3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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writing quality is great story development. is STILL doing fine at the moment character design. still in the early stages. updating stability. still doing fine world background. still fine as I read this in the early stages of the book and it's only been chapter 3 so bear with me if in the future I'm wrong. final thoughts- so far it's good.
it has a good start but if she cane use magic Will bi awesome [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I have read all the chapters there is and all I can say is that, this novel is awesome. It is interesting and fun to read especially the interactions between the mc and her family members. So cute 😊
writing quality is great story development. is STILL doing fine at the moment character design. still in the early stages. updating stability. still doing fine world background. still fine as I read this in the early stages of the book and it's only been chapter 3 so bear with me if in the future I'm wrong. final thoughts- so far it's good.
it has a good start but if she cane use magic Will bi awesome [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I have read all the chapters there is and all I can say is that, this novel is awesome. It is interesting and fun to read especially the interactions between the mc and her family members. So cute 😊