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LV 15 ![Badge]()
so far its kinda good but not really the chapters are to short to really convey anything and the author could use some help with their grammar
LV 1
It is honestly pretty good the first chapters are really short though and they don't convey much but the newer chapters are longer and fairly good and have me wanting to read more
LV 15 ![Badge]()
so far its kinda good but not really the chapters are to short to really convey anything and the author could use some help with their grammar
It is honestly pretty good the first chapters are really short though and they don't convey much but the newer chapters are longer and fairly good and have me wanting to read more