ties back to the fact that we have no knowledge of his background, and he has no hopes to get back to his world or anything, its like his goal is to get OP but for literally no reason. As of chapter 5, there are no other important characters introduced. World Background: 4/5, so MC hops to dimensions of movies and tv shows, which to me sounds like a poor excuse for the author to not have to come up with original world building, however, the author does an ok job at explaining the world so far, so that even someone such as myself who has never watched the movies at least knows whats going on. Overall, pretty mediocre, i wouldnt really recommend, HOWEVER, do keep in mind that i only read until chapter 5 and it may turn worse or better in later chapters, so check it out for yourself.
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The story so far is good and one of the very few involving the John Wick verse, really appreciate it. Hope the author cover similar action packed movies for his story like Terminator, mad max, Matrix, bad boys and many more verse. Over all good job author.[img=recommend]
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When the Devil walks the Earth and finds his first love... evil shall be released.666.When the Devil walks the Earth and finds his first love... evil shall be released.666.When the Devil walks the Earth and finds his first love... evil shall be released.
The story development is good but can you remove the repetitive actions? Like I get that he's killing Nazis and taking card from scientists but its getting boring now. Can you like involve more of the plot and less grinding? And lastly, PLEASE UPDATE. Gonna ask you now, have you abandoned the story because it's already almost half a month since last update. Ciao!
There are a lot of words that someone can use to describe this novel. Good. Marvelous. Amazing. Delightful. Impressive. Interesting. Gorgeous. But I... I have the power to use one of the most powerful words in the human vocabulary, the powerful: NOICE
Please stick with the well known movies, not all of us can guess what movies does your fan fic takes place, better, you give an over view of the movies your using.
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Привет всем и как я удобно читатель советую всем посетить этот файлик так как он скучает интересные миры плюс со системой и главный герой не наивный не тупой он умный и находчивый сигны становится постепенно и здесь нету гарема да очень круто и поверь ему тоже нету романтики есть немножко комедии выключено полно так что советую всем прочитать этот шедевр.
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Ahhh eso estuvo muy bueno, supongo que fue rápido porque el mundo era un poco aburrido solo asesinos, pero estuvo muy bueno igual, en cuanto a no poner anime.... Mmm no se yo creo que si ferias hacerlo pero solo uno que otro solo como alguno que tenga algo interesante igual todavía hya mundos poderoso como marvel, juego de tronos, hay a muchos que no son anime,. Me gustaría que el próximo mundo fuera alguno donde obtengan poderes almenos xmen
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love it great concept and execution enjoying it loads so noice noice .,..................................... . ... ......................
Volume 1 : John Wick
- 1 Chapter-1 : Boooooomm!!! Powers 4 years ago
- 2 Chapter-2 : Being Noice to Myself 4 years ago
- 3 Chapter-3 : OMG!! It's........ 4 years ago
- 4 Chapter-4 : Being Noice to others 4 years ago
- 5 Chapter-5 : It seems that I_Am_Noice too 4 years ago
- 6 Chapter-6 : The Marker and the Oath, You abide by both 4 years ago
- 7 Chapter-7 : Excommunicado 4 years ago
- 8 Chapter-8 : Discussion between the kings and setting up the Board 4 years ago
- 9 Chapter-9 : Well, that was...... Anticlimactic?? 4 years ago
- 10 Chapter-10 : Changing the currents and the tides 4 years ago
- 11 Chapter-11 : The real hunt begins in night 4 years ago
- 12 Chapter-12 : For a Noice journey 4 years ago
Volume 2 : World War 2
- 13 Chapter-13 : Here we go again... 4 years ago
- 14 Chapter-14 : Ohh boy.... 4 years ago
- 15 Chapter-15 : It was this all along????? 4 years ago
- 16 Chapter-16 : The man with the flying pan... 4 years ago
- 17 Chapter-17 : Future plans and Geniuses 4 years ago
- 18 Chapter-18 : Preparation for grander scheme of things 4 years ago
- 19 Chapter-19 : The man, the myth, the legend himself... 4 years ago
- 20 Chapter-20 : This was the moment Bobby realised, he..... 4 years ago
- 21 Chapter-21 : Early Christmas!!! 4 years ago
- 22 Chapter-22 : The time, it keeps on moving 4 years ago
- 23 Chapter-23 : GM, I want to report a cheat!!!!! 3 years ago
- 24 Chapter-24 : This... is Awesome 3 years ago
- 25 Chapter-25 : Well, I guess I overdid it??? (please read alert) 3 years ago
- 26 Chapter-26 : Moving Wheels 3 years ago
- 27 Chapter-27 : I Hate Smort People 3 years ago
this shit is dope. its interesting, the power.. the story is too but its the MC's power thats interesting. I read 2 bks with the same power, both amazing but sadly dropped, hopefully this dosnt. The MC isnt annoying or that cringe, same with the dialogues,, so thats nice. overall the FF is pretty noice and if u enjoy interesting powers, you'll like it. power....basically steal abilities through cards